Trapped

They won't be bad! And even if they were, it don't really matter to anyone!

okay well here's the Metaphor one: (NOT GOOD)

My mother, brother, and I are a family of mirrors, different sizes, and in different environments.
My Mom is the classic livingroom mirror. Etched in beauty and elegance, framed perfectly, and chrystal clear.
My brother is the smaller dresser mirror. Cracked, but not broken, also framed well, and misleading at times.
And I am the mirror that, during a conflict, was thrown against the wall, and is now shattered, at the base of the destroyer.

VERY DEPRESSING! 😛

That's a good one bordom!! My metaphor one is TOTALLY different than that! I'm gonna post it in a bit here....

Ya I saw that lol Well I told ya I can't make HAPPY poems lol

Well you can always try, like I'm gonna here sometime 😄

I try but like ew they sound like Kindergarten work lol

Lol, so do mine!! Which is why I'm not gonna rhyme yet... wait until I improve some more first 😄

I COULD rhyme... but not pronto lol

Lol, I can rhyme too, but they tend to be really simple ones 😄 I tried to do a sonnet once!! 😂 Can you guess how that turned out?? rolleyes1

😆 I would be on the floor wouldn't I??!! lol

😂 Yeah you would!! And they were the sappiest things ever!!! 😆

😂 I bet! I try..... but how bouts.... NO! lol

😂 Prolly better than mine are!! 😄

Originally posted by bordom
tell me what you think and please be honest

I'd rather eat a piece of cardboard covered in sand-paper than read either of them again. I think I'm going to go and head-butt the wall a few times now for some pleasure...

GO AWAY!

Just ignore him bordom; he's only looking to get some attention.

Originally posted by bordom
GO AWAY!

Contrary to what Coldfire said, I was actually doing what you asked. I really think your poems are boring and are crying out for some imagination...

Find the key, unlock the door...

How bout you go and f*ck yourself and leave me ALONE! I don't like you and you ALWAYS sit there on your "high pedistal" and say that you are better. So, do us ALL a favor, and GO THE F*CK AWAY! 😠

Woah! If you simply want people to say nice things about your poems you shouldn't ask people to be honest!

Allow me to enlighten you. You originally asked this:

Originally posted by bordom
tell me what you think and please be honest

However, it seems apparent that you actually intended something like this:

Originally posted by bordom
tell me what you think as long as you are kissing my spotty, little botty

Is that more like it?

For one thing... I NEVER wrote that second "quote" so therefore you cannnot quote me on that. Another, I don't care if people don't like my poems, but you come on my poems thread, and my chat thread and you sit there and bash me and what I do. Why can't you just f*ck off and leave me alone