if you think its so horrible.... heres everyuthing i got.... deal with it as you please.
Griffendors Set:
Slytherin:
Grammar/ spelling: 9/10
Creativity: 18/20
Originality: 9/10
KMC stuff: 9/10
Total: 45/50
Hufflepuff:
Grammar/spelling: 8/10
Creativity: 20/20
Originality: 10/10
KMC stuff: 9/10
Total: 47/50
Ravenclaw:
Grammar/ spelling: 9/10
Creativity: 18/20
Originality: 10/10
KMC stuff: 9/10
Total: 46/50
Hufflepuffs Set:
SCORING:Gryffindor
Grammar/spelling: 4/10 points-there was a lot of repeating mistakes
Creativity: 20/20 points
Originality: 10/10 points
Reflecting the KMC
personalities (ex:
using member's
names, ppl from
different houses,
places in the KMC
thread, etc.) 10/10 points
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TOTAL 44/50 points
Ravenclaw
Gammer: 9/10
Creativity: 18/20
Originality: 8/10
Personalitys: 9/10
Total: 44
Slytherin Score:
grammer, 9/10
creativity, 20/20
originality 9/10
reflecting the KMC personlaities, 9.5/10
TOTAL:
47.5
Slytherins Set:
Ravenclaw
grammer, 8/10
creativity, 19/20
originality 9/10
reflecting the KMC personlaities, 9/10
TOTAL:
45
Originality - I really liked the idea, but you could have expanded just a bit more. *9/10*
Grammar - You could have edited it a little, there was a lot of missed commas.... *4/10*
Creativity - I loved how you made fun of yourselves and had fun with this. The ending went a little random, but I liked it. *17/20*
Members according to house - I thought that it was kind-of strange that there was only three members in your house, but I guess that's your most active members. I'm sure that there are less active members that you could have included. I liked that Rogue was headmaster. *6/10*
*~*Total - 36/50*~*
Griffendor:
Grammar/spelling: /10 points 8
Creativity: /20 points 18
Originality: /10 points 9
Reflecting the KMC 7
personalities (ex:
using member's
names, ppl from
different houses,
places in the KMC
thread, etc.) /10 points
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TOTAL /50 points 42
Ravenclaws set:
Slytherins
Spelling/Grammer- 9, some words were spelling wrong, and a few grammer errors but good 🙂 (thank god for spell check!)
Creativity: 18, I thought it was really clever. and that ending, lol, was really not expected! nice
Originality: 9. Very orginal. You made it during the 5th book and have it fit (sorta) into the story plot and then you turned it around
Reflecting the KMC
personalities: 8. I thought people were in character sometimes people would jump in and out, but it was good
Hufflepuff:
Grammar/spelling: 9/10 points
Creativity: 17.5/20 points
Originality: 8/10 points
Reflecting the KMC personalities: 8.5/10 points
... total 43/50 points
Gryffs score
Grammer and Spelling: 8 Pretty good, a few things here and there
Creativity: Pretty good 17
Originality: 8
Reflecting the KMC personalities: 6.5 I thought it was a bit out there
39.5
Originally posted by RaventheOnly
🙄 i don't know 🙄like what do you hate about it?
i DONT MIND THAS WAY IT WAS SET OUT EXCEPT THE FACT THAT YOU GOADED GRYFFINDOR FOR COMEING BOTTOM WICH IT OUT OF ORDER EVERY ONE WHO WORKED ON ALL OF THE STORIES SUBMITTED WORKED HARD BY GOADING GRYFFINDOR YOU WERE BEING OUT OF ORDER TO THE PEOPLE WHO WORKED HARD TO WRITE IT. RTO.
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