Chapter 2: The training
Close your minds," says Yoda," Your concious self, let go." The younglings were being trained by Yoda. They were all wearing helmets that blocked their vision, trying to block a remote blaster. One child in particular was advancing at an incredable rate.
"Good, younglings. Eat now we will. Wait while Yoda brings food." Jin Thoro removes his helmet and sits down. A friend of his, a young boy named Kip, sits next to him saying, "I could't quite see the remote clearly, so I got a few scorches from the remote." Jin chuckles and says nothing. "How'd you do?" Jin just says, "no hits on me," in a slightly indifferent tone.
Yoda walks in, force pulling a cart of food. "Eat now," he says, 'for tomorrow, come here the Jedi knights will, to chose an apprentice." There was a small amount of murmer across the room. Exiting chatter flowed from each childs mouth, except for Jin, who just half smiled.
"Rest for rest of today, for enegry you will need tomorrow. We will demonstrate Lightsaber duels to help knights determine their apprentice.
The Next Day
The Younglings sit inside a room in a circle. From an upper observeotory, the Jedi knights observed. "Kip, Jin," says Yoda. The two walk to the center of the circle. The bow to each other and give a soft smile. "No matter what happens, ' said Kip, 'No hard feelings." "Right," said Jin.
"Go," said Yoda. At his word, both of them pulled out their lightsaber. Kip, immeaditly jumping into a slash, fell, seeing as he was dodged by Jin. Jin allows him to get up, andblock Kips next few slashes. Jin, appearing untouchable, blocks all of Kips blows, each one unleashing increasing anger.
Jin ducks under one of kips blows, and grabs his lightsaber from his hands, putting the tips of both by his neck. "Checkmate," he said putting the sabers away. "Good," said Yoda, "Make your own lightsaber you are, once a master, you get. Give mine back, I ask of you." Jin gives both back to Yoda, and waits for the rest to end.
After a few hours of beginner lightsaber duels, the master chose the apprentices. Martus Bardou walked over to Jin saying, 'Yoda has granted me permission to be your master. Come, you have much to learn."
Chapter 3: The padawan
After a couple months of having a master, and being trained even more in the ways of the Force, Jin and Martus finnally were sent on a mission by the Jedi council. They were to go to Alderaan, and take out the bounty hunter, Turton Hurth.
They went to the small division of the Senate to find the king, Senton Hoth, target of these attacks.
"Hello, master Bardou." said Hoth, upon meeting them, "Is this your apprentice?" 'Yes, " said Martus," and he is growing quite well." He smiles at Jin, who doesn't react. "Do you know how to draw out your attacker," says Martus almost develishly. "No," says Hoth, " You will have to wait until he strikes again."
Later on, Jin sits in his chamber, meditating. His master walks in, causing Jin to look up and give a half-smile. "Why do you not accept praise?" he asked, "You are well deserving of it." Jin nods and says, "It is not the Jedi way to be prideful." He sighs and says, "I never knew my family," he pauses," I've always wanted to meet them."
Martus gives a large sigh and looks at Jin, as though he knew something he didn't know. "I have a heavy heart telling you this, but, " He pauses, saddening. "Your family was killed, by the very bounty hunter we were sent to imprision."
Jin sits, raising in extreme anger. "I am sorry Jin," he sighs and says, "I must be going." He exits the room, leaving Jin to dwell on his own evil thoughts.
The king was at a book signing, for his book, "How to discover a planet," The Jedi sat next to him, watching the crowd. After a few hours, a man in a red suit showed up. He said, 'I'm your biggest fan, my boss told me she'd do anything for your body." This guy wasn't subtle, thought Jin. "This is him," said Martuus quietly, "we'll be subtle."
Suddenly, Jin jumped up at an incredable velocity, and taking out his lightsaber, chopped off his head.
Chapter 4: Not the Jedi way.
"Come my apprentice," said Martus," we need to report the death of the bounty hunter to the council." Jin was somewhat indifferentabout this. He knew he'd get scolded for this random act of violence, but he really didn't care.
After the trip, they went straight to the council. "Master Yoda," said Martus, "The Bounty Hunter has been killed, our young Jin is responsible for this, and even though he was rash, I believe he made the right move." "The right move, he made, did he?" asked Yoda, "Yes, yes, this bounty hunter was a great danger, but still it was not the Jedi way." Mace stands up saying, "Though you areheadstrong, you must control your emotions, or be turned to the darkside." Jin just nod surprised at this small warning, saying, "Yes Master Windu."
He follows his master out and they run into Obi-wan and Anikin. "Hello Martus," said Obi-wan, "Is this your apprentice?" "Yes, " he replies, "and he is growing quite well." He smiles at Jin and says to obi, " Why don't you and I go elsewhere, let's leave out apprentices to get aquainted."
"Hi," says Jin to Anikin. "Hello," says Anikin. They speak for several more hours, and over the next few months, become really good friends. They both know, that if they ever need help, they can go to each other.
"Remember," said Anikin, years later, before leaving to protect Senator Amidala, " Freindships are forbidden to the Jedi, no one can know about this." Jin nods and says ," goodbye," to hsi friend.
Chapter 5
Jin sat in a ship. The Jedi Council had sent the Jedi to the Genosis to aid Obi-Wan. Jin had a sneaking feeling about what was about to happen. "Don't worry yourself, my young apprentice. You are skilled, you will not die." Jin had very little reaction.
The Ship landed and they bought tickets to an execution. They stood around for a while, waiting for Mace's signal.
It came. The Jedi took out their lightsabers and rvealed themselves. They destroyed countless droids. Suddenly, after a vailent fight, they found themselves surrounded by thousands of battle mech droids. "Do you surrender," said Dooku. Right on cue, Yoda came with the clones, and more of the battle ensued. Jin, running along slashed several droids with one runnig swing.
Jango Fett made himself a danger to all of the Jedi, shooting missles and blasters, using a flamethrower. Jin, busy destroying battle mechs, was taken by surprise when several blasts were sent his way. He was about to be hit when Martus Bardou jumped in front of him, blocking the blasts with his head, torso, and legs.
Sfter that, Jango was suddenly surprised, sending flame at a jedi, who dodged it, and blocked his blasters, slicing off hiis head. Mace.
As the droid forces retreat, Jin, several miles away, burns his masters dead body.
Chapter 6: the Diamond in the Rough
Count Dooku, was a Sith! After defeating Obi-wan and Anikin, he flew away. But Jin held him up. He bords his ship and searches for Dooku. He looks around, and is attacked by several droids. Jin kills all of them unleashing great, great anger. He runs around more, and finnally finds Dooku.
"You've made a grave mistake Dooku," said Jin. "Another foolish Jedi," he scoffs and says, "You are unwise to challenge me." He pulls out his lightsaber, Jin does the same. Jin unleashes great anger and frustration as he attacks Dooku. Unleashing a fury of attacks on him, every single one being blocked. Dooku made his first attack on Jin, slashing a deep cut on his leg.
Jin falls, but continues fighting. He gets up, enduring the pain, and angerily attacks Dooku even more. He kicks down Dooku, causing Dookus saber to retract, and puts his saber to his neck. "Checkmate," says Jin. Dooku's eyes dart from the ground, to Jin, to Jin's saber. Dooku says, " not yet," and pulls out his saber, and cuts off Jin's leg.
Dooku Throws Jin out the ship window, just before he leaves the planet. Yoda and his clone cruiser catches Jin before his falls to his death. They make a robotic leg for Jin, using very good technology, unlike Anikins. Yoda says to Jin as he regains consiousness, "A word with you, the Jedi council wants."
After landing on Courscent, Jin slowly went to the Council, wondering what they had to see him about. Did he do something un- Jedi- like? Wait, his master died. That's what this was about. But was it his fate, or the knight tests?
He walked into the council room. "You wished to see me?" he said, offhand. 'Yes, see you we must, need to talk we do.," said Yoda, "In the event of a dead master, becomes and Jedi night the apprentice does. But in your case, it is impossible. Find you a substitute master we will, on the council perhaps. Chaoswake?"
Chaos nods as Yoda says, "He will be your new master."