~Sorry I took so long to post. I was waiting on Kaiy’s messages. Oh and I was too lazy to edit your post and write it again, so I just quoted you 😛, but I took out all your OOC. We need this thread to be more alive!~
Jin suddenly felt a surprisingly sharp blow to his head. But it did not feel like his head was hurting, it felt like his mind was the one in pain. Although he was still asleep, he could somehow still feel his body, and slowly he was beginning to see a blurry image.
Originally posted by kaiy037
Walking down the long hall corridor or what was the past, and is the present.A girl called out to her mother, hoping to hear an answer. When she heard no answer, no sound what so ever, she began to jog to the end of the hall, slowly opening the door. The door creaked as the girl crawled inside. It was a rather large room. Looking around she searched for a sign of her mom. Following further and further into the room. She called out to her again.
This dream didn’t seem like a dream at all, it seemed like a vision or some kind of movie. It started out like a normal one, but then it began to turn towards another direction.
Only this time she received a noise. Not her mother. It was from something else. It sickened her to the bone. Turning, she stared into the corner where her mothers’ bed was. She gasped, falling to the floor. As she fell, she began to crawl and push herself backwards until she hit a wall.There on the bed was her mother. But it seemed as if she was just moving in an awkward way. Until what dropped the girl to her knees made its appearance. It seemed to only be a shadowed figure. Its eyes burned a fiery blood-red. The eyes were the only thing visible enough to make out among the shadow. But it soon began to come up further from her mother. It seemed it dripped with blood. The creature flopped the lifeless body to the floor.
Her mother lay there in front of her. Her skin was an ash bluish grey. Her eyes were empty, and her throat had to puncture wounds. Upon her mothers’ chest seemed to look as if something had fed upon it, actually ripping it to shreds. But it was. That's what scared the girl.
She looked back up to the creature, which seemed to just sit there, bother legs propped up with arms propped up in them. It jumped from the bed, landing on the body. It hissed at her, revealing pearl glistening teeth, like humans. Only on each side were three unusually sharpened teeth.
As she opened her mouth to scream, she was immediately silenced by the hand across it. The creature was right on her. Its eyes glowing. It hushed her then placed its mouth across her throat. Her eyes widened as pain surged through her. Her body began to ache. She stared into the dark fiery eyes of her death. It was watching her. As if longingly. Soon enough, its eyes closed as her remains of life were sucked away. When they opened, her heart just burst.
She knew those eyes. They were the eyes of her dear friend. She knew but one sense of life remained in her body. So with her last pulse, she spoke. "Alex." Was all she said. Then she fell to the ground.
Soon the creature was no longer a creature anymore. But instead, a boy. His hair messy and fell into his face. His body type was built but not all too much. Just enough. His skin let off a glow of hazel.
He stared down at the girl, disbelief in his eyes. Quickly, he swiped her in his arms, as he raised his wrist to his mouth, ready to draw blood, but only ended up biting his own tongue. Footsteps were coming down the hall. Calling for the girl. He kicked the dead body with enough force it rolled under the bed. Thinking quick as the door opened, he kissed the girl. The door opened to a booming father-figure. He shut up as soon as he saw the two. He apologized for the interruption then left.
Blood dripped from the boy’s cut on his tongue. He hoped it'd be enough to bring her back just some. His wish was granted as he felt her mouth yearning for more blood. He released all the blood that had bled to his mouth to hers.
As she took the blood, her chest began to beat faster than imaginable. The kiss ended as her chest heaved up. She began to whimper and moan in pain. Not wanting to attract attention, Alex scooped the girl in his arms and darted through the draped window of the old log cabin.
The girl was soon laied to the ground. The pain had stopped. She stared up into the boys’ eyes as he whispered her name.
"Taikze."
I know I’ve heard that name somewhere before, but where? Where? Just then it hit him. This was no ordinary girl, and neither was this an ordinary dream. This one the girl he had dragged into the cabin not too long ago. But why was he seeing this vision? Why was she there? Who was that boy? Why did they feast on each others blood? What is going on?!?
Consumed by the grief of these questions, Jin’s entire world began to shake. It started off slow, but then began to continuously worsen. Jin, still unaware of his surroundings, closed his eyes and began to drift into the darkness, tearing him away from the girl’s vision.
Opening his eyes, Jin gave off a sense of anger which would have scared off even the most deadly of beasts. Feeling a light shine onto his face, the anger began to dissipate. The sun was out and the air was blowing. Jin had awoken from the vision, but still pondered the many questions the once plagued his mind.
Noticing the trembling feeling Jin had not noticed earlier, he looked down at the source of the vibrations. It was the girl. Looking to the bed he saw that she had awoken quite awhile ago, but the bed was still a mess.
Turning his attention towards the girl again, Jin picked her up, and ran into the cabin to lay her into the bed again. He thought to himself that if she was trembling, maybe it was because she was cold. Besides, who knows how long she had been outside for, she might have caught some kind of disease.
Placing her onto the bed and wrapping her up with the sheets was a simple task, but she still kept trembling. Realizing he couldn’t do anything to stop her from trembling, Jin began to shake the girl so she would wake up. “Hey, you need to wake up. Can you hear me? I said wake up!”
Continuously yelling out to her, Jin kept shaking her, hoping that she would somehow wake up. Blinding himself momentarily, Jin looked at the cause of the problem. It was a necklace. It looked oddly familiar, but that was not important right now. Dropping the chain onto the ground, Jin grabbed the girl by her shoulders and began to shake her violently and continued screaming at her.
~Sorry, I forgot that you stopped trembling, but I’m too lazy to change it, so we’ll just say that you began to tremble again. I can’t count this post as a challenge to yours, since your post is part of it, so even if this is bigger then your post, it’s disqualified. Post soon!!~
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Name: Aladine
Age:16
Powers: Necromancer
Race: Human
Apperence: Cargo JNCO pants, Vans Maveric 2's, Black tank top with white out line on the shoulders, silver eyes, black hair longer than ears shorter than neck.
Bio: Aladine remembers nothing about himself after he became a necromancer. He makes him self look like a Skater, he carries his skatebored with him every where he goes. There isn't much to tell about him.
~A short synopsis of whats going on, very brief and I hope it helps. Follen (an elf) is sitting in the forest, by a lake i think, next to SilentWolf (a wolf 😛 ), they both are looking at each other and have been for a while. as you can see by my post, I'm trying to stop Kaiy(vamp/human) from trembling. For character names, info. and slightly bigger explanations on whats going on, go back a few pages and start reading.~
Note: I have not included the names of the characters because I do not know them by heart and because I am too lazy to go back and check what there names are. Feel free to do that yourselves 🙂 .