Lost to the Winds

Posted outta boredom. O.o Tell me whatchya think ^_^

Here I am
The sun is rising again
Giving life to a new day
Laying fire on my skin
And stinging my eyes
I want to turn away
Get lost in another dream
Shut the door
And silence the unforgiving
Bathing in moonlight
My mind at ease
I can't face
A new beginning
Without promise
Everyone around me
Has walked on into
Expected destinies
Success so easy
For all of them
I don't understand
Why everything I do
Is a failure
I guess I'm not meant
To be
Lost to the winds
Scattered like hope
Hope forever lost
Warm tears upon my cheeks
Here I am
Letting it all just drift away.

Oooo nice. I like the shortness of the lines; and you didn't overcomplicate it by adding in a ton of extra words, just the ones needed (Did that even make sense? lol 😛) Well I'd like to read some more of yours if you'd post em.

Heya and thanks Coldfire ^_^

If you wanna read more, then go to allpoetry.com and search for my user name on there. 'Ghostly Theatre'. I have over 100 poems up on that site.. lol. so. I might post things on here again from time to time but if I put my stuff anywhere, it's there.

Glad you liked it, and thanks for readin! 🙂