well...this was nice.
You two (Esaul & Midnight) shouldn't have went behind their (Loli-popster & Likwhoa's) backs like that. Just because you didn't like what they wrote. I liked it, and so did others. But by doing that, you chased them away.
And now, you are still just talking about the fight and not posting, even though you had won the fight and got them to leave.
So, just stop trying to blame this on others and start posting. (since you did "win"😉
What didn't they let you know? As far as i've seen, they wanted to write, Midnight (weird calling you that! i'm so used to Hermione!) said they could, they wrote, you didn't like it. Big fight in which everyone contributed.
And no, we won't deal with it. If you have something planned, post it. If not, there was no real reason to critisize their writing (which i got a laugh out, it was good) in the first place.
i'd like to see what is ahead. i'll keep reading it, unless no one continues to write it, that is.
Originally posted by Esaul
"Ron you need to get up." said Harry's hissing voice that spoke right in his ear. "The girls are ready.""Whazreoualkingabout?" mumbled Ron sluring all of his words.
"Maybe this will help him." said Brooke's sweet voice, as it kissed Ron's lips gently, which made his eyes open. Looking at her, he gawked. Brooke had looked exactly the same. Brooke was wearing the same lavender colored dress robe. Her green eyes danced as she looked into Ron's eyes. Her soft light brown hair was done the same exact way as in his dream. It was hung down in a very attractive manner.
As well as Brooke looking the same, Hermione did as well. Ron nudged Harry playfully seeing how her once untamed curly hair were
smooth and wavy. Her brown eyes were filled with happieness as she looked at Harry longingly. It was obvious that she could not wait for the party to start. The dress she wore was something that they didn't see her in too often. It was the same shade as the sky on a cloudless day. It was very beautiful indeed on her."Did we keep you waiting too long Ron?" questioned Hermione playfully. "Shall we?"
The four of them went down stairs making their way to the Room of Requirment, where the party was going to be. So far no professors were in the hall to stop them, so that was a positive thing for them. Once they got there, they saw that the party had already started. The decorations were even better than his dream, so far the only thing that was different.
In the center of the room was a statue of each of the Malfoy's faces, or at least it was suppose to be. It looked like at least everyone got to add their own artistic ability to the statues. They heard one of them say that Mrs. Malfoy looked like she had more than dung underneath her nose. Malfoy's face was distorted, and Peeves personally had done Mr. Malfoy's. He had drawn all over it, writing very rude comments.
Apart from that, everything looked fantastic. Ice slulptures were all over the place, and Hermione had noticed something that made her happy. Dobby and Winky were in the room as well, and they were actually enjoying themselves. It nearly brought tears to her eyes.
The banners were the only thing that was the same about the room, which did not trouble Ron so much. As soon as they strolled in, they were greeted by all of their friends, and Brooke pulled Ron's hand, pulling him into a slow song. Her chin rested on his shoulder as she clung around to his neck.
Hermione and Harry were doing the same, slow dancing with one another. Some people still looked at Harry, a few of them were below their year, and they could not believe that he was actually at the party. A few girls were upset that he was already taken.
At least an hour later, they had all sat down to talk. They were having very interesting conversations. None of them saw George at all. They did not blame him, and they felt guilty about going without him. He was going to go with Parvati, but he had changed his mind, and she decided to stay with him, to keep him company. The conversation about Fred made Hermione feel really uncomfortable. Harry took notice but said nothing about it. Hermione could no longer take the silence.
"Harry...I...erm...got to talk to you."
While Hermione was speaking to Harry, Brooke and Ron were able to sneak outside heading to one of the few balcanoies Hogwarts had. They spent the time snogging with each other, and holding hands.
"What is it Hermione?" questioned Harry with interest.
I"I have to...erm....confess."
"About what?"
At that moment she had wanted to lie, to say someting like she was hungry, but it would do no good to hide it from him. It had to come out.
"I know how to get to Azkaban."
Harry looked at Hermione with disapointment, and with glee. "Really how?"
"Therstals."
"Oh." he said, afraid of that answer.
"We have to go to the Forbidden Forest. Also, I really think we should take the rest of the D.A. with us."
((that's all for now.))
Harry was surprised when she had said this answer to him. It was not what he had expected to hear, especially from her. Usually she would try to insist that they not do anything rash, but Harry knew that this was for the twin's life. They could not turn their backs on him, and having the D.A. wouldn't be so bad at all.
"Hermione, no," Harry said trying to plead with her, "Do you really want to risk their lives?"
"Where is Ron and Brooke?" asked Hermione changing subjects almost immeaditly. "I swear I don't know what I'm going to do if I see them snogging one more time."
Harry tryed to contain himself. He really hated it when people tryed to change the subject on him.
"Hermione, please! I can't take the DA with me. It's too risky. Do you want their blood on your hands?" Harry looked deep into Hermione's eyes, who tried to avoid his gaze. "I know I don't." he added unnecessary.
"Well..."
*Sorry for the spoiler guys! maybe someone can continue! 😛
"Well.." Hermione looked nervous. Harry knew he had finally won. "Harry, I know you don't want to hear this, but.."
No, Harry thought. I haven't won at all. And here comes the big reason...
"You can't handle doing this on your own. It's too dangerous. How are we supposed to just wait by Fred's sick bed while your endangering your life??" Tears welled in her eyes....