Fullmetal Alchemist RP

Started by silvertsume50 pages

... it was dark as kaze walked along.. it started gettting cold to .. her wet hair chilled her to the bone.. she put a hand on ash. " well..." *shivers* " smart move on my part.... im sorry boy..." ed's face crossed her mind, and she sat against a tree..wishing she had not left him... at least with out saying good bye... *suddenly it starts raining, and its freezing out 2.. * kaze trembled, now soaked, and hudled close to ash.. soon she passed out, developing hypothermia.

-left when thinking ed was safe and walked off and tripping over someone-
ack! what th... -saw kaze there and picked her up-

*shifts and coughs in lances arms, now hypothermic and in danger of lungs collapsing*

-wraped her in his cloak and took her to the hospital as fast as he could

* starts sweating and trembling* kaze knew someone was there... she just didnt know who... *ash tagged along at lances heels*

-ran in to the hospital a few minutes later-

*winces as tubes are stuck down her throat, and ian IV tube in her wrist*

i would like to join
name:razor
sex:male
eye color:red

razor runs in hurry i want a full check on stds and heart rate

Originally posted by silvertsume
*winces as tubes are stuck down her throat, and ian IV tube in her wrist*

-lance watches to makesure she is ok-
Originally posted by frylock
i would like to join
name:razor
sex:male
eye color:red

not bad but look on page one and read the rulse on makeing characters

*whines in pain* -ash growls nervously-

its ok ash.... -pets him alittle-

sweet jesus no it .....it just cant be (UM I WILL DO THE NAME SUBJECT THINGY LATER IF ITS OK)

nurse come quickly (the n nurse rushes in) (razor whispers into the doctors ear) nurse- sir it cant be it dosent make sence

i have something i must tell u u have a ingraved markeing of the phylosiphers stone on your heart soon u will be possed by pure evil only one thing can save u.

a new heart from a true loved one.

i am afriade u are the only hope we need your heart...... or we can use the nurses rasor pushes his hand threw the nursed body grabs her heart and slames it in to ashed heart...o ya i am that good.

any one here

(yes um your new so i'll be nice ok wait a little bit for ppl to respond don't post every two or three minutes)

[..you said you needed the heart from a loved one..why are you using the nurses? why not use Ed's? He cares for her..lets go with that] *Ed got his new arm on, and suddenly heard news that Kaze was suffering from hypothermia. He ran outside with his jaacket and ran to the hospital*