have you ever wanted to save someone from the world they live in
and give them everything that their parents couldnt give them
and take them out of all they knew and bring them something more
take them into your heart your home but then you bump into closed door
have you ever wanted to be a hero so much that it hurt
and you beat yourself everyday for not being that way
and you look into your mirror and turn back in disguss
cuz the reflection aint the think you thought that it was
then you turned on yourself, made yourself like a liar
made you angry at the world til your heart could breath fire
made yourself lonely and you didnt like people
you try to make friends who make you hurt and weep
i lived my life like i was in my own little prison
to get out of it all was my life long mission
couldnt find anyone who loved a reject
then from j to sp...i earned some respect
i went through a life that seemed a loss cause
i didnt turn columbine eventhough i could have
which is why i wanna ask, if you wanna be a hero
why would you want to end it like a zero
Originally posted by justjakk
heehee...
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
LOL goofy cold. 😂
Originally posted by justjakk
have you ever wanted to save someone from the world they live in
and give them everything that their parents couldnt give them
and take them out of all they knew and bring them something more
take them into your heart your home but then you bump into closed doorhave you ever wanted to be a hero so much that it hurt
and you beat yourself everyday for not being that way
and you look into your mirror and turn back in disguss
cuz the reflection aint the think you thought that it wasthen you turned on yourself, made yourself like a liar
made you angry at the world til your heart could breath fire
made yourself lonely and you didnt like people
you try to make friends who make you hurt and weepi lived my life like i was in my own little prison
to get out of it all was my life long mission
couldnt find anyone who loved a reject
then from j to sp...i earned some respecti went through a life that seemed a loss cause
i didnt turn columbine eventhough i could have
which is why i wanna ask, if you wanna be a hero
why would you want to end it like a zero
Originally posted by justjakk
have you ever wanted to save someone from the world they live in
and give them everything that their parents couldnt give them
and take them out of all they knew and bring them something more
take them into your heart your home but then you bump into closed doorhave you ever wanted to be a hero so much that it hurt
and you beat yourself everyday for not being that way
and you look into your mirror and turn back in disguss
cuz the reflection aint the think you thought that it wasthen you turned on yourself, made yourself like a liar
made you angry at the world til your heart could breath fire
made yourself lonely and you didnt like people
you try to make friends who make you hurt and weepi lived my life like i was in my own little prison
to get out of it all was my life long mission
couldnt find anyone who loved a reject
then from j to sp...i earned some respecti went through a life that seemed a loss cause
i didnt turn columbine eventhough i could have
which is why i wanna ask, if you wanna be a hero
why would you want to end it like a zero
I love it
Originally posted by justjakk
have you ever wanted to save someone from the world they live in
and give them everything that their parents couldnt give them
and take them out of all they knew and bring them something more
take them into your heart your home but then you bump into closed doorhave you ever wanted to be a hero so much that it hurt
and you beat yourself everyday for not being that way
and you look into your mirror and turn back in disguss
cuz the reflection aint the think you thought that it wasthen you turned on yourself, made yourself like a liar
made you angry at the world til your heart could breath fire
made yourself lonely and you didnt like people
you try to make friends who make you hurt and weepi lived my life like i was in my own little prison
to get out of it all was my life long mission
couldnt find anyone who loved a reject
then from j to sp...i earned some respecti went through a life that seemed a loss cause
i didnt turn columbine eventhough i could have
which is why i wanna ask, if you wanna be a hero
why would you want to end it like a zero
This is fantastic ✅
I especially liked the way you wrote this line;
"cuz the reflection aint the think you thought that it was"
Clever, and quite a powerful poem overall 👆
What a wondrous sound than that of your voice. A symphony doth resound when your lips divide. As a broken dam makes a flood of water, the same occurs when you speak.It causes much praise such as the heavens opening to refresh the ground with rain. It also causes grief in the heart when an adorer cannot hear it for it flows through the mind and rests on that heart.It creates a new form and will never be forgotten.
Originally posted by justjakk
What a wondrous sound than that of your voice. A symphony doth resound when your lips divide. As a broken dam makes a flood of water, the same occurs when you speak.It causes much praise such as the heavens opening to refresh the ground with rain. It also causes grief in the heart when an adorer cannot hear it for it flows through the mind and rests on that heart.It creates a new form and will never be forgotten.
Who is it about?