Always a good idea to ask for peer advice- good thinking.
As for Anger vs. Hatred- Hatred prevents you from taking Defensive Actions. The other players may have comments to make about that.
(Emotions always combines best with Strength from Pain)
(Which NONE of the Dark Siders use, for no apparent reason!)
I think I lacked Emotions, but in my new set-up, if all is correct, I've got Emotions - Fear...
Bane (Type E)
PHYSICAL
Strength = 5
Agility 5+1=6
Dexterity 5+2=7
Speed =6
MENTAL
Charisma 6+2=8
Intelligence 7+1=8
Willpower 7+1=8
Perception 6
FORCE 14
Force Attack: 13
Force Defense: 14
SKILLS
Lightsaber= 15
Combat +1+3=+4
Jedi Lore +7
Languages +5
Savoir-Faire +4
Intimidate +5
Medicine +1
Lying +2+1=+3
Observation +2
Law +0+1=+1
MERITS
3 Merits to Ties (Mecrossa Order)
FORCE POWERS (35)
ADEPT
THE KINETIC TREE
Push/Pull
Lift
Bash
Combat Push
Throw
Grip
THE AGILITY TREE
Jump
Master Jump
Dodge
THE MARTIAL TREE
Draw
Blur
Reaction - Push
Blow
Strike
Defend
Reflection
THE COSMIC FORCE TREE
Intuition
Dreams
Iron Will
Guidance
Revitalize
Foresight
Authority
Insight
Augury
THE LIVING FORCE TREE
Sense
Scan
Empathy
Leadership
Awe
THE DARK SIDE TREE
Manifest Destiny
Strength from Fear
Strength from Pain
Dark Emotions - Fear
BLADE TRICKS (2)
Carnival of Carnage Level 1
Ricochet Level 1
MASTER TRICKS (2)
Power of the Force Level 2
Well, as long as I'm better than everyone else in my group, Rand being an exception...
FORCE POWERS (21)
PHYSICAL
THE KINETIC TREE
Push/Pull
THE AGILITY TREE
Jump
Sidestep
Master Jump
Dodge
Fall
Defensive Leap
THE MARTIAL TREE
Draw
Blur
Blow
Strike
Combination
Sword Whirl
Twirl
Defend
Cleave
Reflection
THE COSMIC FORCE TREE
Intuition
Dreams
Iron Will
THE LIVING FORCE TREE
Sense
Scan
BLADE TRICKS (8)
Multiple Attacks Level 2
Total Cover Level 3
Carnival of Carnage Level 3
Corrected that issue, Ush, and swapped Evade for Combination.
So those are Gallador`s powers after some thinking:
Stage One: Scholarly(
Master Jump, Dodge, Blur, Dreams, Inner Calm, Foresight, Scan, Distract, Empathy, Leadership)
Stage Two:
The Living Force Tree:
Awe
Staredown
Entrancement
Persuade
Illusion
Bewilder
The Cosmic Force Tree:
Authority
Dark:
Manifest Destiny
Strenght From Fear
Strenght From Pain
Dark Emotions-Hatred
Obfuscate
Subterfuge
Corruption
Martial Tree:
Blow
Strike
How do you plan for my character to be introduced?
Light
Lorn Harbringer
Athlete
PHYSICAL
Strength 8
Agility 6
Dexterity 8
Speed 8
MENTAL
Charisma 8
Intelligence 5
Willpower 8
Perception 5
FORCE 12
Force Attack: 12
Force Defence: 13
SKILLS
Lightsabre= 13
Combat= 13
Guns= 13
Jedi Lore +3
Languages +2
Combat +3
Persuade +3
Intimidation +2
Merits: 3
-HIGHER PURPOSE
-MENTOR
-Ally (Ace)
Blade Tricks: 4
-RICOCHET (lvl3)
-CARNIVAL OF CARNAGE
Combat Tricks: 4
-CHANNEL
-THROW
-HOLD
-DISARM
Gun Tricks: 4
-EAGLE EYE (lvl4)
Force Training: (25)
Stage One: Physical
Stage Two:
-SABRE THROW
-SPEED
-SIDESTEP
-DISTRACT
-ELAN
-REACTION
-REFLECTION.
-FLYING CHARGE
-DEFENSIVE LEAP
-EVADE
is this alright?
Lorn Harbringer – Light – Athlete
Lorn was a rare find for the Jedi Temple. He had been brought up on the planet of ‘Hurricane,’ which lay far outside the outer rim. His parents were miners and they were mining a particularly rich asteroid when some rogue Valerians attacked them.
Their ship fired up its boosters as soon as they saw the hostile ships on their scanners and the family prepped the engines for hyperspace. Blaster fire from the pursuing Valerians made light work of the ship’s left booster and knocked it off course.
The Harbringer’s entered hyperspace with their battered ship, the Valerians in hot pursuit behind them. They arrived at a planet they hadn’t expected, Hurricane. One final blaster shot was sent towards them tearing up the nothingness between the Valerians and their ship. The shot came from a ‘Firespray’ of one of the Valerian trackers. As the shot hit, it tore into the hull of the ship and sent it careering towards the planets surface at an uncanny rate, cutting through the atmosphere and the various other layers before crashing into the planets craggy surface.
The Valerians saw little interest in following the family onto the planet’s unchartered surface. The Harbringer’s clambered out of the wreckage and fortunately the air was breathable. They surveyed the area in the immediate proximity and decided it best to set up camp and eventually a home as they saw it was impossible to leave the planet in the short term.
Years past and Lorn quickly reached the age of five. His body was lean, due to having to negotiate the uneven terrain on a daily basis. The family had been able to salvage some equipment to set up a modest home. Hurricane contained small pockets of hyper-fertile soil, which provided excellent areas for growing crops.
Later that year, a young jedi came to the planet in search of unique crystals for his lightsaber, to set him aside from the other jedi in the academy. His name was Mace Windu.
Luckily for the Harbringer’s and for Lorn, when Mace arrived back at the Temple, he relayed the family’s distress call and a transport was sent for them. They were eternally grateful to the Temple for returning them to their home on Coruscant. Their home, which resided in the upper levels, had been well maintained by the family droid, who performed most household chores and security.
Lorn’s father’s assets head been frozen as he like the rest of his family were presumed to be dead. The Temple sorted this matter out for them, using their authoritative power for the greater good. Lorn’s father offered some monetary sum to pay for the Temple’s troubles but they refused.
It was only a matter of months later when the Jedi voiced an interest in Lorn, saying that he had a relatively high midichlorian count. Lorn went with the jedi, he felt some grief when he left his family but this was soon dissipated when he started his training. Lorn had a lack in the ‘advanced’ force powers, but what he lacked in them he made up with his skill with a lightsaber.
OOC: Not the most terribly entertaining piece of literature, but I wrote it nevertheless.
Updated Xeth for your Episode II enjoyment...
PHYSICAL
Strength 6+1=7
Agility 6+1=7
Dexterity 6+2=8
Speed 8
MENTAL
Charisma 5+2=7
Intelligence 5+2=7
Willpower 7
Perception 5
FORCE 12
Force Attack: 12
Force Defense: 13
SKILLS
Lightsaber= 14
Combat= 13
Guns= 13
Jedi Lore +2+1=+3
Languages +2+1=+3
Intimidate +1+1=+2
Intrusion +1+1=+2
Observation +1+1=+2
Pilot +1
Heavy Weaponry +1
MERITS
1 Merit to Mentor (Numok Geth, Zabrak)
1 Merit to Contact (Gralus Turandi of the Taloraan Detective/Police Force)
1 Merit to Ally (Sun Rek, Geonasian Gunner & Handyman)
1 Merit to Starship
FORCE POWERS (23)
REBELLIOUS
THE KINETIC TREE
Push/Pull
Lift
Bash
Combat Push
THE AGILITY TREE
Jump
Sidestep
Master Jump
Defensive Leap
Flying Charge
Flip
Dodge
Fall
THE MARTIAL TREE
Draw
Blur
Reaction - Push/Pull
Sword Whirl
Speed
Blow
Strike
THE COSMIC FORCE TREE
Intuition
Dreams
THE LIVING FORCE TREE
Sense
Scan
BLADE TRICKS (4)
Carnival of Carnage Level 2
Agile Combatant Level 2
COMBAT TRICKS (4)
Channel
Parry
Twin Attack
Cut And Roll
GUN TRICKS (5)
Both Guns Blazing Level 2
Gunslinger Level 3
XP
26 XP to Increased Lightsaber Skill
4 XP to new Skill at +1 (Pilot)
4 XP to new Skill at +1 (Heavy Weaponry)