Vaya's poetry.

Started by vaya_the_elf25 pages

🙂 Have you ever entered in one before?

only one other time....didn't place though *shrugs*

Well I hope my poem was good enough. I wrote it only in two mins, or so

hahaaha...if i knew which was yours id tell you. as it is they're all good!

Yes. They are pretty good

it'd been awesome if there were more though...at least 10

Well if not then I guess it makes the choice easier.

couldna said it better meself...innit?

Definitely... I've already critiqued the ones we have and that was quite difficult. The final decision will be even harder cry

well i'd hate to be in your shoes then...uh-uh!

Originally posted by Syren
Definitely... I've already critiqued the ones we have and that was quite difficult. The final decision will be even harder cry

I wouldn't doubt it in the least hug

you all had better have entered! 😂 i hope....

Originally posted by Syren
Definitely... I've already critiqued the ones we have and that was quite difficult. The final decision will be even harder cry

That would be hard, but you pick what you feel is the best. Thats all you can do. Anyways its just a contest, and its suppose to for fun anyways

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
you all had better have entered! 😂 i hope....

mayyyybeh 😖hifty: 😛

yes no maybe. hahaha hmmm. fun. it was fun to write on a topic i rarely touch... I hope all who entered enjoyed it!

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
yes no maybe. hahaha hmmm. fun. it was fun to write on a topic i rarely touch... I hope all who entered enjoyed it!

Yeah it was pretty interesting writing mine lol. Finished one I'd started over a month before 😛

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
yes no maybe. hahaha hmmm. fun. it was fun to write on a topic i rarely touch... I hope all who entered enjoyed it!

Joy is not something I write about a lot either

Originally posted by Coldfire
Yeah it was pretty interesting writing mine lol. Finished one I'd started over a month before 😛

Glad you were able to finish it

Originally posted by vaya_the_elf
Joy is not something I write about a lot either

Glad you were able to finish it


Yeah one down, like 8 or more to go 😛

hahah well get on em! like white on rice! 😂

Something inside, and its killing me
How can I be so cold?
Why do I always want to let go?
When I get so close to you. Then all I want to do is let go.
Fear of pain, and fear of you.
Something inside, and it kills me so
You want so much, and my insides ache
Not from you, but from others who hurt me so
Everytime you get close. I want to let go
Not because I don't love you, but because I'm scared
For something is inside me, and it kills me so
Others have loved me, or so it seemed
They left me to bleed.
Are you the one?
Or are you gonna be my pain?
something is inside, and it kills me so