((itz a Vampire story i'm writing. I think i got the profile down pretty well, how's this?
Name: Sakura
Gender: Female
Age: 3 summers/17 years
Appearance: Sakura has an ivory white pelt. Her eyes are a shining gold color and always seem to be attracted to the mountains. Her legs are built strong and durable against the harshest conditions were she would need to flee for endless days. Her ears and nose are perfect tools for hunting. She has keen hearing which can pick up the sound of a hoof stepping upon the autumn leaves. Her nose twitches and catches the smallest of a deer scent. As Sakura inspects a place where a deer might have lied down or grazed she can tell if it is wounded, how old the deer is, buck or doe, and can even tell which leg is lame.
Personality: Sakura has a gentle personality, like an ocean breeze upon a young pup's face. She is kind and soft spoken. She will take any wolf in need under her wing and help them as best she can. She doesn't like the Darq wolves for they are cruel and dangerous. If one was ever hurt, however, Sakura would help the wolf. She can sense if something is troubling any of the wolves around her and will try her very best to cheer them up. Sakura also has many stories she tells about how the moon and stars got into the sky and the fearsome battle against the dreaded man and a single wolf. She teaches these stories to the pups to let their imaginations grow. Her heart longs to run in the mountains. She is also loyal and will stick close to her pack in any type of situation. She will not abandon a fellow pack member in a fight and will try whatever she can to save them.
Is that good? I'm going to post a picture of her wolf and human form, i just have to get them))