Prose poems by myself

Here's an attempt at a love poem:

Seeing your form dance across my vision, seeing your face look into mine, to merely hear the whisper of your name, is a pleasure, appreciated by me more than any other living being. I am awestruck by your beauty, and your beauty's grace. I lay snug in the warm aura, radiated from your existance, I lavish in the sight of your form. You are the definition of beauty, the definition of life in love. Your radiance, unparalleled by any other, you are the reason I live, you are the muse of my songs, you are the purpose of my poems. I write not for myself, my profit, but instead for the sustenance of you, and for the promise of life with you. 'Tis you, 'tis you who I love, 'tis you who I hold as the goddess of my universe, and no other.

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Here's an attempt at a love poem:

Seeing your form dance across my vision, seeing your face look into mine, to merely hear the whisper of your name, is a pleasure, appreciated by me more than any other living being. I am awestruck by your beauty, and your beauty's grace. I lay snug in the warm aura, radiated from your existance, I lavish in the sight of your form. You are the definition of beauty, the definition of life in love. Your radiance, unparalleled by any other, you are the reason I live, you are the muse of my songs, you are the purpose of my poems. I write not for myself, my profit, but instead for the sustenance of you, and for the promise of life with you. 'Tis you, 'tis you who I love, 'tis you who I hold as the goddess of my universe, and no other.

Nice dude.... hope you never have to leave that goddess.

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Here's an attempt at a love poem:

Seeing your form dance across my vision, seeing your face look into mine, to merely hear the whisper of your name, is a pleasure, appreciated by me more than any other living being. I am awestruck by your beauty, and your beauty's grace. I lay snug in the warm aura, radiated from your existance, I lavish in the sight of your form. You are the definition of beauty, the definition of life in love. Your radiance, unparalleled by any other, you are the reason I live, you are the muse of my songs, you are the purpose of my poems. I write not for myself, my profit, but instead for the sustenance of you, and for the promise of life with you. 'Tis you, 'tis you who I love, 'tis you who I hold as the goddess of my universe, and no other.

i see now you are the master of prose and i....the padawan learner

Thanks, and, yes, I don't know if you could call it love, but we've been going six months thus far together.

a rose by any other name.....

😄

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I sift through the lands not seen, I shrug off my initial fear of new things dawning, my, doors previously closed to change, instead change themselves, opening to the prospect of difference in living, and diversity in life. I move my unseen shape into, and out of, lands unconquered, I see that which was hitherto unseen, and through discovery, my life changes unlike any other, my life turns and brings upon itself, purpose, purpose to live, and purpose to bring to the earth life. I shift through the world, it’s lands dance across the iris of my eye, its beauties, and its scarring visions, under mine eye. I see all that can, and all that will, be seen, and through my spectation of the Earth, I create things that are to be seen, and my things are seen, and I am seen, fulfilling that which would be my goal as a spectator of the universe.

Nice, and good luck with the lady dude.

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Thanks, and, yes, I don't know if you could call it love, but we've been going six months thus far together.

Great poem ✅

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Here's an attempt at a love poem:

Seeing your form dance across my vision, seeing your face look into mine, to merely hear the whisper of your name, is a pleasure, appreciated by me more than any other living being. I am awestruck by your beauty, and your beauty's grace. I lay snug in the warm aura, radiated from your existance, I lavish in the sight of your form. You are the definition of beauty, the definition of life in love. Your radiance, unparalleled by any other, you are the reason I live, you are the muse of my songs, you are the purpose of my poems. I write not for myself, my profit, but instead for the sustenance of you, and for the promise of life with you. 'Tis you, 'tis you who I love, 'tis you who I hold as the goddess of my universe, and no other.

damn, imagine the lucky girl who gets that. 😄 How can any girl resist...?

all beautiful, as usual^^

Sunday with the Media

My sunday's evening, entangled in a screen, of lives I care not for, and events, that don't disrupt my own. I stare on, lazily, at a screen, absorbing world news, local news. I learn of things that do not affect my world, that don't positively, or negatively dictate my day. I stare on, as the world moves quickly around my laze.

Shorter than usual, I like it though.

Originally posted by alcoholicpoet
Sunday with the Media

My sunday's evening, entangled in a screen, of lives I care not for, and events, that don't disrupt my own. I stare on, lazily, at a screen, absorbing world news, local news. I learn of things that do not affect my world, that don't positively, or negatively dictate my day. I stare on, as the world moves quickly around my laze.

Shorter than usual, I like it though.

how many boys visited this poetry discussion?

Originally posted by critias
how many boys visited this poetry discussion?

I know Feanor, DW, and myself are of the male gender, are you a guy, Coldfire?

im a boy that writes poetry but im best at love poems

Originally posted by critias
im a boy that writes poetry but im best at love poems

Go ahead and open up a thread, each poet gets one thread in which to post all their works.

anybody like teen titans here?

how i do that?

Originally posted by critias
how i do that?

Scroll to the bottem of the page and click "New Topic" title it, then type the poetry in the space alotted.

im gonna start my thread now