Alana's rhymes/poetry

Yeah. Was inspired to start this after I wrote a kick-ass rhyme in the Rhyming Cult thread in the OTF...I think I'll start collecting the ones I come up with that are good in here.

First one I wrote, about a month ago...it's pretty short. But I like it.

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Walked through the door
Fell to the floor
Opened up my eyes
And then I realized
That I couldn't see
What was in front of me
And now here I lie
Wondering, why?

The one I came up with for the Rhyming Cult, very RATM style I think...I like it a lot, I think it turned out really good. This is the reason I'm going to continue writing rhymes.

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Watch out, here I come, get outta the way
If you don't look out I'm gonna make you pay
So what if you think that I'm only a girl
Time for you to get out and see the real world
I know who I am, I know what I can do
And if you don't like it then I say **** you
You're all just mindless non-thinking drones
Don't think for yourself may as well be clones
Time to get out, time to rebel
Time to stop taking what they have to sell
May as well be a sheep led to the slaughter
Tryin' to save yourself you give them your daughter
Get out of this mindset learn to think for yourself
Open up your mind with the key off that shelf
The one that says this way to freedom
But beware there'll always be some
Who'll say that people always need to be lead
Don't realize one day they'll end up dead
Run down by us who're sick of it
Don't want to deal with this spineless shit
So what I have to say is throw your fist in the air
Stand up shout out take a risk take a dare.