My Terminator 4: Rise of the Resistance
Here it is again, in all it's glory: My Definitive Version of where the story should go from here, presented in script form, so Mostow can easily steal it and call it his own, without the tedious task of rewriting it for the screen..
(if this is better off posted in General Fiction or some place else, move it there... I didn't see it posted here any more or moved anywhere else, so...)
Terminator 4: Rise of the Resistance
INTRO:
FADE FROM BLACK The UNIVERSAL LOGO, PLANET EARTH spinning in space
The 'UNIVERSAL' tag fades, while the PLANET EARTH continues to spin (like the opening of WATERWORLD)
JOHN CONNOR:
(voice over)
The future is not set...
We have no fate but what
we make for ourselves...
It was all a lie! A lie I told myself!
From the future, to prevent Judgment Day,
to prevent the extinction of Mankind...
I failed...
UNIVERSAL PLANET EARTH LOGO suddenly alight with hundreds of NUCLEAR MISSILE launches, vapor trails and explosions dotting the surface
VARIOUS SCENES from the END OF T3:RISE OF THE MACHINES
the launch of multiple nukes, destruction around the world
INT. CRYSTAL PEAK HARDENED FACILITY, BUNKER COMPOUND
JOHN and KATE trapped at CRYSTAL PEAK
T-850 terminates T-X using fusion power cell as bomb
T-850, T-X ENDOSKELTONS remain in tact, pinned under blast doors
Power cell explosion causes catastrophic cave-in, sealing entrance to CRYSTAL PEAK as bombs fall around the world...
JOHN CONNOR
(voice-over)
3 billion lives lost...
Entire cities vaporized...
The planet decimated by nuclear war...
War started by machines…
Machines built by man to help us live, had turned against us...
They decided our fate in a microsecond...
Mankind had taken its toll on the world;
We were obsolete...
MORE SCENES of wasteland and nuclear winter enveloping the world
(like the nuclear winter playground scene in T1 and T2)
SCENE finally focus on CRYSTAL PEAK, the entrance cave collapsed, sealing the bunker from the outside world
JOHN CONNOR
(voice-over)
I failed in my mission to prevent this Hell.
Still, I had survived.
Guided by a machine.. protected, defended, ultimately saved by that machine..
A Terminator, sent from the very future from which I was running, had given me another chance...
A chance to set things right, to truly test Fate, a chance to live again.
I had survived, to prove that
Mankind could... would survive!'
FINAL SCENE FROM T3
INT. CRYSTAL PEAK BUNKER FACILITY, COMMAND AND CONTROL ROOM
The ‘main room’ COMMAND & CONTROL CENTER, the heart of the facility, where the computer banks, databases, communications systems are set
The COMM-SYSTEM speaker chatters with anxious, frightened calls from all around the region
SAC-COM COLORADO
Is anybody reading me?
Can anyone hear me?
MONTANA CIVIL DEFENSE
We have lost all command and control.
What's going on out there?
Is anyone receiving?'
JOHN CONNOR
This is John Connor, at Crystal Peak...
SAC-COM COLORADO
Connor?
What the Hell is happening?
Who's in charge there?'
JOHN
I am...
FADE TO BLACK
MUSIC: ORIGINAL TERMINATOR THEME (probably with a new BEAT added)
FADE IN TITLE: TERMINATOR 4
NUCLEAR EXPLOSION, MUSHROOM CLOUD envelops TITLE GRAPHIC, written as always in TERMINATOR FONT
FLAMES consume the TITLE graphic
FLAMES fade, TERMINATOR logo is charred from silver to brown, as...
FADE IN TITLE: RISE OF THE RESISTANCE
FADE FROM BLACK
MONTAGE of SHOTS and SCENES as CREDITS fade in and out
MONTAGE:
-JOHN (Nick Stahl) and KATHERINE (Claire Daines) perform various functions to 'power-up' their new home CRYSTAL PEAK
activate computers,
database modules,
and other equipment seen in the huge room
-Using 'the red folder' GENERAL BREWSTER'S file, 'CRYSTAL PEAK COMMAND & CONTROL FUNCTIONS' to unlock 'The Vault'
reveal food, water, clothing and supplies
enough to support 100 people for 10 years
-Unlocking secondary vault,
contents: RADIATION/CONTAMINATION equipment,
RAD-SUITS, REBREATHER MASKS,
HOODS, GLOVES, BOOTS
as well as a complete
DECONTAMINATION CHAMBER
-PAN and SCAN thru various areas of the bunker
BUNKS/BILLET AREA,
enough for 100 people to live comfortably, beds, wall
lockers, foot lockers, small tables, sparse furnishings
LAB/RESEARCH FACILITY,
WEAPONS VAULT,
containing PROTOTYPE PULSE RIFLES, PISTOLS along with various other modern-day military-issue weapons, M-16s, shotguns, 9-mm pistols...
AIR-RECLAMATION/VENTILATION SYSTEM CORE,
massive fans, filters and various other machines to
test, filter and circulate fresh and recycled air
throughout the compound, while venting deadly toxins
and radiation back out to be dispersed in the atmosphere
END CREDITS MONTAGE
INT CRYSTAL PEAK BUNKER, NEAR ENTRANCE
JOHN CONNOR prepares PLASTIC EXPLOSIVES CHARGES at the cave-in
JOHN wears a complete RADIATION SUIT while he works so close to the contaminated surface of the planet, and we hear the sound of crackling voice-communication as he works
JOHN
How we lookin' Kate?
KATE
(voice over, over John's Comm-Unit)
Rads are looking nominal this morning,
no heat signatures or movement of any kind detected on the surface…
Looks clear...
Over...
JOHN
That’s consistent with the reports from
SAC-COM and NORAD bunkers throughout the
South-West region.. seems like Judgment Day
wasn’t the ‘global threat’ we were expecting
after all.
KATE
(voice-over)
Roger that.
It doesn’t make much sense though, does it?
What purpose is served keeping humans alive?
What could this mean? Why do the machines need
any of us any more?
Over..
JOHN
I dunno, Kate. I dunno.
(laughing)
And, I’ve told you a million times, they always only ever say 'OVER' when they are talking in a group, to let the rest of the group know it's clear to respond!
It's only ME out here, hun...
I ALWAYS know it's clear to respond! Ha!
CUT TO
INT. CRYSTAL PEAK COMPOUND, COMMUNICATIONS CENTER
KATHERINE BREWSTER sits at the COMM STATION, monitoring surface
sensors, screens and read-outs, while wearing a COMM-UNIT HEADSET to communicate with JOHN on the surface
KATE
(laughing)
Hey! Who's the military brat here, and who's the scab off the streets, bub? OVER!
CUT TO
INT CRYSTAL PEAK BUNKER, NEAR ENTRANCE
JOHN steps back, away from the rubble and rock blocking passage to the outside world from the confines of the hardened facility
JOHN
Fire in the hole, beautiful...
Fire in the hole!
EXT. CRYSTAL PEAK BUNKER- MOMENTS LATER
The large mound of gravel, rock and rubble suddenly and violently explodes outward, a thunderous noise erupting from within as the EXPLOSIVE CHARGES detonate.
The chasm is partially cleared, allowing air and light to stream in from the outside world.
EXT. CRYSTAL PEAK BUNKER
JOHN crawls from the gap in the rubble, carefully, cautiously, almost daintily, to avoid tearing the RAD-SUIT on any sharp edges of debris.
JOHN surveys the surroundings casually, awed by the sight, a Geiger counter clicking and humming steadily in his hand all the while, his breathing somewhat erratic from stress and anxiety of being outside the confines of the bunker.
All is clear...
JOHN
All clear...
Kate, you should see this!
It's incredible!
KATE
(voice-over, distracted)
Did you just call me beautiful, Connor?
JOHN
Well, you are destined to be my wife...
And you ARE the most beautiful woman
I have seen this whole last year or so...
CUT TO
INT. CRYSTAL PEAK COMPOUND, COMMUNICATIONS CENTER
KATE is beaming, glowing, flushed with embarrassed excitement,
flustered, but quickly composes herself and responds
KATE
I'm the ONLY woman you've seen!
But the future is not set, remember, buddy?!
Don't get your hopes up!
(sighs)
And, thank you...
It has been awhile, hasn't it?
CUT TO
EXT. CRYSTAL PEAK COMPOUND, NEAR SURFACE
JOHN completes his surface inspection and examination, and makes his way back toward the partially excavated gap leading back into the mountain, still noting readings from his Geiger-counter and equipment
JOHN
(no longer distracted)
OK OK... I'm coming back down.
I think I can work it so we can close the blast doors again, once I clear away enough of the rocks...
Then we can contact Colorado, Nevada, and
Arizona, and rally the troops...
KATE
(voice-over)
...always the romantic, Connor...
See you after decon...
(a beat)
OVER!
(giggles)
JOHN disappears back into the gap in the rock, descending into the BUNKER once more.
All is silent on the surface, until...
JOHN
Kate! Kate!
I found something!
It's Him! It's Them!
The Terminators!
Well, what's left of them any way...
They're still here!
Maybe we---
KATE
(interrupting)
John! I got something on the radio!
It's Civil Defense in Nevada! They have begun to mobilize! Come quick!
Get through decontamination, and get up here! John?!
JOHN crawls back under the blast door, past the charred and forms of the T-850 and T-X endoskeletal remains, their optical sensor ports dull and dead utterly devoid of any signs of life. Terminators, terminated.
FADE to BLACK, as JOHN chats with KATE