Rhyme and (somewhat) reason

😱 Omg your stuff is awesome!

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by Lana
Way to dig up an ancient thread, Bilb 😛

Thanks 😊

quiet you 😛

Originally posted by Lana
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Walked through the door
Fell to the floor
Opened up my eyes
And then I realized
That I couldn't see
What was in front of me
And now here I lie
Wondering, why?

You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

Originally posted by bilb
quiet you 😛

😛

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

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This comment is not worth a response, but I shall anyway.

Did the thought occur to you that people don't necessarily fall face-first?

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
You didn't realise you were staring at the floor?

Originally posted by Lana
😛

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This comment is not worth a response, but I shall anyway.

Did the thought occur to you that people don't necessarily fall face-first?

should we mention its a a friggin metaphor as well? 🙄

I really have no idea where this came from. It sorta just popped into my head, and as I haven't really written anything for months, I figured I should post it.

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a chill
like ice down the spine
what's going on?
I thought everything was fine

a drop
of water from my eye
falls like a raindrop
from a cloud-filled sky

torn
my heart ripped in twain
inside I feel
like I have been slain

alone
never again with you
your life torn away
and mine started anew

cry great poem .. tragic but great

Originally posted by bilb
cry great poem .. tragic but great