Mind babble...

Originally posted by Fëanor
one final one....🤨

Oh man, oh man…you’ll never believe it
Even if I tell you, you’d still have to see it
So therefore I must without delay
My tale begins on a cold blustery day
I had walked a mile, alone by the sea
A girl? A fish? Hm, nah it cannot be
But surely so, before my eye
Twas a mermaid of legend that I did spy
Langorious hair, golden in colour
Skin so soft, tis true upon my honour
Her legs were naught but a tail of a fish
Though curvy legs I had fervently wished
And on the beach she did so lay
Cautiously I crept and had hoped to say
O’ lady fair, O’ lady fair does my eye bid true
Not a woman, not a fish, but a mermaid be you
And so I am said she like a song
But my time on land twill not be long
So tally not in thy query, O’ lovely man
Sit you now, right here upon the sand
I did as she bid, like a boy who is lost
As the cold wind bit, and soon too the frost
Well said she, have you nothing to say?
I pondered long, but my thoughts had betrayed
For the sight of her breasts did cause me to rise
She smirked a smile, and a wink of her eye
Did caress me with so much tender
As I sighed so softly at her wondrous splendour
To the sounds of the waves crashing upon the land
I came too soon, oh dear oh man…
And sleep overcame me for I was spent
And upon waking the maid had went.

thanx amber 🙂

wave c yous

Originally posted by Fëanor
thanx amber 🙂

wave c yous

dang it been off too long.... missed my chance to make fun of you rapping. hahahah very nice works dude! very nice. hahahah !

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
dang it been off too long.... missed my chance to make fun of you rapping. hahahah very nice works dude! very nice. hahahah !

i don't normally title my stuff but....

Un amour d's'affliger

Part I

By a tiny river that was babbling by,
Sat I alone, gazing towards the sky.
The sweeping land full of verdant green,
Yet for miles around not a soul was seen.

I cared little for I felt secure.
The view and the river was my allure.
So in this state I sat most content.
The breeze was cool, as time had spent.

Then to my dismay a noise was heard.
Not the sound of an animal, yea nor of a bird,
Twas that of a man approaching fast.
My solitary moment did not last.

And upon seeing, this man was he,
Strangely at first, transformed into me?
I stared in wonder for surely so
Where there was one now two fo sho

Sat he beside me and said good day
A nod of my head for I had nothing to say
Amazed are you at seeing yourself?
Honestly though I am here to help.

I wondered at that statement so sure so proud
That my twin had voiced his words so loud
But my mouth would not move, nor words could I spit
As I stared quite ridiculously to him, by me, he had sit

After a while, I said with uncertainty
You said to help, for what and how and why just me?
That my twin is an answer unlooked
But the truth you seek is beyond this brook

Look now, the world is full of green
The clouds up high, the birds unseen
And here you sit, while the world moves on
Deep in thought for a love that’s gone

A tear had spilt, but I wiped it dry
No not this day, this man, not I shall cry
For my twin spoke truly and did not hesitate
A love born and died, and my heart had ached

Part II

Confounded, dumbfounded, my heart laid open
Sadly I said, this was not the path chosen
I had loved entirely and without regret
Upon the day that she and I had met

We had talked so little but said so much
I laughed and cried as my soul was touched
By her smile and beauty was plain to see
But did I think for a moment that she had loved me?

I wondered to myself and yet did not pry
Afraid of the answer, so I did not try
To glean the truth, what little was said
So the shoulder sagged, as I lowered my head

My lovelorn twin a pity for sure
Shed no tear and weep no more
A love that is lost can be found again
Not today, not tomorrow, only time knows when

Be happy, in that you did have love
For too many hours spent in searching of
A thing so fleeting, gone in a whim
The future is bright, the past is dimmed

Know you then there is another
If you can open yourself and be bothered
This one truly feels what she say
You’ve but too ask, dally not this day

Uncertain I was of my twins advice
For love is a thing beyond my price
I can hurt one time, but to risk a chance
For an unlikely moment of happenstance?

Regret and woe, that cannot be my lot
I’ve only wanted what most have got
A love to surround me gaily and tender
As I rejoice of that awesome splendour

And upon turning my twin had gone
To where I knew not, somewhere beyond.
But his words were nothing if but true
Dare I risk in saying, that I love you?

Fea... cry

Yes?

😖 I was saying your poem = touched

i know Ele... i know

but it means nothing.....and yet everything, depends on how you see it

but see it for what it is, and not for what you think 😄

Originally posted by Fëanor
i know Ele... i know

but it means nothing.....and yet everything, depends on how you see it

but see it for what it is, and not for what you think 😄

Originally posted by Elessea
So, it doesnt mean, what I think is means 😬

i'll say this tho - my future lies in my past which is dependant on the now

Originally posted by Fëanor
that depends entirely on what it is you think....but then again since i'm being very vague, you can never know

i'll say this tho - my future lies in my past which is dependant on the now

You arn't on msn anymore 😖

Originally posted by Elessea
Thats clears everything up Fea 🙄

You arn't on msn anymore 😖

Oh 😐 That's exciting...

Hrm...does the poem something to do with Carolina? (Meh...perhaps you won't understand the code 😖)

it is very exciting 😐

Carolina? no....but a thing that is both deadly and life saving

(does thou know what carolina is? 😕)

Does this thing involve the opposite of yourself?

truthfully the question that needs asking is: do YOU know what carolina is?

and no, this involves the sameness of me

I does indeed.

The sameness of you. I see 😕