poems

write ur own or tell the ones you love but try to not make them to to to long.

ill start....

I feel you in the wind
I touch you on the breeze
Yet, my love is but a sin
Heaven forgive me........
and the Devil take me.
by tasha mary

I'm going to learn how to wirte poetry. my teacher says chicks dig poetry

I have a few poems i've written. . . . the one of the bests ones is this one

In my imagination I see
Things that aren't really meant to be
With magic and wonder and surprises abound
Unicorns and Dragons can surly be found
With flowers so lovely they can't exists
For elegant birds their chirping presets
To the shore I am lead by the beautiful birds
From the golden sands the waves could be heard
Then back to my seat I open my eyes
To be listing to the teacher whose lessons I dispise

Are they supposed to be happy or depressed? All of mine are depressed...

This is part of a "freestyle" battle I was in here on KMC

I'm an ill MC, yo. dj 😐

You claim to be the son of Satan,
But he's all in your imagination, just like God,
Imaginary beings which scare you into believing the lies of your nation
Any fool with two eyes and an ear can see this
Your intellect is pathetic, I'd own you while takin' a piss
Hunt you down and lyrically murder you, like the Bolivians
Did to Che Guevara, I blow you into oblivion
The only b*tch here is you, so quit pretending
Like Dick Cheney and the lies he keeps defending
You can't touch the Darth, why even bother
Anyone can see that "SMOKE187, I am your father."

Cool, Nivek 😊

My poetry sucks, it's all crappy and depressing 😬

Well... so is mine, Silver. And it's mostly about suicide.

Originally posted by Silver Stardust
Cool, Nivek 😊

My poetry sucks, it's all crappy and depressing 😬

That's why I quit writing normal poetry and started doing hip-hop rhymes. It's way more fun, plus you can write about anything and make it sound good. Least for me it's more fun.

I wrote lyrics to a song... it was a spoof of country music, but one of my friends lost it on a trip to Georgia. 😐

It rocked.

My poetry's not really about suicide (well, not most of the time anyway)...but it still tends to be depressing. And sucky. I wrote a song once that wasn't half-bad but the notebook it was written in disappeared 🙁 And I'm just plain horrible at rhyming.

I like rhyming,
Though my poetry has terrible timing
In the hip-hop world, they call that "flow"
When I don't rhyme for a while, it really shows
😮

😂

There once was a man from Nantucket...

Okay, sorry...couldn't help myself there...😮

😂

roses are red
violets are blue
monkeys smell like bananas
and cows smell like poo

And I remember effing up all the Creed songs, even though I loved Creed... "The sun it shines, and the ground does not, I think I sqeezed the dog too tight."

Walked through the door
Fell to the floor
Opened up my eyes
And then I realized
That I couldn't see
What was in front of me
And now here I lie
Wondering, why?

😮 okay, I just totally made that up off the top of my head right now...

Watch as I try to make one up...

you felt like frozen ice
on the fingertips of night
I lie awake wondering
if you went toward the light
I knew you wouldn't stay
nobody ever would
so I killed them all as well
just because I could.

Eh, my poetry is horrible and depressing so I'll just post something I made in two minutes XD

Let the water fall from your fingertips.
Let the sun shine on your face.
Taste the sweet ocean air sitting on your lips.
Then fall on the cushioned ground
and feel the sand tie around your hips like a gentle lace.
In your Eden you shall forever be.
Happy but still a you shall have a frown.
For there is none but you to see
this happy place by the sea.

I actually am proud of my 15 second poem. I'm keeping it. 😛

😂 same here, I kinda like the little one I made up in under 30 seconds 😛

Here is one that is completely random...errrm and disturbing.

Celery is my secret lover
of that it is.
I will never let go of my celery
unless I take a wizz.
Even if I will wash my hands
and enjoy my celery
with some ham XD