LOOK at my Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

our faith is set
our days is gone
i am left here wondering
is this the end
is this my final words to you
is this true...are we....really through?
you where the the wind beneath my wings
u taught me how to fly
u are the angel of my life
u taught me how to be free
now i am a stranger i your eyes
so i say farewell and walks away
you are the one
missing you in my heart
you are the one......and always will be

u where my friend
u where my love
why did it come to this?
why did u leave?
was it me?
was it u?
or was it both?
memories will hunt
and the sorrow will forever stay
forever the scar u left will be there
but nothing on earth stays forever
the silent wind will blow the candle out
taking everything and leaving the pain
far behind.

listen i am bit drunk and its 2.00 on the morning so it may not be good at all but i felt like writing so i wrote this.........goood/bad

well that depends.....if you can overlook the spelling and grammar errors...but since you were drunk i forgive you

Lol yeah the spelling and grammar errors can be overlooked if you were drunk 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Lol yeah the spelling and grammar errors can be overlooked if you were drunk 😛

make me laugh 😛

😛 Tis what I do 😄 😄

holy shit did i wrote this shit?
it did sound much better in my head!!! 😆 😆 😆
poetry is definetly not the right thing for me 😮 😉

Well you know, it WAS pretty good, minus what we've said already... maybe you can do an even better one while sober 😛 😄

perhaps??? but man my enlish is not that good in any case so maybe i will stay out of it anyway!!!

Well its your choice.... If you don't wanna do any more, then don't. But I think you could maybe make some good poems if you tried... But again, its up to you...

Originally posted by Antillies
perhaps??? but man my enlish is not that good in any case so maybe i will stay out of it anyway!!!

Originally posted by Fëanor
fraidy cat....😛

😱 lol 😛

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! 😱 😆 😆

haha cool group btw. HF. cool poem too. one simple word of advise, go learn our crappy language! ahhaahahah! if you can learn american, you can do anything... stupid bass-ackwards linguistic nonsense.......

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha cool group btw. HF. cool poem too. one simple word of advise, go learn our crappy language! ahhaahahah! if you can learn american, you can do anything... stupid bass-ackwards linguistic nonsense.......

😂 Canadian's better eh 😛 We get to use more vowels and stuff 😄

well have u ever heard swedish.....so close to norwegian but still so different 😛

maybee i will try make another one......but i still got a language problem maybee i t helps if im completely sober this time 😛

I kind of liked it

this one shall be named where are you?

where are you?
the one that gives me strenght
the one that gives me hope
the one i will fall in love with
the one who makes the day brighter
the one who makes the stars fall
the one that makes the earth shake
the one that understand me
the one i want to spend my life with
the one.......where are u?

im in a mood for writing today so here comes another 😛
but still i dont know a name for it so i would like u guys to come up with a name for it!!!

I never thought
i would feel alone again
i never thought
that u would come and save me
from the faith that i self created
but when looking down into those eyes
i will be lost and never found again
kiss me once and i surely melt away
kiss me twice and i will never leave your side
walls are breaking down on me
i make nothing else
than missory and pain
but still you belive in me?

those are really good, a lot of good symbolism and imagery, KUDOS! 👆👆