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DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

You gotta be happy to see a child laugh. Even after I was through slicin up my arms, seeing that still made me smile.

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
You gotta be happy to see a child laugh. Even after I was through slicin up my arms, seeing that still made me smile.

tis true children make u smile my 4yr old cousin made me smile oday when everythin else couldn't

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Can't say as I know many small children where I am now... but I know whatcha mean... I adore them when they're small 😊

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by Coldfire
Can't say as I know many small children where I am now... but I know whatcha mean... I adore them when they're small 😊

its when they grow up where they drain ur life force away

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

the sheer beauty of innocence.

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
the sheer beauty of innocence.

sheer disaster of life

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

Originally posted by snehin
sheer disaster of life

ok, pess. try to remember that their lives havent been utterly f#@ked up yet, and I hope never are... you gotta hope for the best dude.

Coldfire <3 <3 <3

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ok, pess. try to remember that their lives havent been utterly f#@ked up yet, and I hope never are... you gotta hope for the best dude.

Exactly so ✅

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ok, pess. try to remember that their lives havent been utterly f#@ked up yet, and I hope never are... you gotta hope for the best dude.

i feel for kids

tis why we have to make it so tht the nxt gen of kids wont suffer

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

Originally posted by snehin
i feel for kids
tis why we have to make it so tht the nxt gen of kids wont suffer

yeah, we do. our forefathers failed to be men, overall, so now the weight is upon our shoulders. stand, and fight to bring about the decency we lost!

heavenablaze666 suicide angel

hey guys im here ..it seems as though every one liked my last poem ,......i just wantd to knw what you liked abou it

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

well mads, i like the simplistic design. it is not full of nothingness, just straight to the point. "I hurt, I am dying, you are gone". no heavy handed words to cloud the issue of the poem.

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
hey guys im here ..it seems as though every one liked my last poem ,......i just wantd to knw what you liked abou it

i could feel the emotion in it and tht what matters tis why i liked it

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
yeah, we do. our forefathers failed to be men, overall, so now the weight is upon our shoulders. stand, and fight to bring about the decency we lost!

problem is the weight too much for us see ppl like me have way too many problems of my own and kids well grt to be more work last thing i need is tht

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

Originally posted by snehin
i could feel the emotion in it and tht what matters tis why i liked it
problem is the weight too much for us see ppl like me have way too many problems of my own and kids well grt to be more work last thing i need is tht

ha... man, some days it sucks yeah. some though make it totally worth it. hearing a love tell you she loves you, and seeing it in her eyes, hearing my neice and nephew laugh and say Hi Uncle WIll, getting that kiss before goodnight.... I live for those brief moments of joy in an otherwise bitter existence. not to say i hate life.... just it wears on ya sometimes.

Fëanor Senior Member

Originally posted by heavenablaze666
run away
as i walk around i wounder
what went wrong with our love
the love that was so strong
and as i walk around i think of
mayybe we werew to young
i was walking in the rain
trying to forget the pain
wish you were here by me
to end this misery
nad i wonder
why you run away
and i wonder were you will stay
my lil run away
run run run run
runaway

oddly enough it's good, but vaguely familiar hmm i can't seem to place it!

snehin Darth wolf

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ha... man, some days it sucks yeah. some though make it totally worth it. hearing a love tell you she loves you, and seeing it in her eyes, hearing my neice and nephew laugh and say Hi Uncle WIll, getting that kiss before goodnight.... I live for those brief moments of joy in an otherwise bitter existence. not to say i hate life.... just it wears on ya sometimes.

i guess every kid does hav tht look of pure joy its like a breathe of fresh air

snehin Darth wolf

but tht doesn't change tht with everythin goin on in my life its hard to take care of em even if i take care of a lot of em

DreamingWarrior Knight Errant

ha.... yeah man. like i said, i live for the good moments, and suffer through the rest. now, i am suffering. i feel a change in the wind, though. i hope it will be a good thing. hopefully all of you shall be blessed and have something great happen to you soon, like in a few days or something! 😄

NunYahBidness You can stop looking, now

Okay Sneeheineken, I think you've scared the girl off! Drop the act, put on your pj's, put on YMCA by the village people and role play you're the biker dude and have fun for cryin' out loud!!!!

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