EARLY HOGWARTS james and lillys story

EARLY HOGWARTS james and lilly
The train speeded down the track and still james thought about the girl he had seen earlier.
He hope they were both in the same house. James turned when the door opened and a boy walked in
'hello my names serious black, you are?" he asked as he took a seat across from James.
'Im James potter' he said shaking serious's hand.
'so which house you hoping to be in then?' serious asked as he opened a box of berty bott's every flavour beans
'well i don't mind really ' James said as he looked out of the window.
The door opened again and another boy appeared. "erm....is it ok if i come in here?" he asked
'yeah sure take a seat' the new boy sat next to James. they boys started to talk and found
out they had a lot in common mostly the tricks they played on people. It was getting dark when Serious stood up to leave
the room to find something to eat when the door opened and someone ran into him.
'hey watch it' he sai to the little boy.
'im sorry its just those people are trying to turn me into a snail' he said

Great job i like it alot! ( I think its spelled like sirus though)

i luv it!! i hope u keep riting~!!

Originally posted by hk_*^^*
i luv it!! i hope u keep riting~!!

ok i'll try and remember how you spell it now... i was told that you spelt it serious sorry
so its sirius?

oh yeah i might write anything cuz i making it all up as i posted it...
so do u really like it?

wonderful!
brilliant!
perfect!
get the point?
if anyone disses this story then they face me!

yeah and it's spelt like the dog star's name
sirius
ironic that he turs into a dog!

hey kaz its good!!!!!!!!!!!!

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thanks
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told u id chec it out!!!
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This is better than mine.

urs is good 2

James and sirius looked at the group of boys looking in to each room.
'hey, you two seen a lad running round....anybody would think he was scared of us.'
the small chubby one said to sirius.
'what you want him for?' james asked he said glaring at the tall boy.
'we just wanna talk to him....no harm in that is there?' he said with a evil grin.
'he went that way.' sirius said pointing to the front of the train. the boys started to
walk in that direction. james turned to go back into the room where the boy was
hiding. when he heard sirius say 'don't hurt the boy to bad....alright.' then he followed
james into the room.
'ok so im james and this is my friend sirius who are you?' he asked to two strangers
'im remus lupin' said the dark blonde hair boy.
'er....im.....peter...pettigrew' he said glancing towards the door. 'erm....thank you for everything'

im guessing but i bet i wrote his name wrong but if you could tell me how you spell it.....it'll help 😄

Originally posted by kaz larner
im guessing but i bet i wrote his name wrong but if you could tell me how you spell it.....it'll help 😄

peter pettigrew i think i spelt it wrong

Originally posted by kaz larner
peter pettigrew i think i spelt it wrong

its good and its spelt rite.

Originally posted by hk_*^^*
its good and its spelt rite.

yes it's really cool!
no one else has done another before arry story!

Loving it already!! ( Just got to work on ur conventions.)