my random poetry...

Started by Coldfire2 pages

😂 Maybe ya are!! 😄

dorks lol ^_^

yin and yang
Night and day,
a perfect match
in every way

fire and water
white and black
i smile when u say
u love me back

hot and cold
sweet and sour
u will always
be my lover

Did you just call me a dork??!! shocking lmao! heh heh heh. I liked that poem; it was simple, yet effective 🙂 😍

thanks! i wrote that in like 2 minutes...lol

2 minutes!! It took me sooo long to do mine!! But I am slow at stuff like drawing and writing poetry.... 😛

lol i'm like that too sometimes.

Well actually, once you get into the flow of something you're doing, it doesn't seem to take as long, for some weird reason.

lol same here.. I do my writing in 2-3 mins and post them...

Do you just write yours on the computer at unexpected moments?

^ yes.. I write them "live" actually... 😄

😄 that's awesome then! 😄

this one is personal..i really like it..i hope u do

The sun rises and the moon fades
Time goes on without looking back
Though hate has lasted through the days

We walk down the street holding hands
People stare and talk about us
As though we’re walking on no mans land

We take a breath and keep walking
With no reservations about us together
Keep going ignoring all the talking.

Why are we outcasts and why are we hated
People just don’t understand us
Seems that this type of hate should be dated.

We are no different from the ones who stare
We love each other no matter what
Just want to be accepted everywhere

One day we will be able to fly
Now we can only dream when we can show
Our love in the public eye

Wow.... that's all I can say right now.... wow..... That was very deep indeed. I could feel the emotion in that poem. That was, without a doubt, the best one you've posted!!