OrliNElijahsGrl
A Proud Ringer
"The Crash"
The day was a typical day in flight, many people were flying out of Australia to go into the states, many going back to the states to visit family, some going for a purpose, and some just going to go, many of the passengers included in the flight was Charlie, Jack, Kate, Hurley, Locke, Sawyer, Syde, Shannon, Boone, Ashley just to name a few who were taking a flight to the states, them including many other passengers did not know what was in store for them once they aboarded the plane, when the flight seemed to be going very smooth, they entered turbulance, completely normal for a flight, but was not normal when there was a loud bang, and all of a sudden the passengers all feared for their lives as the plane started to go down at a amazing speed, many beepings were heard, followed by the screaming of many passengers, the oxygen masks were soon let go, and many of the passengers took them, breathing into them, the sounds of the plane going down were terrible, all the passengers had to do was to wait, wait to die, wait to live when the plane crashes, once the plane began falling, the creaks of the back end of the plane were soon heard, followed by the entire back of the plane ripping off, sending many passengers into the air, the air sucked many passengers out of their seats and out into the air, pretty soon, the front end of the plane ripped off, sending more passengers into the air, now the plane was in 3 pieces, falling very fast down in the sky, there was many screams heard, the passengers closed their eyes, scared of what was coming next, waiting for the never ending fall and the terror to end, and then all of a sudden a loud crash, as the plane finally hit ground, where they were, they did not know, everyone was in complete shock, the crash then followed by various cries and shouts, and then the plane began to flame, the passengers all struggle to get out of the plane, to find if many survived, who died, and where they ended up in this devastating crash.
I didnt know how else i could explain what was happening, the next chapters will be alot more detailing and deep, but...i might change around the beginning, what do u guys think?