My Harry Potter Book (you can carry on after my part)

If i tried to help i would probably ruin it.

no way dark lord, i did way worse than you....my story sux! i mean i can't even thnk wat to write next, just please try and go for it, no one can evr ruin it!

all of these stories have gone kaput

Ur one hasn't gone kaput Pink i think it's great.AND i will try to help the best i can. 😄 😄 😄 😄

at least someones positive about this
no offence to the rest
🙂😄😄😄

thanks so much dark lord, i can't wait to see what you have in store for us, that goes for all of you, please, just try and let your imaginations run and write write write!

o ok.. if u do post pls write more!

pleeeez post

OK.Here it goes.
As Harry entered the backyard a surprise awaited him."SURPRISE".Shouted the Weasley's and the order."Harry.It's so good to see you".And a very pretty girl with brown bushy hair grabbed him and squeezed him so hard that he felt dizzy."Hermione,get of your stopping the circulation to my brain".Moaned Harry."Oh sorry Harry".Said Hermione as she let go of him."Happy birthday Harry".Came a whisper in his ear.Harry whipped round and came face to face with.............
"SIRIUS".Shouted Harry."Calm down calm down I'm not really here it's a figment of yours and my imagination".Said Sirius."Where are we"?Asked Harry as he looked around."I don't know myself".Explained Sirius.Harry happy birthday hope it is fine and i am not gone forever i will come back somehow".Said Sirius as he faded away in to the distance along with his voice.
"Harry,Harry,HARRY".Shouted Hermione."Are you ok I didn't mean to knock you out by hugging you,I'm sorry".Said Hermione as she gave Harry a swift kiss on the cheek."Hermione,what was that for"?Asked Harry going red."Someone could have seen that"."I'm sorry Harry,thats why we have been giggling all summer,I'll explain later now we have to get you back to that birthday party of yours"."What if i want the same thing as you do".Said Harry as he kissed her on the cheek.Hermione went red also.
I told you i would mess it up.SORRY. 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠

I am truly sorry if i have messed it up for you but i have tried if you don't want me to post anymore i will understand.I'M RUBBISH.

ITS GREAT!

someone post.that idea with sirius was great! mabe he was on another plane and could of summoned harry there

I don't believe yous it is bad it just came from the top of my head i did not plan it like my one cause i have write mine down on paper so i could change it if i thought it was rubbish.I'M SORRY I MESSED IT UP.

Or maybe Sirius was actually there,no body knows but me.Was he,wasn't he?????????????????????

i think he was on another plane cause hermione and the others didn't see Sirius .also Harry didn't leave so mabe sirius only summoned his sprit.behind the veil is probably another plane

u did not mess it up
its great
and her202 theorie sounds quite correct

Maybe Hermione202 is right and maybe she isn't only i know. 😎 😎 😎

huh? anyways The dark lord u seriously did not mess up! that was great!

write soon

I'll write more later.