Crash Bandicoot: The Orgin!!! A big fic by a big fan.

Here is a link to crash bandicoot story i have been writing:
Plz tell me what u think i wud like sum feedbk plz!

Heres the link:
Crash: Orgin

Dancing Banana 💃 💃 💃 💃

hey wheres Nina? 😠

newbies get no credit.

You like Crash Bandicoot Ultimatespider? Whoo! Right on! And Nina might arrive, but give it time...
I've read it and it was pretty good but what's with the fowl swearing!? Crash Bandicoot with swearing? And I have fowl swearing, mild yeah but not fowl (even at times when I'm tempted to say them).

i got crash twinsanity for xbox and this is the sixth time we won the whole thing. my sis has wrath of cortex on gamecube, but its not that great.