you're somebody, i'm not

hey peoples...i havent been here in a while...but anyways....i wrote this poem called you're somebody, i'm not and i wanted to know what you think about it....love it, hate it, anything else....peace <3 Kelly

you're somebody, i'm not

you're just like them.
you know that, right?
you look the same, dress the same, look the same and even think the same.
it makes me cringe just thinking about it.
you are just another one of those mindless clones.
you're programmed down to every last hair flip and giggle.
if it weren't for them, you'd be nothing.
just like me.
you'd spend your life at the mall doing nothing.
maybe watching kids master the art of ddr if you are privledged enough.
they dance infront of all the ooing and ahhing people.
enchanted by their moves.
but i just sit and watch.
oblivious to all things around me.
but still, that doesn't change the fact that you are not like me.
you're somebody, i'm not....

somebody till armageddon, when the only thing in this life that matters is whether or not you survive.

That was good... and soooo true.....

haha somebody liked it!

It sounds like an 'oh-so-indie' Hollyshit movie that needs to be gagged and bound and never, ever released on an unsuspecting puplic.

You're such a jerk Ou Be Low hoo; I hope you know that....

Originally posted by silentsuicide16
i wanted to know what you think about it....love it, hate it, anything else....

Look, Coldfire! Look! She was asking for people's opinions! O-P-I-N-I-O-N-S...Go check a dictionary if you don't know what that means...Let me help you...It doesn't mean this: 'La..la...say something suitably banal about my poem because we're all sychophants here!'

Oh I'm sorry, I forgot to put the 'sometimes' in there rolleyes1 Fine, I take it back, all right?? Happy now????