Jedi Academy 2: Dark Apprentice

Started by the-unforgiven53 pages

Luke: great work, lance... you have done well.. and you are all right i see. well done once again.. you may take it easy for a while.. these will talk.. thanks for the help lance.. you may go.. and may the force be with you...

Zuke: Listen.. Ravynn right? here is the thing.. i aint a troublemaker (err) i just love my dog..

-nods- oh and here r their light sabers -walks off-

"Yea, i understand that. Im not a trouble maker either, but I hate when people come after me for their problems."

Luke: thank you, lance..

Zuke: Well.. rae.. may i call you so? your saying it was not your fault fluffy got mad? who was it then.. he wont get mad at jedi's... he is not stupid..

Raevynn glared at the dog, then looked back at the man. "Maybe he just doesnt like me."

"may be.. but he is not acting like that then.., however.. sorry then.. must have been anotherone.. he has quite a good sense of people nearby and if they are thinking positive or negative at me or him"

Raevynn nodded. The dog really could sense something in her, and he didnt like it.

"good to see you calm.. i dont want to hurt you.. i want to help you.. i have been feeling sadness and corruption within you.."

"Corrupt? im not corrupted." she shot back defensivly

"you have hate and anger within you.. if that not is corruption i dont know.."

"am i right?"

She didnt say anything, she just stared at him.

-lance goes back to his quarters and meditates-

You guys have to stop posting so much crap in this thread. I went to school and when I came back there was six pages added. You do not need to make one-sentence posts. Cut it out. I'm refering to shadow12 and the unforgiven. You don't need to say "Lance goes back to the academy." And another thing, post in past tense. Example: Say "Lance went back to the academy," not "Lance goes back to the academy."

Jaden sat in the meditation room. His eyes shut and legs crossed. Pure thoughts, emotionless thoughts... he muttered. He was dissappointed in himself. He searched for something more then the powers of a Jedi. He was so eager to become a Jedi Knight or Jedi Master he would do anything to get that privilage. He thought of his brothers and sisters back home, with his mother. He sensed pain and suffering. Or were they his own feelings? The confusion tore him up inside. He hated the fact that Master Luke considered him a child and not good enough to go on missions by himself. The more he thought of it, the more his hate and anger lead him to the darkside...

Secondly, you do not have a dog called fluffy. Jedi do not have pets. They cannot have things to love.

sorry

Originally posted by BlackC@t
Secondly, you do not have a dog called fluffy. Jedi do not have pets. They cannot have things to love.

[[I suggest getting SilentWolf to dispose of Fluffy and then Unforgiven and Silentwolf to get in a big saber fight! 🙂]]

[]oooh!!! I like the idea!!![]

[[hehe... well.. okey, if thats what you want , im in for the idea..]]