I promised this awhile back...I totally forgot about it. Here's what I wrote that time I mentioned it....If anyone thinks its anygood and wants to hear more I'll be happy to continue writing....
Satoshi’s Story
The house had a cool , calm feeling to it, though it also held a feeling of emptiness and regret. A mansion of tremendous size it stood alone on a hill overlooking the city below like a castle ruling over a village. It was the Hikari residence. They were a very prodigious family, collecting art from all around the globe. In their nature they hated thieves, because they paid very good money for their pieces of artwork. It was in their very genes to hate thieves, for they were collectors and artists.
A family named Niwa lived in the city that prospered despite the shadow the Hikari mansion cast over it. This family was a band of art thieves, they only moved into the town to steal from the Hikari’s. A fued like no other was wrought between the two families. The curses were exchanged, and soon they both felt the effects of a curse. It affected their very blood, and no one could escape it. Two separate yet, very similar beings were brought to life in each family. In the family of Hikari, Krad was born. A being of anger and hate for the Niwa clan; Krad was beautiful like an angel though, His wings were snow white, his hair a lustrous golden hue, his eyes a freezing amber glare, and his clothes the robes of a priest.
To the Niwa family a being of darkness was born, Dark Mousy. He was the opposite of Krad in everyway possible. Dark had one goal in mind, it was the same as the Niwa family’s goal, to steal art; not only from the Hikari’s but from museums and personal homes alike.
Dark now stood in the doorway to the mansion that was once ruled by the Hikari’s. The family had lost touch with its fortune and spread out across the country. Now a family by the name of Hiwatari lived there though, one true Hikari still resided within. As soon as the true Hikari was born into the light of the world, the curse of Krad was upon him. His family found it very important that he was trained to deal with it. At a very young age this boy was forced to learn educational skills way beyond anything a normal kid of his age would. His name is, Satoshi Hiwatari, also known as Satoshi Hikari. His childhood was spent with personal tutors and instructors in the martial arts. They would risk nothing happening to Satoshi while he hunted for the elusive Dark Mousy of the Niwa family.
Satoshi was now unaware of the other’s presence in his adoptive home. Busy with his training and lessons, the boy of eight years old had no thought for the sounds of the house. He had always believed himself to be very safe inside the household. So when Dark entered his room, Satoshi was very startled, but this did not lead to him losing his senses, he immediately shouted the alarm, and turned to face the phantom thief.
And if I knew how to cut this into a link I would too. Sorry to post so long. I hope you guys like it. And I just realized I never fixed my mistake of the history bit with Satoshi and Dark. Critical comments welcome! And remember more than happy to finish it if anyone wants to read it...🙂