Spider's and Rosiecheeks Potter story

Started by rosiecheeks0516 pages

hope you all like it so far....PLEASE SOMEONE ELSE POST i need ideas....PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

omg
so good

hold on a minute Neville's parents didnt get murdered they got tortured...didnt they?

oh yeah thats right
they are in st. mungos

my mom is supervising me like a hawk! i'll try to get on tomorrow when she's out and write. good job rosie!

Originally posted by misslilsweetie
hold on a minute Neville's parents didnt get murdered they got tortured...didnt they?

In this story after they were tortured they were murdered (you'll see why)

oo ok i luv suprises!! yeah

good

Originally posted by rosiecheeks05
Okey i lied i was able to figure somethings out and start to put a bit of a plot (not the love part but the mystry of the story) together. here it is...

He pulls her along always so they are out of site of the others.
“Hermione you are the only one I know that might be able to help figure this out.” He pulled out a piece of paper that was like scratches on it. “I found it where my parents were murdered. I think it is some kind of note telling why, but I don’t understand what kind of language it is. Do you know?” he finished
“I think I do but it will take awhile. Can you wait till we get to school to find out? I think I know someone who can decode it. And thank you so much for bring this to me because I think I know exactly what language it is but I have to check first.”
“Whatever just please do it as fast as you can I really want to know. By the way if I act a little strange it is because of this. Because of what happened to my parents and because of the note and not knowing. Thank you so much for this I really owe for this one!” after he finished they walked back to where the others were and finished their ice cream.
Later when the Weasley’s, Hermione, and Harry were back at the Leaky Cauldron, Hermione asked harry to look at the paper. He took it but didn’t look at it right away. Before bed he took it out and looked at it and all of a sudden was terrified. It explained what happened. As he was staring at it Hermione knoked on the door and then came in. “Can you read it Harry?” she asked.
“Yeah, perfectly. Why can’t you?” he said looking a little weird.
“Nope I can’t. But that is because it is written in parcel tongue. You can read it because you can speak it. That is why.”

After Harry rewrote it in english he gave it to Hermione. He knew she would get it back to Neville right away.

sorry i have to go somewhere thoughti had more time 🙁

its ok

Originally posted by rosiecheeks05
After Harry rewrote it in english he gave it to Hermione. He knew she would get it back to Neville right away.

The next day they were off to go to PLateform 9 and 3\4. When they got to the station they went through their usual pattern of sending the kids through the barrier on to the plateform. As soon as Harry was through the plateform he heard many people cheering him on. He had finally gotten over his feelings of never wanting to be near people or people not wanting to be near him. He knew they all like him and believed him now. As Hermione, Ron. Ginny, Draco, and Harry got on the the train they had problems finding a spot. But so many people were willing to share or move for Harry they quickly found a stop. as they sat down they realize Draco had walk right past them and found his usual pals for the ride. Crabb and Goyle were waiting for him in their own compartment. "Well I guess we can fit a couple more in here since the big head went away" Harry stated as they watched Draco walk away. Even though they were back on good terms Harry still noticed his big head. He seems to never be with out it. But the again he wouild jave to blame Ginny for him not trusting Draco as much as he did earlier that summer.

While they were talking they heard footsteps approach the compartment. Neville entered still acting a bit strange. "Hey Neville hope your summer was awesome. Oh Hey Luna. How was yours?" Harry asked.
"It was alright. Most of it was at Nevilles anyways so it was a bit better then usual." She replied.
"Well that is awesome glad it wasn't that bad. oh and since like everyone that was worried about me at the end of last year is in here. I thought i would tell all of you that i am fine. or atleast better then before but i will be fine soon," Harry told them that and got a cheer out of it. everyone was so happy that when the lunch trolly came they all got loads of candy to eat before Hogwarts. SOme how even ron was able to buy alot.

hope it is alright just came out of my head. PLease someone write i would like to work with someone elses idea as well!!!

its great!!!!!

i luv it

srry! working at a zoo! itotally forgot!!! what am i doing up at this hour??? it's11:48 PM where i am......

Upon reaching Hogwarts, Ginny ran to find Draco and Ron stomped off somewhere muttering something about having a lunatic for a sister. Neville excused himself so that he could retreive Trevor and Luna, like always, was reading her magazine. Hermione and Harry were left alone and so began to talk.
'Ron's been acting weird lately, have you noticed?' Hermione leaned toward Harry.
'yeah. i think he's just upset about Ginny and Draco's relationship. he'll probably cheer up when Quidditch begins.' Harry watched the horses pulling the carriages. 'Ginny says she's trying out for beater so i'll have the position of seeker back.'
'you're watching the horses again Harry. it always freaks me out when you do that. it looks like you're staring at nothing at all.' suddenly, Hermione grabbed his arm.
'Hey! what are you doing?' Harry was dragged to side of the bridge by hermione
'look. no not there. at that boat. don't you think that kid is awfully big for a first year? the one in the red cloak.' she whispered in Harry's ear
'harry looked at the person and was suprized when she turned around. There sitting in the boat with hagrid was a pale girl with wavy black hair and green eyes. she looked to be about his age.
'Harry!' Hermione yanked Harry back from the edge. 'Were you about the jump into the lake?'
'uh...no! why would i go and jump in the lake? hey the carriage is waiting for us!' it was true, there was only one carriage left waiting just for Harry and Hermione.
'We're going to be late! we can't be late! i can't be late! i'm a prefect!' Hermione rushed toward the carriage but slipped on a puddle, twisting her ankle. 'ouch!'
'Hermy! you ok?' Harry jumped back out of the carriage.
'oh! i've twisted my ankle! harry go ahead and get a teacher. i'll be fine here.' hermione looked up at Harry
Instead of leaving her, Harry bent down. 'i'm not leaving you out here alone.' He picked her up and carried her to the carriage.
'No! Harry! truthfully, i'm ok! put me down! really!'
Once inside, the carriage began to move.

i've set the stage. 🙂
and i've a suprise in store for the future.
here's a hint: the girl in the boat is not an enemy. she has something to do with Harry....

12:11 now....

nice...i like it!!!

me too!

"Hermione, you know i can't leave you there it would be better to just take you up to the castle right away and have someone go fetch Madame Pomfrey. I highly doubt you would want to stay out there all alone. It is a bit freaky at night, we all know that."
"Ya i guess. Well thanks for helping me. I guess that was the right thing to do." She replied. After that they were at the castle. Ron was sitting outside waiting for them. and as he saw the carriage draw near he ran towards them. "Hey what took you so long?" he asked hastaly, "The sorting is about to start."
"what ever i need you to do me a favor Ron. Can you go and get Madame Pomfrey. Hermione hurt her ankle and now she can't walk on it." Harry said.
"right away." Ron said. HE started at a run and in know time Madame Pomfrey was down to take hermione up to the hospital wing. "I am sad again i will miss the sorting. Hey Harry tell me if the one girl gets in Gryffindor please. I hope so she isn't someone i would want to go against in any sort of fight between houses she said with a smile.