i love ur story
hey spidergrl......i lovd ur story story.....when you get back weve gatta talk.........anyway you should add a dueling scene with draco and harry potter.........when you get back we should help each other out.......i have loads of ideas.....well ill see you in a month......love ur story and ur enthousiasm.....well gatta go.......bye!!!!!
Ps......you should make harry get hermione and ron on the quidditch team.......luv u(as a friend....)......BYE!!!!!!