ROTS novel excerpts

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//cut to Coruscant.

There came a turning point in the light versus dark.

The battle shifted from the holding office to the podium.

It began to raise, over 100 meters up... it became the focal point of the arena... had anyone been in it to witness this.

The senate pods began flying every which way, crashing into each other in a thunderous roar... almost echoing the cheers for Palpatine that had emanated through the chamber earlier that day.

Yoda's vision finally pieced the darkness that had taken control over the Force.

He saw the truth...

That he was the avatar of light; the Supreme master of the Jedi Order.

The truth...

That he just didn't have it

Yoda... had never had it.

He had lost before he had started.

He had lost before he was born.

The Sith had grown; had changed; had adapted.

Palpatine was the culmination of the past 1,000 of Sith training, as well as the intensive study the Sith put into Jedi lore itself.

The past 1,000 years of Sith history had been a preparation for this moment.

The Jedi had been training to fight the last war. The wrong war.

The new Sith could not be destroyed with a ligthsaber, or with a touch of the Force.

The more the light side flowed through Yoda, the more the dark side swelled in Palpatine.

The brighter the light, the darker the shadow.

How could one win a war against the dark, when the war had become the weapon of the dark?

Yoda realized this insight held the hopes of the galaxy.

If he were to be destroyed, that hope would die with him.

//cut to Mustafar.

After thousands of hours of lightsaber sparring together, Obi-Wan and Anakin's techniques were almost identical. They knew what the other was going to do before he did it... every time.

Punches and kicks were blocked, all strikes were parried. They knew each other too well.

They then were inside the facility...

Seems like they're using the Force to set off the blasters in the dead people's hands...

Obi-Wan managed to a deflect a few towards Anakin.

Anakin deflected.

And they send the laser beams back and forth at each other until they dissipated into radioactive gas.

"Don't make me destroy you, Obi-Wan." - Anakin

"You're no match for the power of the dark side." - Anakin

"I've heard that before... but I never thought I'd hear it from you." - Obi-Wan

Anakin Force-pushes Obi-Wan into a wall.

Anakin steps toward him, over dead bodies... and lifts his blade in preparation for the kill.

Obi-Wan had one trick left. One that wouldn't twice.

One that worked on Grievous.

He reached out through the Force, and reversed the electrodriver's on Anakin's mechanical hand.

His fingers sprang open, and his lightsaber flew out.

Obi-Wan reached out with the Force and drew Anakin's lightsaber to him.

"The flaw of power is arrogance." - Obi-Wan

"You hesitate. The flaw of compassion." - Anakin

"It's not compassion, Anakin. It's reverence for life." - Obi-Wan

Anakin used both the Force and his body to slam Obi-Wan into the wall.

He grabbed both of Obi-Wan's wrists an impossibly strong grip.

"I AM SO SICK OF YOUR LECTURES!" - Anakin

Obi-Wan could literally feel his bones bending, readying themselves for the break.

//cut to Coruscant

lmao, "the little green freak."

Palpatine whipped a pod at Yoda, and Yoda leaped half a second too slow. Palpatine unleashed his lightning while Yoda was still in the air, and "the little green freak took it's full power."

(Obviously, this is putting Palpatine's viewpoing into it, while staying in 3rd person.)

Yoda crashed against the podium.

And fell.

Far, far down...

The base of the arena was 100 meters below.

It was littered with shards of metal from the destroyed pods.

As the little green freak fell, the Shadow became, once again, simply Palpatine.

A tired and old man gasping for air.

He was old, but there was nothing wrong with his eyesight.

He scanned the wreckage, but did not see a body.

He used the Force to flip a switch, which sounded countless sirons throughout the building.

He then began lowering his pod towards the base of the rotunda.

Clone troops were already rushing in.

"It was Yoda! Another assassination attempt. Find him, and kill him. If you have to, blow up the building." - Palpatine

The Force sent a warning to Palpatine. Vader was in danger.

He stopped one of the commanders.

"You. Call the shuttle dock and tell them I'm on my way. Have my ship warmed and ready." - Palpatine

Palpatine ran.

//cut to Yoda

Yoda sprinted across the surface accessway below the arena.

He was running faster than any human could.

And was slicing through conduits and doors as he passed.

And filling the way behind him with high voltage cables.

He began stopping occasionally to slice an escape hole in the wall, so that the forces would have to divide up to search each of his possible exits.

Unfortunately, he knew they could afford to. There were thousands of them.

He pulled out his comlink.

The Force whispered coordinates to him, and he said them into the comm.

"Delay not. Closing is the pursuit. Failed, I have. And kill me they will." - Yoda

By the time Yoda got to the side of the chamber, he was breathing hard, even with the aid of the Force.

He cut through the floor and dropped into a maintence accessway.

He cut through one of the main power circuits for the lights.

He then cut through the wall and dove out into the open. He used his cloak to slow down his fall. He was too small to trigger the defenses.

However, the speeder flying below would get blasted if it deviated from it's path by even one meter.

He used the Force to push himself outward, and landed in the speeder next to Bail Organa.

They shot away into traffic.

"Master Yoda, are you wounded?" - Bail

"Only my pride... only my pride" - Yoda

//cut to Mustafar.

Anakin forced Obi-Wan's arms down, pointing the lightsabers toward the ground.

Obi-Wan let go.

Of everything.

His hopes, his fears, his obligation to the Jedi... his promise to Qui-Gon and his failure with Anakin.

And the lightsabers.

(And the way this thread was going earlier, his bowels too!)

Anakin was taken by surprise, and instinctively let go of one of Obi-Wan's wrists to reach for his blade.

In that instant, Obi-Wan twisted free, grabbed his lightsaber, and swung it against Anakin's with such force that it pushed them both against the wall which Obi-Wan had been standing and cut through it.

He directed another swing against the wall.

And prepared to direct another, which would cut through so that he could jump through the wall.

He did.

Anakin followed, constantly on the attack.

Obi-Wan gave ground, retreating along a narrow balcony.

High above the lava and fire.

Obi-Wan continued to let Anakin drive him back.

The heat was intense enough to begin to crisp Obi-Wan's hair.

Towards the place where Obi-Wan could sense death. A place, he decided, they should reach together.

[lots of cool action]

Anakin cut through a control panel on the balcony.

The shield holding back the lava vanished.

Fire shot all around them.

Obi-Wan backed up to the end of the walkway; the only thing behind him a power conduit no thicker than his arm.

He stopped unto the conduit without hesitation. His balance was flawless as he deflected attack after attack from Anakin.

Then Anakin hopped aboard the conduit too. Their blows came faster than before.

Smoke blocked out the sun.

The only light came from the lava below.

Unlike Yoda vs Sidious, this had nothing to do with Jedi vs Sith, or good vs evil, or light vs dark.

It was simply Anakin against Obi-Wan.

Obi-Wan back flipped to a coupling nexus, and just as Anakin leapt to follow, Obi-Wan back flipped again.

They went on a chase, back and forth, through various levels of conduits and coupling nexuses, collection panels, etc.

They ended up on a collection panel. Obi-Wan ended up on the edge of one, hiding behind it for protection from the lava, while at the same time blocking Anakin's assault both with the Force and with the lightsaber.

Obi-Wan had an epiphany.

The man he was facing was the culmination of everything he had devoted his life to destroying.

Despite this, Obi-Wan still loved him.

That thing about attachments? Yeah, Obi-wan failed at that.

He had always stuck up for Anakin; had always covered for him.

And the attachment he denied even having had blinded him to the dark path his best friend walked.

The lava broke the shore of the factory, and it began to fall into lava, knocking both of them from where they stood.

Anakin whipped the bottom of his cable at Obi-Wan's knees.

Obi-Wan sliced through the cable above Anakin's head.

Anakin fell.

Pockets of gas boiled to the surface of the lava.

It shot up flames ... like arms reaching up to pull him in.

Between momentum and the Force, though, Anakin managed to reach another cable and grab hold. Obi-Wan shifted his weight to bring him in range of Anakin's new cable.

Anakin began swinging cable to cable, and Obi-Wan took chase (picture Tarzan, kinda).

Anakin used the Force to propel him higher upon each cable.

On this planet, altitude was everything.

They ended up on the top deck of the superstructure.

Obi-Wan barely had set foot upon it before Anakin pounced at him, and they stood toe to toe.

The factory was now being carried over a lavafall -- picture a house going over a waterfall.

Obi-Wan decided he didn't want to see what was at the bottom.

He through aside Anakin's blade with both hands, and landed a solid kick into Anakin's midsection.

Before Anakin could recover, Obi-Wan took a running jump/dive off the deck...

He fell down several levels...

And just before hitting the lava, the Force brought a cable to his hand, and he took hold.

He swung to the very peak of the cable's height limit -- and let go.

The swing shot him in an arc toward the river's shore.

Toward it... but not quite to it.

But the Force led him to jump, and it also led him to his safety.

In the form of a repulsorlift platform.

It's programming was having it deliver droids to the factory - it obviously didn't realize the factory was about to be destroyed.

He destroyed the navigation system, and sent it back towards the shore.

He watched as the plant fell over the cliff, and was swallowed by the lava below.

Obi-Wan lowered his head. "Good bye... old friend."

He raised his head again.

Just in time to see Anakin hurtling towards him.

Anakin was on a tiny repulsorlift platform... one that was much quicker than Obi-Wan's.

Anakin brought his platofrorm around to the other side of Obi-Wan's, and swung at Obi-Wan.

Obi-Wan shifted his weight, trying to redirect his platform, but it was just much too slow to do any good against Anakin.

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(Update)

Obi-Wan turned to block.

But instead of his blade meeting Anakin's blade, it met his knee. Then, his other knee.

And while the legs were just beginning to fall towards the lava; while Anakin was still in the air; Obi-Wan's attempt to regain balance sent his blade through Anakin's left arm above the elbow.

He stepped back as Anakin fell.

Anakin droped his lightsaber and clawed at the edge of the cliff.

His grip was too powerful for the lava bank to handle, and it crubmled.

He slid down onto the black sand.

His severed limbs rolled into the lava below him.

In sudden bursts of scarlet flame, they burned to ash.

The same color, Obi-Wan observed... as a Sith lightsaber.

So this comes out next week with the VD and toys? Sweet. 馃槑

Anakin clawed at the sand, but it only made things worse.

It was hot enough that it burned off his glove just by the touch.

His robes began to smolder.

Obi-Wan picked up Anakin's lightsaber.

He lifted his own as well.

He weighed them together. In a way, Anakin had designed his after Obi-Wan's.

They were similar.

But put to much different uses.

Wrong thread. edit.

wrong thread???LOL...thanks a lot man!!!

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What's the name of Chapter 20 (on the audio book, it's track 13 on disc 10)?
I can't understand it, it's sounds something like Kyargos Ugo...