Harry Potter - for cheeky munkey

hello, i believe i've read most of this before, but i haven't been on this forum since the begining of june. i think i'd like to take a stab at this one.

There was a monent of complete silence. then they heard the slight whoosh sound and suddenly the firebolt was zooming though the air straight to Harry. just as it reached him Harry grabbed it out of the air and handed the broom to Hermione.
"her you go." Harry told Hermione, not able to hide his smile.
"thanks!" Hermione told him as she swong her leg over the broomstick.

pushing off the ground, Hermione flew into the air, going as faster then Harry had ever seen his broomstick go.
"Wow, she's amazing" Harry said, not relizing he said it aloud.
"Well, your a bit biased, don't you think?" Harry spun around and saw Ron.
"God Ron, you s-scared me!" Harry stuttered.
"Why? I've been standing here the whole time. I guess you were a bit distracted though." Ron answered, with a bit of a laugh.
"oh, shut up!" Harry said as he pushed Ron into the grass.

Just then they heard Hermione scream. Looking up, they see her falling to the ground, the firebolt zooming away.
"Hermione!" Harry screamed, but couldn't react in time. Hermione fell to the ground with a heavy thump.

Realizing that she wasn't moving, Ron and Harry race up to her, Harry kneeling down to see if she was okay.
"Well? is she okay?" Ron asked Harry, worring what happened to Hermione
"Yeah, she's just unconsious." Harry told him, releived.
"We better get her up to Madam Pomfrey, quickly!" Harry nodds in responce and picks Hermione up, gently tossing her over his back. together they hurried her to the hospital wing

I hope you all like that. 😮

its great!!!
where did you learn to write like that?

great job Zonko!

"What Happened?" asked Madam Pomphry (sp?) as they Hurried Hermione into the Hospital Wing
"She fell off of my brromstick." Harry replied with a worried tone in his voice.

Hermione stayed at the hospital wing for about a week and Harry stayed with her every last chance he got.

Draco even came to visit her but she didn't say a word to him.

on the last day of the hospital wing Hermione became aware that Harry had been with her the whole time. Before leaving she kissed him and It took Madam Pomphry to come and brake the two of them apart.

Originally posted by Hermione202
its great!!!
where did you learn to write like that?

School. and i did write a few storyies for my friends in 8th grade (this year). thank you for your lovely compiment. i think i might write some more...

At the hospital wing Ron and Harry were bringing Hermione back to the Griffindor common room. As they were walking down the hall Ron looked deep in thought.
"Whats on your mind, Ron?" Harry asked him.
"Well, i was just thinking...why did your broom fly off like that?" Harry was just as baffled as Ron.
"Maybe someone jinxed it" Hermione offered.
"yeah, but who would do that?" Ron asked.
"Someone that was mad at Hermione probably." Harry anwsered.
"But it was your fire bolt Harry, so they were most likly mad at you." Ron told him.
"But the question is, who?"

Harry racks his brain for someone who could hate himself or Hermonie, or even both of them. a sigle name popped into his mind...Malfoy
I]"You can't tell Hermonie what your thinking! It will just remind her of all the hurt he caused her."[/I] Harry yelled at himself for thinking of bringing him up. Instead he just said "Well, it could be anyone."
"that's what scares me" Hermonie whispers. Then with a peck on the cheek to Harry she goes up to the girl's dermitories.
"Harry, what are you thinking?" Ron asked. "I know you have an idea of who it is."
"It's Draco you moron!" Harry hissed

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i think i'll post some more...

"How could i not of thought of him!" Ron said, stunded at his stupidity. "lets get the slime-ball!"
"okay, i hope he is alone"

They walk down the hall and, by a chance of luck, they come apon Draco alone walking around. He seemed to be deep in thought. As Harry and Ron approuch him, they deside to forget the wands and just pound the snot out of him.
"we'll just have to jump on him before he has a chance to get to his wand." Harry whispers to Ron.
"Okay. on three...one ..two..THREE!" Draco turns around to see them leap into the air. He was caught ofguard as Ron slugs him in the nose.
"What do you think your doing!" Malfoy manages to say between the punches.
"You hurt Hermione...AGAIN!!" Harry sceamed.

"POTTER?WEASLEY? What on Earth are you doing?" Mrs. McGonagal (sp?) Stormed.
Ron and Harry Immediately jumped off of Malfoy and looked at what they had accomplished. Malfoy had a huge gash at his lip which was bleeding quite severely and they had managed quite alot of red marks that would soon turn to bruises.
"I am ashamed at the serious of this action! Dueling in the cooridors! and Muggle Dueling none the less! 50 points from Gryffindor, from each of you."

Growning, Malfoy struggles to his feet. "Malfoy, you sould go see Madam Pomfrey. You are a mess. Potter, Wesley, get up to your dormitories...i'll see about your detentoin later."
"And just when i thought that we would get off the hook." Ron whispers to Harry.

They go into the common room, and sit down with Dean.
"Where have you two been?" Dean asked as they come in.
"Beating up Malfoy." Harry says coolly.
"Awsome! guess he'll have trouble finding that snitch in the Match on Friday." Dean says excitedlly.
"The Game! i forgot all about it!" Harry and Ron say in unison.

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I'll post more 2morrow.
i'm goiing to sleep now it's 1 AM.

"How could you forget? You ARE the captain." Seamus says to Harry.
"Well, i've been busy..."
"With your girlfriend?" Dean looks at him with discust.
"What! okay, i guess the tryouts can be tomorrow at practise..."
"which you missed, i should say, mr. captain." Seamus says.
"opps..." harry turns pink."just tell everyone the tryouts are tomorrow, okay?" harry calls back as he slumps off to bed.
***

the next day at breakfast all the Griffindors trying out for the quiddich hardly touched their food because of anxiety. just as Harry, Ron and Hermione got up to leave for their first class, Malfoy walks up to them.
"Potter, i swear i'll pay you back for this!" Hermione stiffles a giggle as they leave the dinning hall.
"Did you see his face? it was hilarious!" now out of range of Draco, she starts laughing histarically.

****
before they knew it it was time for pratise.
"i hope we get a good show out here today." Ron says as he breathes in the fresh air.
"Hey guys" Hermione says as she walks behind them, scaring them i should add.
"Hermione...you're trying out?" Harry asks in spite of himself.
"Well, why not! don't you think i would be good?!"
"i'm sure you'll be the best...uhh...what are you trying out for?" Harry asked.
"Chaser" Hermione says as she rolls her eyes.
"Right, then the best chaser out there." Harry says kissing her softly on the cheek.
"Well, thats not fair...she's the captain's girlfriend" Dean says laughing.
"Do i have an in, being your best friend's sister?" Ginny asks.
"NO ONE has an in! it will be on talent alone!" Harry sceams at them.
"chill Harry, we were just messing with your head." Seamus says as they all begin to laugh.
"okay go with the other peole who are trying out." Harry said not laughing at their jokes.
"Hey Harry guess what." Ginny said after the others left.
"What is it Ginny?" Harry said bored.
"we've go a third year trying out."
"Soo.." Harry said with no gained interest in the subject.
"His name is Brad...Zonko." Ginny said smiling. Harry and Ron drop their jaws in amazment.
"You mean...the heir of Zonko's joke shop?" Ron sputters. "How could we not have noticed him before?"
"Maybe it's because Harry was hoging up the spotlight." Ginny giggles.

Shut Up! Okay i'll take the people trying out for chaser over on that side of the field...Ron, you can take the Beaters over there and take out one bludger for them to practice on? Okdy an Ginny...can you be Keeper for the chasers to practise with?" Harry asked.
"But i need to try out for chaser! i need to try out too you know." Ginny complained.
"Okay, well, i'll make sure theres time for you to tryout near the end....though with you bveing good enough to be seeker last year i'm sure you'll be exellent." Harry said as he got on his broomstick and called out, "everyone trying out for chaser, follow me." and he zoomed away on his broom. Geting over there, he organizes all of the chasers into a single line to go one on one with Ginny. "Okay, first up, Hermione Granger." taking the quaffle, hermione shot up into the air and faked left, then faked right cause Ginny was still on her, swooped above Ginnys head and threw the Quaffle into the hoop before Ginny could stop her. "Okay good job, Hermione...Next is...
***
After a half hour of working with the chasers Harry was finally on the last one. Ron was the keeper now because one of the Bludgers escaped and hit Ginny off her broom. she only got a scrape, but Harry wasn't going to take any chances(Don't worry, she got to try out and did marvalous). "Okay, lastlly is...Brad Zonko. Okay, lets see what you got, Brad." Harry called out. Brad jumped onto his broom, sweep smoothly into the air, took a look at where Ron was positoined, and shot down to the ground, quickly puling up when he went 10 feet, shot back up doged over top the left to avoid Ron and threw the Quaffle into the far left post. " Very good Very good...okay you can all go now i'll be posting who got on tomorrow in the common room.any questions? Okay then i sugest that you all go and get some sleep...cause we booked a practice for tomorrow and those who made the team are going to have to play there hardest."

i think having Ginny fall off her broom was a nice touch, lol! i'll post a bit more now...

Harry, Ron, and Hermione went back to the Common room after practise to do some homework.
"Hey Hermione, can you check over my essay for Proffessor Flitwick (sp?) for me?" Ron asked handing over a parchment covered with crosses and lines.
"I'm busy at the moment Ron..." Hermione answers harshly.
"Okay, geeze Hermione! Don't get all snippy." Ron answers in return.

that was great Zonko! i'll add some to it...

"that's it! i'm sick of you desterbing me while i'm doing my homework!"
Hermione yells at him. Then she storms off to the girl's dormitories.
"What was that about?" Ron asks. "I only wanted her to check over my essay."
"She's probablly just worried about not making the team. Sometimes you just don't see clearly" Harry answered him.
"It's not my falt that i don't speak their language." Ron says in defence.
"Well, that's true." Harry says laughing.

***
early the next morning Harry gets up to put up the results for quidith team tryouts. As he pins it to the boliton board Dean walks in.
"Moorning...Harry." Dean says yawning. Then he looks up and sees the results. "alright! i'm gonna be the first to look at it!" he yells as he runs over to the board.
Harry hears a slight rumble getting louder, and louder. And then a mad rush of Quidith players come trampling down the stairs into the common room.
"AHH!!" Dean ad Hary yell as they jump out of the way.
Harry watches the peolpe (now from afar) as they scramble to see if they made it, or not. He sees some peole walk out of the mob triufant, like Ginny and Hermione who slaped high-fives because they were two of the new chasers.
"Hey Harry, thanks for having Dean and i Beaters." Seamus says thankfully.
"You didn't really have that much competion (sp) there." Harry says dully.
"Well thanks anyway!" Dean says laughing.
Harry looks up to see were his last chaser was. Then he sees Zonko start to walk over to him.
"Thanks for letting me be on the team, Harry." Zonko says happilly.
"Well you did get the quaffall past Ron." Harry said.

"So this is the team" Harry thought. "Hermione, Ginny, and Brad Zonko as chasers. Dean and Seamus as beaters. Ron as Keeper, and himself as seeker." "this is going to be a good year." He thought happilly.

i hope everyone is okay with these peole for the team....Potter_luver, Zonko, and I were descusing who should make it last night....so i hope that the rest of you are good with it! 😄

isn't any one else gonna post?

Originally posted by Zonko_13
isn't any one else gonna post?

Yeah, it seems like only Zonko and I are posting today....I want to read someone eles ideas....Please.