everyone i'm sorry for swearing but you must see what a nuisance fvj is turning out to be. i mean if anyone wrote a story as good as jen has done you would think that people would be swarming up to thank her for devoting all her time to the story since i get it shes got very hard subjects and is in grade 12, but noo, some are just mean, mean and mean, oh and mathsC is also called pure maths in some other country!
look kvj it's just that it bothers u know if u make-up a story and there is someone that is always like oh no u can't put that o no etc. it's really annoying so i just tell you that if you don't like her or her story there r thounsends of other harry potter forums so go there and fid one that u do like.
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Originally posted by Senshi
everyone i'm sorry for swearing but you must see what a nuisance fvj is turning out to be. i mean if anyone wrote a story as good as jen has done you would think that people would be swarming up to thank her for devoting all her time to the story since i get it shes got very hard subjects and is in grade 12, but noo, some are just mean, mean and mean, oh and mathsC is also called pure maths in some other country!
Right pottermad you wanted some advice ok here it is: first up, try to add some humour in the story like a joke or something for some comic relief, most people doesn’t realize it but that’s what sets the HP books apart from the rest, next Harry doesn’t take any shit from anyone not since after well, the unusual event at the end of book 5. And whatever you do, don’t make Snape or aunt Petunia or uncle Vernon or Dudley softens up for Harry cause that’s like really disgusting man! The horror that they had inflicted upon him made virtually everyone fantasizing them to be eaten by a bunch of tigers and other such horrifying events, so people will be like sending you hate mails saying why have you done such despicable thing, and that’s about it. 😄
The rest of the summer past away in pretty much the same manner, and Sirius as was his custom started to suffer from his usual ‘fits of the sullen’ mood that Mrs Wealey had so skilfully dubbed. The only reason why Sirius is always in such a bad mood when they are leaving for Hogwarts is Harry-he is Sirius’s whole life, having stayed in the Azkaban for 13 years for something he hadn’t done and the loneliness of it made Sirius want for a company who has totally the same characteristics as he has, aka Harry.
Harry did not want to live him alone again so soon after nearly loosing him forever, and that clench in his stomach would become tighter and tighter as his departing day would draw nearer and nearer, he didn’t like the fact that he would have to wait for months and months just to talk to Sirius face to face.
However something very eventful happened the day before his departure. As he was scooping through his trunks, he suddenly cut his hands. Cursing he withdrew it and saw to his horror that a large piece of a broken mirror was sticking out of his index finger. But his horror was instantly turned into joy as he figured out what a broken piece of mirror would be doing in his trunk. It was the two-way mirror that Sirius had given him last year! How can he be so stupid as to forget about its mere existence! With this mirror he could converse with anyone of the Order and specially Sirius without being found by anyone nosy. His hands shaking with excitement, he carefully extracted all the mirror pieces and placed them on the floor. Then ignoring his bleeding hand he sat down beside it and put them together, he was then about to take out his wand and say ‘Repero’ but then he realized that he was not suppose to do magic out side school.
But this is the Order of the Phoenix headquarters, he thought, surely they have the most advanced spell installed in it that would help cover up any signs of magic!
But he wasn’t stupid enough to take up his chances. He carefully picked them up and headed for Sirius’ room.
Sirius’ excitement was soon turned into exasperation, as the broken mirror in front of him stubbornly remained, well broken.
‘Sirius I was just wandering if you could help me with this Alchemy theory-.’ Said Torch bursting into Sirius’s room and stoping seeing the expression on Harry and Sirius face.
‘What’s the matter, is everything ok?’
‘No, everything is not ok!’
‘What happened?’
‘This!’ said Harry pointing at the mirror.
‘Hey, wasn’t that the two way mirror that Sirius gave you last year? … Oh, right it’s broken.’
‘You bet it is.’ Muttered Sirius.
‘Oh, your doing it wrong!’
‘What?’
‘Your doing it wrong.’ Repeated Torch.
‘And what may I ask is the right way?’
‘Well, the mirror is magical isn’t it, so if you use the Repero spell in it, it clashes with its magical property and prevents the spell to work on it. What you need is my help.’
‘What are you on about?’
‘Simple, give me your hand Harry.’
‘Again?’
‘Yup!’
Torch grabbed hold of his hand and started muttering something, and this time Harry caught what she was saying-
‘Otuoys llet ret samym saod!’ then, ‘Go Harry!’
He did as he was told. Closing his eyes quickly he began to imagine the mirror piecing back together so that he will be able to maintain a communication with the others when he’s back at Hogwarts.
When he opened his eyes, he realized that Torch had let go of his hands and luckily she was still standing but a looked a bit out of breath, he was relived for that. She smiled and nodded at the mirror-it had joined together seamlessly!
‘So-now, there you have it!’ she said panting.
‘I-I don’t know what to say,’ said Harry ecstatic, ‘thank you-oh thank you so much! You don’t know what this means to me!’
‘No problem!’
‘So what did you wanted to know before all this happened?’
‘Oh, I think I’ve got the wrong version of Unusual Potions and their Properties. Have you got the new one?’
‘Yeah, sure,’ said Sirius handing her the book from beside his bedside table ‘here you go.’
‘Thanks!’
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Originally posted by Freddy_vs_Jason
Alright pottermad I have no choice but to report you now!! 😠
Originally posted by Freddy_vs_Jason
Thats not the point, you don't post stuff like that, I don't give a damn what you say, even though its a stiry its still in-appropriate, now keep it clean or else!!!!!Just be careful pottermad, you've only just registered, and the path you chose now may be the one you follow!
OK, first of all FvJ, if you were actually a person who Jenny held in any kind of regard I'm certain she would have listened to your first post, when pointing out how you would have written it. But, obviously, the way in which you barged into her thread, cussed her down, and proceeded to say that your way was better, well that was just ridiculous. I wouldn't take it from anyone, except perhaps a close friend or parent, and even then only because I have respect for people's opinions. When they don't shove their views down my throat that is.
You, my friend, are simply arrogant and rude. You are not a moderator, no matter how much you may think of yourself, so stop acting like one with all that "keep it clean" bullshit. If her story was truly inappropriate, do you really think our perfectly capable mods wouldn't have closed the thread already? You're insulting them just by giving your opinion, and you're irritating the hell out of Jenny.
And another thing, do you realise how long it must have taken her to write all of this out?? I don't think you do. She certainly doesn't write in the same style that I do, but that gives me absolutely no right to put her down, if anything it makes me appreciate her work more, for the fact that it's different. And, for the record mate, I prefer hers to yours, at least it's original.
Originally posted by Freddy_vs_Jason
For the last time I'm a girl, and your the one who needs to see a psychiatrist. Writing storys about boys getting hard-ons and searching porn on the net. If you want to write storys then fine, do that but keep them clean, and if you don't want to then this is not the place for storys like that!
And also, it's just her way of trying to relate her story to real life, if you want to be really shocked check out my Adult Version Of Harry Potter in the Unhosted Role Play forum. That'll make your knickers twist themselves up. Some people are so naive 😄