Mind babble...

Started by DreamingWarrior43 pages

Dang man... haha nice.

Originally posted by Fëanor
i call this: erotica poetica....sort of, i guess

‘Neath the ethereal glow of light from the moon that shines through the opened window, your form glimmers softly, angelic, beatific. The hair, like gentle waves that laps against the midnight shore, undulates gingerly away from your face without fuss or regard, for each strand is like no other to that which is its neighbour.

The soft pink of your skin takes on an amber like essence as you slowly sway from your side. And on your back, arched like so, arm above you in a beckoning gesture, the sheet laying across the softness of your belly and below your bosom, causes me to gasp in anxious anticipation of what may come. Full ripe lips, I follow the line…to the neck and below that which is your mark of womanhood.

I reach out to touch, but dare not lest I wake your sleeping form. My fingers but linger for a little while, mere inches, less than so, close yet still too far. I dare. The weight of a down feather would be more than that which is my finger as it traces the contours, soft yet firm. My breathing shallows and quickens. As does yours, but the eyes remain closed. Do I see a hint of a smile?

Every breath a sigh, every movement of my hand a graceful dance, and your body is the stage. Your movements subtle, mine without grace. The rounded shoulder calls out to be touched. The supple arms long to be grasped. The smooth shapely line a work of art that pales to all of God’s work, how then can man’s feeble attempt compare? My eyes drink its full, but my heart is not sated.

The man is incomplete. My yearning grows, if only for a kiss from those soft, full, ripe lips that part slightly, the whites of the teeth a glimpse. I look away, as my heart beats to the rhythm of a drum: quick pace. I return, and there, prone, seductive, silently calling out, beckoning only a woman can, you look at me through half-slitted eyes, the mouth forms a small smile.


😑 Wow..... I don't have anything to say to that.... well this might do: jawdrop 😛 😂

Originally posted by Coldfire
😑 Wow..... I don't have anything to say to that.... well this might do: jawdrop 😛 😂
😮..........bag

Originally posted by Fëanor
😮..........bag

😆 😂 Shit man I thought I was nearly reading something I'd written there 😛 😆

Originally posted by Coldfire
😆 😂 Shit man I thought I was nearly reading something I'd written there 😛 😆
😆

Originally posted by Fëanor
😆

😛 😉

😄

hey amber....laurie text me the other night, i was soooo happy 😱

Originally posted by Fëanor
😄

hey amber....laurie text me the other night, i was soooo happy 😱


😱 She did?! Awesomeness!! 😄

haha your real name's amber? ha wow.

Originally posted by Coldfire
😱 She did?! Awesomeness!! 😄
i know!!!😱 nearly had a heart attack i did.......sadly, i couldn't text her back 🙁
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha your real name's amber? ha wow.
let's keep that on the low pro mah bruthah 🥷

sorry coldfire bag

Originally posted by Fëanor
I have walked the path unlooked for, am caught upon a web that has bound me head to foot. I struggled vainly against it yet to no avail am I freed of its grasp, so tight it has me as to suffocate a lesser person but freely do I breath the sweet air. I am its slave but free of will is my burden, my gift, my treasure. Not the brilliance of finely honed stone is it, nor of glittering works of metal that luster as the sun, or the gleam of the moon upon an eboned sky that shimmers with untold lights, to this I say nay, for it is more precious than that and more brightly does it shine. I am a man, a man am I that is both blessed and cursed. For this fragile heart of flesh and blood has been pierced by the thinly shaft of Eros’ quiver. On that day, that which was me of old had died, and in its place rising from the ashes like a phoenix a new man has come forth. A man that must gladly and willingly suffer its fate without regret, fear or remorse; and to be bound till the ending of time. Time and time that wheels upon itself over and under, to this is what love is and will be to me.

As said by cold, beautimous.

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
As said by cold, beautimous.
dude....never fall in love, lest you end up writing such as these

but if you must, as we all must one day....then do it with zest and gusto 😄

and thanks my man

what was the name of that mag?

Originally posted by Fëanor
dude....never fall in love, lest you end up writing such as these

but if you must, as we all must one day....then do it with zest and gusto 😄

and thanks my man

what was the name of that mag?

Poetry, and that's it, I'm not sure if it'll be next month im published, if not then September,

patience is a virtue i've learned well my friend....

Originally posted by Fëanor
i know!!!😱 nearly had a heart attack i did.......sadly, i couldn't text her back 🙁 let's keep that on the low pro mah bruthah 🥷

sorry coldfire bag


haha yeah. ha! never fall in love????? how the F#@! do you accomplish that? if you have learned to master the heart, please! inform me. I am sick of it.

Originally posted by Fëanor
i know!!!😱 nearly had a heart attack i did.......sadly, i couldn't text her back 🙁 let's keep that on the low pro mah bruthah 🥷

sorry coldfire bag


Lol I don't care if people know my real name or not 😛 No worries 😄
Originally posted by Fëanor
dude....never fall in love, lest you end up writing such as these

but if you must, as we all must one day....then do it with zest and gusto 😄

and thanks my man

what was the name of that mag?


Lol yeah how the f%@# do you stop that? I haven't found a way yet. And when you are heartbroken you look at all your lovey dovey poems and want to be sick. But then you go and write hateful or depressing poems to take their place. So the circle never ends lol

^^^ uh, this gal is so on the ball she is knocking us older folks off... yeah, hahaha is very true.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
^^^ uh, this gal is so on the ball she is knocking us older folks off... yeah, hahaha is very true.

Lol I am? Thanks 😛 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol I don't care if people know my real name or not 😛 No worries 😄

*whew*nosweat
thanx amber....😄

Originally posted by Fëanor
*whew*nosweat
thanx amber....😄

haha no problem huh 😉 😛