KELLA! I updated my Lost story!!
heres chapter 2!!!
Chapter 2 "Stranded and Devastated Part 2"
Boone sat aside as he watched Jack take over in reviving the woman, his hands were shaking from fear, as he kept his eyes on the woman, hoping for her to wake up. No matter how afraid he was or how hurt he was, he wanted to help Jack out.
"Is there anything I can do?" Boone asked. "I want you to position yourself by her side, and I want you to do chest pushes when I say, can you do that?" Jack asked. "Yes I can do that" Boone said as he postioned himself beside the woman, he clamped his hands together and rested them on her chest, ready for Jack to tell him to do chest pushes. Jack laid his head by the womans mouth, feeling for any breathe that may be escaping her mouth, there was no luck.
"Come on! Come on!" Jack said, he soon began breathing into her mouth several of times, Boone sat watching, worried that the woman would not wake up. "Now Boone now!" Jack yelled. Boone postioned himself and began chest pushes, he pushed her chest five times, he stopped and looked at the woman, she still didnt wake up. Jack began to panick as he began breathing in her mouth again and callng out to Boone to do chest pushes, the woman was still unresponsive.
"Jack, we cannot let this woman die, she just cant die!" Boone said, tears now streaming down his face. "Thats why we can't give up Boone, we can't give up" Jack said. Jack put his head near the womans mouth again to feel for any breathe, there was still no breathing, he immediatly began breathing in her mouth again. Soon after about five breathes, the woman woke up coughing heavily, a sigh of relief came over Jack and Boone.
"Listen to me, take deep breathes, deep breathes" Jack said. All of a sudden there was a loud shriek which startled Jack, Jack looked around trying to find the person who was screaming, but there was so many people around, he could not find who it was.
"Help me! Help me!!" the voice screamed in panic. "Over there Jack look!!" Boone said pointing nearby. There was a girl who was trapped underneath plane wreckage with gashes all over her face and a large metal piece jabbing into her side, one false move, could pierce her skin. Jack rushed to the girls side along with Boone following him, he took a good look at the situation, a very large heavy piece of the planes wreckage had her pinned to the sandy ground, mostly laying on her back and her legs.
"Please you have to help me, please" the girl said. "I will as best as I can, please just remain calm, I will get others to help me lift up this large piece of wreckage off of you, but you have to stay absoulutly still for me, can you do that?" Jack asked the girl. "Yes, but please be careful, there is a sharp piece jabbing into my side" the girl said. "Okay, I will be careful" Jack said.
"Hey Hey hey! whats going on?" Charlie asked as he ran up to Jack. "Charlie, this isn't good for you with your head condition, there is a girl trapped underneath a large piece of wreckage" Jack explained. "No Jack, I want to help, screw my bloody head condition, I want to help" Charlie said. "Charlie, listen to me, don't think you have to be the hero, your hurt, you can't do this" Jack said. "Then what the bloody hell are you trying to be?" Charlie asked.
Jack paused for a moment, as if Charlies comment stunned him, he then looked at Boone who was ready to help out and then down at the helpless girl trapped under the wreckage who was screaming. "Let me help Jack, please" Charlie said with tears in his eyes. "Fine, you can help, you act as if you know this girl" Jack said. "I don't know her, but I just want to help" Charlie said. "Okay Okay! You and Boone are going to help me lift this wreckage off of this girl" Jack said. Boone and Charlie just shook there heads in agreement.
The three of them began lifting up the wreckage with all of their strength and the girl let out a shrieking cry as Jack collapsed to the ground holding his side which was hurting severly.
"Jack, your bleeding!" Charlie said pointing down to his bloody shirt. "I'm fine, we need to get this girl out from underneath this!" Jack said. "Your hurt Jack, let us get some others to help and you sit down and rest" Charlie said. "No Charlie I am fine!" Jack screamed. "Quit being bloody stubborn, your in pain, I can tell, let us get her out from under the wreckage!!!" Charlie screamed at Jack. Jack finally agreed and sat down, but it will killing him deep inside that he was not there helping them get the girl out, but he soon realized it was for the best considering his side was nearly numb from all the severe pain he was in.
"You two get over here, help us, we've got a girl trapped!!" Boone screamed at two people nearby. They quickly ran over joining Charlie and Boone and as Boone and the other two men lifted up the wreckage, Charlie pulled the girl out from underneath it carefully but at the same time quickly, the girl let out a loud scream as she was being pulled out, the sharp jagged piece that was sticking into her side was cutting her flesh.
"Be careful when pulling her out Charlie, there is a jagged piece of metal cutting into her skin!" Boone said. "Oh bloody hell! I..I'm sorry, I'll be careful" Charlie said. "Yes please be careful, we don't want her bleeding to death because of you" Jack said. Charlie glared at Jack and remained speechless, although he didn't show it, the comment Jack made affected Charlie in so many ways, he didn't want to be known as the screw up anymore, he dealt with it too much in his life, this was his moment, his moment to prove hes a much different person than he was before the crash.
Charlie carefully pulled out the girl as Boone and the two other men held up the wreckage, Charlie made extra sure the jagged piece wouldnt rip her skin anymore. After a few tugs and pulls, the girl was safetly out from underneath the wreckage from which she was in, but she suffered major gashes on her legs, her back, as well as her side, and she had a gash on her head but she was alive, and thats all that mattered to her.
"Thank you so much!" the girl said hugging Charlie before anyone else who helped out. "Your welcome...uh whats your name?" Charlie asked. "Ashley, my name is Ashley, yours?" she asked. "Charlie" he said. "Thank you Charlie" Ashley said giving him another hug. "Your welcome again, but I couldn't have done it without these guys help as well, perhaps you should thank them too" Charlie said.
"Thank you guys too, you guys saved my life" Ashley said hugging each and every one of them. "Your welcome" the guy said. "What are your names?" Ashley asked. "I'm Jack" Jack said smiling at her. "I'm Boone" Boone said. "I'm Steve" Steve said. "I'm Chris" Chris said. "Nice to meet you all, I tend to need to know the names of my rescuers" Ashley said smiling.
"Except for me, I nearly did anything" Jack said throwing a piece of sand. "You did the most Jack, you kept me calm, thats the best thing ever" she said giving him a little kiss on the cheek. Jack began to blush as Charlie started to make funny faces at him. "We need to get your wounds fixed up, if you will come with me, I will fix them up, having open wounds can cause infections and we need to stop the bleeding" Jack said. "Oh Jack, your so caring" Ashley said giggling. "I'm a doctor, so its my nature to take care of people with wounds, I have some stuff, it may not be enough, but I will try and fix you up" Jack said smiling.
"Ohh I'm sorry, I didn't know" Ashley said. "Its okay, then after I fix you up, I need to take care of this wound I have on my side, its causing me so much pain" Jack said looking at his side, his shirt was covered with so much more blood than before, perhaps from straining it while lifting the wreckage.
"I'm coming with you, to be by Ashley's side" Charlie said. "Charlie if I didn't know any better, I would of thought you were my little puppy, following me around, strange that I'm the person you wanted to save, and now you want to be by my side as I'm getting my wounds fixed, hmm" Ashley said smiling a bit. "Maybe he has a crush on you" Boone said laughing. "Man shut up I do not have a crush, I just want to make sure your alright" Charlie said. "Well thats very kind of you Charlie, but I am alright now, just getting my wounds fixed" Ashley said giggling. "But..." Charlie started to say, but he quickly lost his train of thought as he put his hand on his head and sat down.
"Are you okay?" Boone asked. "I'm alright, just..lightheaded." Charlie said. "Its from the gash on your head, your overdoing yourself, and it causes you to feel lightheaded, i suggest you relax, I'll take care of Ashley, you let me know if anyone needs my help" Jack said. Charlie remained silent as he layed down on the ground, the pain in his head was becoming worse. Jack and Boone dragged Ashley to a spot away from everyone else, as Jack reached into a bag and pulled out a needle with some string and a bottle of alcohol to wash the wounds.
*~End of Chapter~*
Chapter 3 will be called "Claire's Cry for Help"
WEEEE! I finally got the 2nd chapter written!!!! WOOOHOOO!!! im so happy! I might have the 3rd chapter written tomorrow and posted too, im having such a blast writing this! I hope you guys really like this chapter, its a bit gory, but i wanted to make it as realistic as possible! Ive gotten more and more ideas that has filled my mind, so im anxious to write them, so expect much more quicker updates to the story, im sorry it took me so long! Now that i have this story updated, now i have to update my frodo story!!!
I was having a hard time thinking up a title for the next chapter, so I had debated with the titles "The Explosion" and "Claires Cry for Help" and claires cry for help sounded real good, so i decided to use that one! woohoo!
I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE THIS CHAPTER! Please post me feedback!!!