Episode III: The Revenge of the Sith - By J.W. Titus

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Originally posted by Darth Sauron
Im going to nominate that speech for the 'miss star system' ✅ 😊
Very nice.

Thank you *bats her eyelashes*

good grief I am a Sith 😱 I gotta quit doing that! LOL

my fav has been Anakin killing off Dooku so far......

Yeah the sids/palps voice in his head and him being afraid to go that bit deeper into the darkside!!! 📖 ✅

Best part was where it was saying anakin had a place he could go to...to get umatchable power...but he never went there..always stopped short because the darkness that surrounded it scared him...Then he went there while figting dooku 😱

The kicking of the baby (on the premise they dont know its twins) is sweet 😍

sounds intense especially when anakin slaps dooku with his metal hand for now may force be with you.

😗

Sombody post a lil taster of it.....

Roger that!!

Here's a cheeky scene!! 😮‍💨

Straddling the hole he’d cut in the elevator floor so that he could exit the shaft, Anakin pried the doors open with his powerful arms and peered into the darkened room. His deactivated lightsaber held ready in his black-gloved, mechanical right hand, he cautiously walked forward to the railing directly in front of the elevator and looked down into the General’s Quarters. He quickly removed his dark brown Jedi cloak and activated his blade with a snap-hiss as soon as he saw who was below.
Standing below and a just in front of a long, metal table in the middle of the room was Count Dooku, his blood-red lightsaber humming in his hand.
“I’ve been waiting for you, boy,” Dooku said. “Come to learn another lesson?”
Anakin’s eyes narrowed in hatred at the memory of the pain of Dooku cutting off his hand in that Geonosis hanger. The metal hand strangled the lightsaber hilt, the black glove crackling. He wanted to jump over the railing and run Dooku through right then. He wanted to make him feel the same pain he’d felt back in that hangar. He wanted to see him suffer for all the horrific events he’d caused in the galaxy—all of the death and destruction that stained his hands. He wanted revenge. But his eyes caught sight of the figure strapped to the chair in front of the giant windows on the far side of the room and he controlled his rage.
His eyes back on Dooku, Anakin side-stepped to one of the curved flights of stairs and down to the lower level. Cautiously, he approached Dooku.
“Are you all right, You Excellency?” Anakin called across the room. “Are you injured?”
“Anakin,” Palpatine said in relief. “I knew you would come. I am unharmed, but you must hurry. The ship is beginning to fall back towards the planet.”

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160 pages in MS Word so far he has written 😛

size 12 font.

it is good, very good

I hope the film is as good....

i used to post at TFN but came over here and here i will stay, there is much more insider stuff here and i dont get told by 18 year olds that i(I'm 30, and have been a fan since i was 4) dont know anything about SW !!

ohh the cheek of it !

keep it coming JWT !!

Originally posted by Darth Sauron
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160 pages in MS Word so far he has written 😛

size 12 font.

and actually not all of it is IN the downloadable version yet.

Yeah....the Downloadable version finishes with the line

He got on, and they took off after Obi-Wan across the ashen surface of Utapau.

😊 😱 Tonight is the grievous update!

Yeah i'll keep my eye out for the download updates and i totally agree with nigeyo2000, i'm here for the same reasons and am the same age, hey are you me??? 😉

Wow that latest update was excellent!!!! Another one tonight poppickers!!

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😆 I personally like Skywalker Inc......omg I am doing it!!!!........posting useless crap in thsi thread............shoot me now..... 😆 never thought i'd see the day JP!

Now young smoker..........you WILL die............😈

fear
*attempts to help smoker4 escape the....empress?*

meh I had a moment of weakness at TFN...... 😖

I've read some of this...it's really, really good. 😊👆
I liked the scenes with Ani&Padme and where Padme almost tells Obi-Wan...

And smoker4 ...that IS cute, isn't it? Aww....

bump (sinking stupid threads)

Hi guys, sorry been away for a while, sorry JP couldnt resist, yes lyn those scenes pulled at my clucky strings, JW is dragging it out till wookie showdown!!!

Like the new AV PVS 😮‍💨