Should Deltora Quest become a Movie

Started by Barda Blob164 pages

ok i guess ill just post my book without an answer. u got 4 hours to say yes or no! hey wen u get to ur destination after the 12h car ride i hope u have fun on vacation cuz im on vacation too and i no wat it feals like to live in a car, wen we drive here it takes 14-17 hours if we go non-stop. IT SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u got 1 hour left untill i automatically post it.

nah i wont i dont wanna type and my book sucks. hey u guys should c this picture i drew its the best one ive ever drawn!!!!
idk if u guys would like it. tell me wat happens in the end of SotS plz and i no one thing.... leif has a baby with jasmine????? well ima go watch cartoons cuz theres nothin else to do. dont have my xbox or high speed computer....*sniff sniff* i dont have my guitar, just my dads.... and im more bored then ever.... *sniff sniff* well bye guys and hi bugs bunny.

i play runescape ok wat r all your names on runescape o yah im thinkin about makin my own story its all about prophesies and myths legends monsters only thing is is im not a very good writer so i might need your guyses help if youll give it to me of course. and why hasent anyone answered my question does anyone like transformers.

who likes final fantasy say i

and i want to know wat yall got for easter

HIII
Its the 2nd last week of term, here, so i've bee rushing to finsh all my homework before school finishes.

Firstly,
I got, a choco bunny, and two biblies, 3 packets of eggs to share with my bro and sis, a box of Celerbrations, a large pack of salt'n'viniger chips, chezels and redskins, as well as three DVDs.
My bro and sis got a choco bunny and biblies too.
And my Nana got all the non-choclate stuff,as she thought we'd have enough chcoolate.
And we get DVDs cause my dad's alergic to Dairy products, so he can't eat chocolate. 🙁

Secondly, since i have PC in my room i hardly watch TV anymore, i play sims2 and go on the net.
BTW did you know there is a DQ board game!
Can't remember what it was called but it's basically a triva/ snakes and latters sort of game.

ill help u with ur book! im smart. i dont like trransformers and i dont really know much about final fantasy, i have ff7 but im not far.i got money and candy for easter.

cooool duuuude
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so i can help u? ill give u some ideas for character names if u want

i've got the DQ board game! i think i got it for Xmas the year before last.

as far as easter goes, my sister n me got the Moulin Rouge soundtracks + sum chocolate. i managed to get sick and the only brightside of that was missing out on church to stay home n watch Star Wars instead lol

is the dq board game fun? wuts moulin rouge?

i no a good plot for the book.... maybe... ok the characters are in their teens when the evil lord attacks the world and their frend gets captured and taken to the evil lord and they begin a big old quest to find it and they get wanted somehow by a group of theives/mercs and get chased by them and they go through an elf forest and go to the elf town and then the elf king helps them by giving them each their own special sword like blue for water red for fire green for grass purple for haze white for air and the mercs and theives attack the elves and the heroes escape in the nik of time and they fight their way through the dreaded wastelands to the evil lord's castle and they get to the evil lords room to kill him but the evil lord turns around after looking at a map of the world ware his territory is and wen he turns around they look at his face and it is their old frend (he/her/both) and they have a great battle against themselves and the evil lords heroes and then they kill the evil lords heroes and try to get him/her/both to surrender but he/she/both castes his/her/both's greatest spells but the magical swords obsorve the power and caste it back and they shoot it back and the evil lord gets shot into the pits of fire ware he burns for eternity and te castle starts to crumble and they try to escape but wen they get outside the leader of the theives and mercs is waiting with 100 warriors and he tell them that its not to late to surrender their weapons and go to their prison without getting killed but he gets cut off as an arrow peirces his forehead from behind and he falls to his knees then face plants to reveal the army of elves behind him.

wow that was long one sentence ya notice? well tell me how u like it cya later

wow thats good but i was thinking of something more like this

six old heroes hear news that the dark lord is back but the thing is they cant fight because there to old so one of them suggest that they train there children to fight and send them to destroy the darkness that poisons there land so they train there children and actually find out that there children are exactly like them in battle so they pack there things and head-out on there journey to kill the dark lord and free there land

so tell me if you like it and if u dont go to hell!!!!!

It sounds good......if you need plots for other things ask.....i practice certain plots on HPFanFic.com.

The next generation of fighters sound good, but is this an actual story your writting or is it a fanfic.....
If its a fanfic, i can help out alot....
If its not.......i can still help
Just don't ask me to spell
I stink at spelling
And i'm in the Advanced English class in yr10, LOL

its an actual story and this is gonna sound so stupid can any of you give me advice on girls (u know how to get them to be your gf)
😮 😮 😮 😮

I'M BACK from where I went!!!!!!!!!

yay!!!!!!!!! while u were gone i modified my acount and wrote a one sentence book. ya have fun?

no,I didn't have fun, I got lost on a ship and it was creepy.

Okay lief2345....... even though I AM a girl, I'm not exactly sure on how to get one to be your girlfriend (as i've never had to do that and probally never will 😛 )
I'm going to warn you my advice may not be the best thing, so don't just jump on it and use it.
As i said i'm novice for this.

Here's some points you need to consider.

1. Try and befriend the girl (see what shes like first, cause you don't want to go out with a total b****, trust me i've seen it happen to nice guys)

2. My bro suggested this: Be yourself, and if she doesnt take you for who you are, then its not worth it. Also, dont get too friendly with the girl, or when you do ask her out the usual repsonse will be "No. I think of you as too much of a friend."

(This only sometimes happens, i was friends with a guy for 2-3 years and were going out.)

Thats all i can think of at the moment, i suggest my Bro's "Be yourself thing" cause pretending only works for a little while.
As a girl, myself, i feel i need to be able to trust a person before i get into a relationship.

Oh don't feel embarresed about asking this sort of thing......we all go threw it
Heck it took me three years to ask my mum what it felt like to have a crush........but then i'm weird 😛

Good Luck 😄

HEY GUYS i wrote more of the script.
I want you opion on it.

(Sunrising, two figure creep out of Del)

Lief and Barda, walk down a dirt path, in the country-side, sun is up high in the sky and Del is in the distance, behind them.
They near the forest edge.
Barda – The Wenn Del path should be around here somewhere.
Lief looks around the surroundings, he pulls back some vines hanging from a nearby cluster of trees.
A path is now visable.
Barda turns around, and see the path. Ignoring the fact Lief found it.
Barda –This should save us a day and ahalf, at the least. But mabye we should take a safer path.
Barda glances at Lief.
Lief, gets slightly annoyed – We should take a short cut, when it presents its self, besides, it can’t be more dangerous then the road, can it?
Lief starts to walk down tha path.
Barda shruggs and follows.
After they are well into the path, red-eyes pear threw the folliage at them.
The pair quicken their pace.
Lief puts his hand on his sword.
Barda says quietly– Be wary, and look foreward, don’t attack unless they do.
Lief nodds, and keeps walking.
A loud pirceing humming starts to echo therw the forest.
Lief and Barda start to run, covering their ears.
They fall to the ground
(Screen blacks out)

Lief is lying on a pile of leaves, unable to move, Barda is not too far away from him.
Lief groans –What happened?
Barda –The creatures, stung us like wasps sting caterpillars, they have paralysed us, so that we are still alive, soon they will return and feast. I’m sorry Lief, I have led you to your death.
Lief- We aren’t dead yet, where do you think we are?
Barda –Most likely in the Forests of Silence.
Lief, looks confused and fearfull –But why bring us here, so far from their home?
Jasmine’s voice- Because you are to be an offering to their God, the Wenabarr. It will arrive when the sun goes down.
(From Lief’s POV)
Jasmine’s face appears staring down at him.
Lief blinks, twice.
Jasmine, taking Lief’s cloak- This will do nicely for the Nest Filli, good thing we came by or it would have been spoiled.
Filli chatters on Jasmine’s shoulder.

whacha think?

That's good. R u just writing this too write it or r u gonna send it in too someone to see if they like it? 🐰

well one thing all the girls in my school already know me for who i am
and im friendly to all the girls no matter if i like them or not maybe it would work when i go to junior high