The Haiku Game

(btw: You can pich the next topic😉)

erm....grass

As green as the Gunk,
Is churns in the four stomachs.
Waiting to be used

Er...?

i'll just read these😉

*pokes*

New topic:

Sleep!

Anyone...?
cry

what i always like
every starry moonlit night
is heavy eye shut

Yeah, I know I'm good! 😂

Originally posted by Raz
what i always like
every starry moonlit night
is heavy eye shut

Yeah, I know I'm good! 😂

Second line has 8 syllables smartass

Closed them so tightly
Squeezed as if in deep slumber
Still, the bear, it knew.....

ev-ery star-ry moon-lit night

ev-er-y.... pronounce it aloud....

Nope, its 2.

See a dictionary pronunciation (eve·ry) - http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=every

But if you say it aloud, it sounds wrong like that cry I'm doing Eng Language, I know I'm wrong. But I prefer it as three.....

😂

I got it as three sylabbles too!!

Damn Raz! 😛

ev ~ er ~ y 😛

darkness comes slowly,
dipping above the skyline.
eyes, limbs, heart heavy.

and btw, here in England (where English was invented) we say "evry"... two syllables... just as "cholmondoley" has only two syllables... its the pronunciation that counts in haiku, not the spelling...

English people know
How you're supposed to drink tea
pinkies out, proper

wait, i got poked and i didn't know it 😱

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Originally posted by D-Double
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whats that supposed to me? 😖hifty:

😛