My poems

A few poems I wrote... What do you think?

Mountain Biking
Riding through the fields at night,
My destination is not in sight,
I simply ride with all my might.

Riding through the snow and rain,
Pushing through the heat and pain,
Nothing to loose and nothing to gain.

Riding through a street or path,
Making the turns and doing the math,
Awaiting my day of wrath.

Riding faster and faster,
Slipping and sliding to avoid disaster,
On a quest to become a master.

Riding for distance riding for speed,
Making a final sprint as I bleed,
Fighting and fighting to take the lead.

I stand alone,

and day after day I moan,

They don’t know how much I’ve grown,

They don’t know who I am at the bone,

The revelations that I tell,

Are only glimpses into my hell,

They look at me and see a shell,

They see the top of a bottomless well,

Many people know me,

But I am not what they see,

They don’t know what is the key,

They don’t know ultimate fee.

Lone Wolf

He travels across the lonely land,

He runs across the pits of sand,

Howling at the moon at night,

Howling at the never ending fight,

Watching the burning sun arise,

Watching the mountains of infinite size,

Climbing in and out of the cold,

To survive is the only goal.

Broken Heart

I have no allies I have no friends,

Only a broken heart that will not mend,

I look back at my life in the past,

When things didn’t move so fast,

To fight this world alone is my legacy,

To die in this world alone is my destiny.

Which Way

Do I go Left,

Do I go right,

Either way I can’t see what’s in sight,

Do I take the road that’s high,

Do I take the road that’s low,

Either way the journey is slow,

Do I run,

Do I stay,

Either way I don’t know what to say.

Do I stay silent,

Do I ask,

Either way you can’t see through my mask

Here are a few more. I write poems when I'm depressed so most are very... dark...

The anger boiling in my blood,
Fueling A cold dark rage,
I fight and fight only to fall in the mud,
Striving to escape my cage.

I Cant get out of this jail,
I’m frozen at hells gate,
All I want is a pardon or bail,
But I can’t stop the hate!

My life is slipping into the cold,
The icy fingers of death at my door,
I test my grip but it just won’t hold,
For my hands are getting sore.

My life is passing by,
Slowly fading into the past,
Everyday I’m living a lie,
Like a dream that just won’t last.

I scream a desperate plea into the dark,
But this world roars back,
I work and work to leave my mark,
But I’m just ready to crack.

I wish I could just go back,
Searching for the answer in the night,
Trying to find what I lack,
Do I give up or do I fight.

But then in the darkness I see a light,
A energy as bright as the sun,
And I try to reach it with all my might,
I choose my path and run.

But then my hopes are crushed like a bug,
All my dreams are ripped away from my soul,
Then I wipe the shattered pieces of love under the rug,
And once again search the darkness for a goal.

Love...

I see you down below,
I watch you with observant eyes,
I wonder if I should walk down and say hello,
But when I do I am at a loss of words…

I listen to you talking with your friends,
I throw in the occasional word which I usually regret,
I feel dizzy and sick like I have the Benz,
But I still try to make some sort of progress….

I see you across the seat,
I watch you with loving eyes,
I move closer until I feel your heat,
But I know that you don’t really care….

I feel your head leaned against my shoulder,
I can’t get enough of the feeling,
I want to tell you the truth which is sitting on me like a boulder,
But you seem so cold to me…

I feel so stupid,
I sit and try to talk to you but the words just won’t come,
I think that I’m hopeless even for Cupid,
But I can’t give it up…

I feel like I’m a child,
Everything I say I regret later,
Nothing comes out right its just too mild,
I don’t know…

Oooo you're good!

Thanks 🙂

No problem. Write more please!

Nice. Love's a nice one. ^^

Cold

The freezing ice surrounding me,
I can feel the cold seeping into my bones,
Trying to get free,
Yelling into the darkness with moans.

The darkness of night surrounding my life,
I can feel the blackness consuming my soul,
Shadows cutting into me like a knife,
No matter how hard I try I can’t escape this hellhole.

I’m frozen in time,
My life is going no where,
I have past my prime,
I can’t escape this nightmare.

I’m stuck in this dull routine,
Day after day it repeats,
The future for me is unseen,
But its sure to be filled with more defeats.

Very nice.

my turn my turn

I was hoping

I was hoping I'd live forever
I was hoping I'd never feel pain
I was hoping no one would shed any tears
standing over my grave.

I was hoping to be enternal
my candle would always burn bright
I was hoping to always live in the sunshine
and never to be victim of the night

I was hoping I'd live forever
I was hoping I'd never die
because I won't go to heaven because of all my sins and lies

I was hoping I'd live forever
because if I die
I would end up in hell
but at least I'd know why. 😄

Nice one, 👆

thanx

Originally posted by yodafan
Cold

The freezing ice surrounding me,
I can feel the cold seeping into my bones,
Trying to get free,
Yelling into the darkness with moans.

The darkness of night surrounding my life,
I can feel the blackness consuming my soul,
Shadows cutting into me like a knife,
No matter how hard I try I can’t escape this hellhole.

I’m frozen in time,
My life is going no where,
I have past my prime,
I can’t escape this nightmare.

I’m stuck in this dull routine,
Day after day it repeats,
The future for me is unseen,
But its sure to be filled with more defeats.

Really good 👆

Good job Mainstream and yodafan; those are both really good