Elanna Riddle
Fanfiction Author
HEY GUYS i wrote more of the script.
I want you opion on it.
(Sunrising, two figure creep out of Del)
Lief and Barda, walk down a dirt path, in the country-side, sun is up high in the sky and Del is in the distance, behind them.
They near the forest edge.
Barda – The Wenn Del path should be around here somewhere.
Lief looks around the surroundings, he pulls back some vines hanging from a nearby cluster of trees.
A path is now visable.
Barda turns around, and see the path. Ignoring the fact Lief found it.
Barda –This should save us a day and ahalf, at the least. But mabye we should take a safer path.
Barda glances at Lief.
Lief, gets slightly annoyed – We should take a short cut, when it presents its self, besides, it can’t be more dangerous then the road, can it?
Lief starts to walk down tha path.
Barda shruggs and follows.
After they are well into the path, red-eyes pear threw the folliage at them.
The pair quicken their pace.
Lief puts his hand on his sword.
Barda says quietly– Be wary, and look foreward, don’t attack unless they do.
Lief nodds, and keeps walking.
A loud pirceing humming starts to echo therw the forest.
Lief and Barda start to run, covering their ears.
They fall to the ground
(Screen blacks out)
Lief is lying on a pile of leaves, unable to move, Barda is not too far away from him.
Lief groans –What happened?
Barda –The creatures, stung us like wasps sting caterpillars, they have paralysed us, so that we are still alive, soon they will return and feast. I’m sorry Lief, I have led you to your death.
Lief- We aren’t dead yet, where do you think we are?
Barda –Most likely in the Forests of Silence.
Lief, looks confused and fearfull –But why bring us here, so far from their home?
Jasmine’s voice- Because you are to be an offering to their God, the Wenabarr. It will arrive when the sun goes down.
(From Lief’s POV)
Jasmine’s face appears staring down at him.
Lief blinks, twice.
Jasmine, taking Lief’s cloak- This will do nicely for the Nest Filli, good thing we came by or it would have been spoiled.
Filli chatters on Jasmine’s shoulder.
whacha think?