Lets make are own X3 script

Started by Marvelgeek10 pages

Originally posted by pr1983
im good at multitasking... i can do a bit of everything, even stuntwork and costume design... 😄

Yeah me too! And the sound and camera guy. But u know what I'm really good at? Chocolate cake! U want? nosweat U want? Can I get u some slippers or coffe, u'll want some coffee! Jumpy 🤣 pray

Okay.This takes place after the Phoenix attack on magneto.

(back at Xaviers school)

Xavier senses Eric coming.Even though he senses that his old friends intentions aren't harmful,he still tells his students to be prepared.
Eric arrives in a jet,along with his Brotherhood.Xavier,along with Cyclops,Wolverine,Storm and Beast greet Magneto outside of the school.
Magneto,with his Brotherhood who consist of Mysitque,Avalanche,Pyro and Gambit exit the Jet.The X-men supeciously examine the Brotherhood and the Brotherhood does the same.Like their sizing eachother up.

Eric:We must have a talk Charles.It seems as if you star pupil has decided to take revenge for that little incident that took place so many years ago.

Xavier🙁eyes grow big sensing Erics mind has been manipulated).
Eric,What did Jean do to you?

Eric🙁hesitating) That's of no importance right now Charles.You need to use Cerebro to track her down.We have to stop her immediatly.

Xavier:I shut down Cerebro Eric.Last time I used it I nearly deystroyed every mutant on the planet and thanks to you i nearly deystroyed every human.

Eric:It's are only chance Charles!She's already deystroyed me and my childrens home.She'll come after yours next.

Charles and Eric have a brief stare down,looking into eachothers eyes.

Xavier:Very well.

Cyclops😛roffesor I don't think----

Xavier:Erics right Scott.This might be are only chance to stop Jean.

This is a rough draft.I'll up date it like I did the Magneto/Phoenix scene

Originally posted by pr1983
im good at multitasking... i can do a bit of everything, even stuntwork and costume design... 😄

Seriously?

Originally posted by mr.smiley
Okay.This takes place after the Phoenix attack on magneto.

(back at Xaviers school)

Xavier senses Eric coming.Even though he senses that his old friends intentions aren't harmful,he still tells his students to be prepared.
Eric arrives in a jet,along with his Brotherhood.Xavier,along with Cyclops,Wolverine,Storm and Beast greet Magneto outside of the school.
Magneto,with his Brotherhood who consist of Mysitque,Avalanche,Pyro and Gambit exit the Jet.The X-men supeciously examine the Brotherhood and the Brotherhood does the same.Like their sizing eachother up.

Eric:We must have a talk Charles.It seems as if you star pupil has decided to take revenge for that little incident that took place so many years ago.

Xavier🙁eyes grow big sensing Erics mind has been manipulated).
Eric,What did Jean do to you?

Eric🙁hesitating) That's of no importance right now Charles.You need to use Cerebro to track her down.We have to stop her immediatly.

Xavier:I shut down Cerebro Eric.Last time I used it I nearly deystroyed every mutant on the planet and thanks to you i nearly deystroyed every human.

Eric:It's are only chance Charles!She's already deystroyed me and my childrens home.She'll come after yours next.

Charles and Eric have a brief stare down,looking into eachothers eyes.

Xavier:Very well.

Cyclops😛roffesor I don't think----

Xavier:Erics right Scott.This might be are only chance to stop Jean.

This is a rough draft.I'll up date it like I did the Magneto/Phoenix scene

looks ok... but better to hear how it sounds to be sure...

Originally posted by mr.smiley
Seriously?

Yeah... im a bit of a control freak so i like to have a part in everything...

Originally posted by pr1983
looks ok... but better to hear how it sounds to be sure...

Yeah I read it aloud.It wasn't too bad.Needed to be longer though.

Originally posted by mr.smiley
Yeah I read it aloud.It wasn't too bad.Needed to be longer though.

Cool...

I can't find a way to work Beast into my plot which is really annoying.

involve the legacy virus...the xmen could call up a certain blue science guy to help'em out.

Originally posted by Mainstream
involve the legacy virus...the xmen could call up a certain blue science guy to help'em out.

Noooooooooo...

Way too big to be a little side plot...

Originally posted by pr1983
Noooooooooo...

Way too big to be a little side plot...


I agree.

I already have Sentinels, Juggernaut and Dark Phoenix. I don't need the Legacy virus thank you very much! lol And even now each of my multiple plots is probably underdeveloped.

Originally posted by xmarksthespot
I already have Sentinels, Juggernaut and Dark Phoenix. I don't need the Legacy virus thank you very much! lol And even now each of my multiple plots is probably underdeveloped.

😆

i honestly liked the idea of Iceman eyeing Shadowcat. i think it adds envy to rogue making her want to prove herself a little more. but doesnt colossus like kitty also.... colossus would break icemans skull.... i dont know....

if mystique freed gambit and avalanche i think that they should fight for the brotherhood in New York against the sentinels. Rogue gets blasted by Dark Pheonix and gambit trys to save her but gets beat also. Rogue sees how he trys to help her and when they awake tells the other X-men they need to give him medical attentio because he tried to save her (repay the debt). rogue thinks about how iceman didnt save her... (bitter little girl). in the end of the movie it should show Gambit resting at the mansion and he makes the decision to stay. he tells rogue... "i think i can deal, chere"

i dont know what you all think... use what you like... 🙂

Originally posted by aceofgambit2
i honestly liked the idea of Iceman eyeing Shadowcat. i think it adds envy to rogue making her want to prove herself a little more. but doesnt colossus like kitty also.... colossus would break icemans skull.... i dont know....

if mystique freed gambit and avalanche i think that they should fight for the brotherhood in New York against the sentinels. Rogue gets blasted by Dark Pheonix and gambit trys to save her but gets beat also. Rogue sees how he trys to help her and when they awake tells the other X-men they need to give him medical attentio because he tried to save her (repay the debt). rogue thinks about how iceman didnt save her... (bitter little girl). in the end of the movie it should show Gambit resting at the mansion and he makes the decision to stay. he tells rogue... "i think i can deal, chere"

i dont know what you all think... use what you like... 🙂

i don't think iceman would choose not to help rogue...

otherwise its good...

maybe he could be too busy helping shadowcat..... tsk tsk

Originally posted by aceofgambit2
maybe he could be too busy helping shadowcat..... tsk tsk

lol... or maybe remy just gets to her quicker... 😛

Originally posted by xmarksthespot
I can't find a way to work Beast into my plot which is really annoying.

maybe they can call beast in for medical purposes. or maybe when they split up into blue and gold teams they need an extra member to even it out... so they call reinforcements. easy way to introduce characters.

add a quickie flashback when hes asked how he got hairy and blue. show him transform from X2 Hank McCoy to X3 Beast

we can talk all we want about beast just appearing.... but Kelsy Gramar has already been casted. we know its not going to be a small part. and we dont even have angel in our script.

im actually a media arts major... i can direct. 🙂

Originally posted by aceofgambit2
we can talk all we want about beast just appearing.... but Kelsy Gramar has already been casted. we know its not going to be a small part. and we dont even have angel in our script.

im actually a media arts major... i can direct. 🙂

you are not getting my chair... schmoll 😛