Fan Script Sneaks
Who can write the best action script for a fight scene in Episode III you can write the whole part or just a portion this is just for fun and ideas. like
36. INT. INVISIBLE HAND - CORRIDOR
SUPPER BATTLE DROIDS exit from the slide door they turn
and spot ANAKIN and OBI-WAN running up the hall. The droids
open fire on the two Jedi. ANAKIN spins around and ignites his
lightsaber using great skills he deflects the shots.....
plese post!
INT. PALPATINE EXECTIVE OFFICE
DARTH SIDIOUS lashes at MACE, pushing him in
defense. MACE strikes back but SIDIOUS parries
the blow and spins around putting deadly force on
the attack, MACE stagers from the hit. SIDIOUS
takes the advantage and extends his hand, crystal
blue lightning shoots out from the tips of his fingers
MACE is thrown across the room, crashing with the
wall.
SIDIOUS
Foolish Jedi do you really think you can beat me
Okay I've got another
125. EXT. SENATE ROTUNDA
YODA fliped over the pillar SIDIOUS angrily swung his
lightsaber at the aged Jedi but YODA was two quick, landing
on a clearing he raised his hand just in time to block a
deadly stream of lightning. SIDIOUS jumped in a flash
of eye and landed a few feet from YODA he pursed the attack
EXT. MUSTAFUR
Anakin hangs limply by the side of the volacano as Obi Wan tries to get some sense into him
Obi: Anakin, it doesnt have to be like this. come back to the jedi order or you will die
Anakin: NEVER
Obi: please! dont do this
Anakin: I will never return with you!!!!
Obi: then....then i have no choice
Obi wan ignites his lightsaber blade and bends down and cuts off anakins arms. Anakin falls into the volcano base screaming and is consumed by molten Lava. however anakin has tapped into the dark side to stop his damged body breaking away and to keep himself barely alive. Tears sit on obi wans eyes as he walks off toward the hanger...
INT. The duel
Anakin continues his attack on Obi-wan. Obi-wan manages to back
Anakin off with a force push and begins pleading with Anakin.
Obi-wan: "Anakin, I order you to back down! search your feelings, let go of your hate"
Anakin: "My Hate is my alley now"
Obi-wan: " You are a Jedi!"
Anakin: (Anakin dis-ignites his light-saber) "You are mistaken I am no longer a Jedi, (Anakin throws his light-saber at Obi-wan's feet, and pulls out his red light-saber) my new master will show me the true nature of the force"
(Obi-wan has a shocked, and displeased look on his face)
Obi-wan:"I'm sorry Anakin, but I must bring you down"
Anakin: (Anakin gives an evil grin as his hate increases to an ultimate high transforming his eyes to yellow as Anakin leaps towards Obi-wan) "Aaahhh"
INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE - SPIRES
MACE WINDU lays mortally wounded at the bottom of
a flight stairs, his left shoulder is marked with a deep
gash, he lies in a pool of his own blood. At the top of
the stairs DARTH SIDIOUS deactivates his lightsaber
and descends he stops a few feet from the hurt Jedi
Master.
DARTH SIDIOUS:Now Master Windu you shall meet your end
DARTH SIDIOUS slowly extends his hand at the fallen Jedi.
MACE WINDU:Y..You...will m...meet your..f..fate when....it..c...comes
An evil laughter fills the room and a deadly storm of lightning is
unleashed.
INT: 65. No Title.
In his sleek new starship Obi-Wan heads toward the planet Mustafar. On his radar he detects two living objects. Obi-Wn immediately suspects it's Anakin but doesn't have a very good idea of who the other one is. He decided to land near the two living objects (one of which he suspects is Anakin) but still to where they could not see him. As Obi-Wan landed on the fiery hellish planet and stepped out of the cockpit of his star ship he felt a very sickening feeling, a disturbance in the force. He immediately thought Anakin had gone out in some sort of rage. As Obi One started running toward the two living objects he detected on his radar in his starship the sickening feeling started to become worse. When he got close enough to see who the two living objects were he noticed he was right about Anakin being their but the other human was someone he did not expect to see, or at that expect to see the way she was being treated. It was padme, it was a horrible site only because Anakin was using the force to choke her. As padme fainted to the ground Obi-Wan screamed out "Nooooo"! Anakin immediately let go of padme and ignited his light-saber. Obi-Wan too ignited his light saber and ran toward Anakin and a great fight between the to Jedi friends broke out.
EXT. Mustafur (on a sandstone bridge)
the bridge was tearing apart like an asteroid hit it. obi wan felt the ground break beneath his feat. he jumped forward and got off just in time before the hard earth plummeted into the lava below. anakin put his hand up and farce pushed obi wan off the ledge. obi wan managed to catch onto the edge in time with his middle finger. he just swayed there. he brought his hand up and held onto it with both hands. he prepared to pull him self up but a foot crashed down on both hands. obi wan felt the pain jolt across his body.
Anakin: You should not have come
Obi: anakin....ani...a...p-p-p-please dont do this...
Anakin: I have a new master now. i hope your death is a long and painful one.
Obi wan cried out in pain. mustafur started shaking. obi wans eyes turned red with furry. lava started to rise above its limits and obi wan flipped onto the ledge with ease. he called his saber to him and attacked anakin with furry. so fast that anakin had trouble defending most of the blocks. obi wan jumped up and kicked anakin several times really hard. anakin fell on his back.
Anakin: but...how is that possible. im stronger than you
obi wan just realised that he was engulfed in the dark side of the force. obi calmed himself down. his eyes changed back to normal. and mustafur stopped shaking.
Obi: i dont want to fight you
Anakin: doesnt look like you have much of a choice.
Obi: then.. im sorry
lava broke through the ground behind anakin and came down on him like an avalanche. anakin was gone from the earth. consumed by the lava and destroyed. the chosen one was destroyed. or so obi wan thought...