Black Stealth

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Black Stealth

This is a story I was making up a character on www.heromachine.com. It's a dark story about a superhero named Black Stealth who can sink into Darkness. A little confusing, but you'll understand more as you go along. This is a prologue I just made up today.

What does the dark conceal?

Many people ask this question, children mostly. What exactly hides in the black? Monsters and faries? Demons and Angels?

It’s a good question, really. Nobody can see through black. Nobody can see through a complete darkness.

Except me.

Everyone, adults included, get a chill when they enter a darkness so complete, so real, that they question themselves if they exist in the black.

The answer is: they don’t.

The dark is a whole other world. A world where nobody feels safe. The dark is no one’s home.

Except mine.

Imagine this. Monsters and faries lurk in this darkness. But once the Light comes, they run. They hide. They disappear. They vanish. What if this was true? Then the question would be posed.

What does the dark conceal?

As far as anyone knows, the dark holds no secrets. As far as anyone knows, the dark tells no lies. What you see, or don’t see, is what you get.

Of course, that’s as far as anyone knows. I am beyond what anyone knows.

You ask yourself, what does the dark conceal?

I am the only one with the answer to this question.

The dark conceals me.

anyone???

dont make me beg

Good intro...lets see about the rest. I'm not a fan of first-person, though.

its pretty good... keep going

I like it. Like dark I'm not a big 1st-person person, but it's forming up well.

im interested keep going

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Thats what i think about your story!

Very good beginning. Please continue.

so wait stealth... is that supposed to mean bad or good?

maybe you should re-read what i said, god are you slow???? 🤨 🤨

okay.. bad but funny? or its so bad that its funny? u have people laughing....

Thats completley the opposite of what im saying here read this

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Sike hotsauce im just playin keep going. post more i like it. I also like the title alot it sounds so........ cool 😎

okay good... i was getting jus a bit confused...

Good. Keep going.