A freakin Balance story
i know you been waiting for the tornament of heroes but just wait it will be here before july is over trust me but while your waiting just read this crap i always start my balance stories with so balance right so get use to it and if you want to go and watch "Spider MAN" do it seriously go for it cause its a whole lot better than this load of crap,hey hey hey hey hey interupted another anounsor this is a decint story so stay or i dont get paid and you know what that means it means wait... what does it mean in the first place oh well who knows its probly not important any way oh yeah now i remember i dont get to eat and my wife will leave me okay now for the story
so balance right he goes to school every day i dont know why it doesnt really help but any way thats when a noticed "you know I noticed if a monkey has a toung does that mean a donkey has a toung"then Balance went to class and talked to his best freind Canon "hey canon doesnt school on a friday blow""heack yeah"said Canon "dude heack isnt cool any more say hell" "Balance are you talking during class"said the teacher "Jean grey"then Balance said "isnt the teach a hotty""heack yeah"said canon "what did i tell you about that""oh i mean hell yeah" the teacher walked up next to their desk and said "do i have to send you boys to Detintion""it depends will you give me attention" they both said with perfect timming" "oh yeah score in your face canon take that she totally digs me better""my butt heack no"said canon Balance looked at him weird "im starting to think different about you canon" he was wallking home a night from a tree house that he built then he heard a nois it sounded like a person he was standing bye a truck then he said bring in the cocke balance droped his back pack and called his freind canon then canon came "whats the deal" "look" "what do you think thats in that truck"said canon "i dont know but ill use my time controll powers to see" he slowed down time and took a tried to take a peak he couldnt see what it is so then they caught him when he fell canon came out the aley to back him up ten an explosion happen watch out balance used the super jump to doge it and he was holding canons hand to save him "what was that" said balance "i dont know" replyed canon who is that guy it was a clown running but it had no funny looking wig but he had grennish redish blueish somthing elseish hair and face make up and his hair was spikey he ran away balance took out a couple of guys bye the truck the canon threw his new cd's from his jacket pocket and knocked tha goonies clear out balance and canon called the police it took 30 minutes for them to get their okay what is it Balance explained"we found about the coke"the cheif named robetson opended the trucks back slide door it was coke-a-cola"What! to becontiued
Another Freakin Balance Story
if you see a name in "" then that means it's someone elses character and i got promission form the creator and if the name is not in "" than that means that well... i did not get promission from the creator or uh it's my character that i made up which ever one is more legal okay bye is it done yet sheesh working this guy is aspegati what do you mean where still on air f**K this s**t im f**king leaving bye
anoynsor jef :you know sky high that new movie sky high bob
anoynsor bob: yeah i remember seeing the trailers for that
jef:that was my idea you know
bob sure it was
jef:no really creating a school of super heroes was really kingsley's i mean my idea not kingsley not the creator of the balance stories and heoroes tornament forget what i just said it was my idea
bob:really i belive you sure i wonder what time it is in finland
jef:well i dont know but it's 4am here and you know what that means it's burito time babay
bob:i heard that you know what im talking about buritos huh uh c'mon
jef:i have a feeling that where not talking about the same thing are we
bob:no where probly not talking about the same thing
jef:i thought so and there probly thinking where is my freakin balance story
bob:and im thinking we should make a story with cometary like redo a story but like add stuff with ()to say what you where really thinking when you wrote it and im also tinking how eat a burito at 4am and sit on my mom/uncle/wife at the same time
jef:and im trying to of a way to escape this aquired convesasion u know lets just start the balance story you know i heard that if you put spaces in your writing it makes the reader fell like their smart and dont have to read alot
bob😮h really interesting...wait another freaking story whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy but hurry up because i have to go to bed
continued...so balance right he was in the police station and said how was i suposed to know that the truck was full of coke-A-cola?"then the canon said "probly the fact that the truck read coke-a-cola would probly give you a hint Balance"chief robertson skuld at balance and canon "you idiots get out of my office! and trust me i do not want to see this happen agian ever!!!""ever mister robertson"said balance and canon with perfect harmony"Ever now get out of my office you two and take your little skating boards"canon interupted acually technally mines a hover board and balance is a rocket board and balance is a rocket board oh yeah and dude can you give our freind gadget's hover board back thanks"yeah yeah what ever just leave and there where reports about a guy in a trench coat and a hood they called him the "tormented" one so you and balance and all your other crazzy freinds can keep out of this okay and it's starting to become 4am so it's starting to be burito time so you guys leave they left the police station "mm mm mmmm mummmym oh yeah that dilousisous take a weif of this burito mm...mmm...snack thats good""hey balance what do you think robertson is doing in their"said canon "he's eating a burito it's either that or something else"lets just retun this hover board to gadget okay" to becontinued...because i have to go to bed good night, is robertson really eating a burito no! their now heres an excuse not to read the nexted story but who is this tormented one find out next time on a freaking balance story okay bye
p.s pm me if you want your character to be in my stories (including tornament of heroes) ohyeah and a word of advice dont try to put on gogles under water it burnssssssss okay bye
OK i have been up all night looking at people posts on like 5 different sites. this idea kinda popped into my head the other night.
name: doesnt matter yet
age: teens 15-17 not sure
height + weight: average-ish
Abilities: control time
i cant really sleep at night so i spend my time thinking of the craziest things that i want, and to control time would be wicked cool. so im thinking for this kid to basically look like me, tallish lke 6 foot, 16 most likely and one night he just says " i wish (or like i want something that doesnt sound wicked corny) to control time. My main reason for this whole time thing to enter my brain was my father just died of cancer and he spent his last days in the house, asleep in his bed. Pretty much every night i would ask for more time with him. my comic kid would have a similar back-story and after the tragic event wouldnt see a point in helping people. He would start stealing things and you know that whole death and destructionpath the troulbed youth head down. anyways then i dunno some kinda miraculous event makes him change to good, havent quite gotten that one yet but i know that i want him to travel down the path of evil becuase i mean there are to many comics about how you gotta use your powers for good. anyways so yea i wanna figure some kinda way (a villain perhaps) to give him something to fight for but also keep his edge.
Appearance: again i want him to look like me, emo-punk-ska kid, im thinking like a black hoodie that kinda conceals his identity, dark jeans and a dark band tshirt, hair long infront of face which hides face even more because a hoodie isnt that concealing. Maybe some white streaks in the hair too, i would do it 2 myself but anymore dye in my hair and it will fall out.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK AND IDEAS
what balance is the best no im joking it depends but any way one day im going to create a studio called donkey joker studios or joker donkey studios or just donkey studios or maby just joker studios or joker comics or donkey studios any way it where i create my joker or donkey comics and like marvel or DC they all have a well known character sort of like an icon like marvel's is spiderman or xmen and Dc super man or bat man mine would be Balance see but any way ill try to place a studio in each major contenent like aferica or usa or uk or asia or what ever any way the big idea is if an average kid like me or adult has a great i dea for a comic or movie or video game but mainly comic than i give them a chance they have full custady over there comic their idea could be a flop or be a ledgend but any way my whole big idea is well to give people opertunities because i need one
oh yeah my computer is kind of screwed im at my grand ma house so if you dont see a balance story or some post from me dont thank that the maker of this web site kicked me off or something for my balance stories being to well.... adult swim like and if your thanking there not oh they will be soon enough first i got to build a reputation or as you youngings say rep