Underworld RP

((night tad. Allright then, I was lost for a sec.))

((huh wut i miss))

((tads sleeping now))

((so whats the story so far?))

<< seems things are getting outta control. care if i interject, gentlemen and ladies? i'm on a mission to find raze, but the rest of you could... oh i dunno... help me or go after lucian... or marcus. just some idle suggestions. >>

((I say Marcus, I want the vamps to fall first.))

[] I think the plot so far is fine. Alexx looking for this Raze, and the others hunting down lycan. Its exciting. Really what we need to do is just stop the one sentance posts... Thats how we start filling up page after page. Try adding some details and cut down on the posts like "Stands there"[]

Raevynn had wandered for nearly an hour, snarling and growling as she went. A trail of flesh blood was left in her wake. The wolf was growign weaker by the second, but she needed to get away from those others. They would regain their energy and come after her soon enough. The shadowy figure came to a dead end in an alley, and collapsed onto her side where she bled furiously from everywound on her body. After a few hours she shifted back to her human form and lay in the fetal position, looking like nothing more than a frightened blood soaked girl.

He didn't know why, but Alexx couldn't help feeling sorry for the one they'd attacked. No doubt she had refused his help out of fear and frustration, but he still hated being refused. Especially when he was being rather hospitable. He turned to the others. "I have something to go take care of. An old friend of mine could have the information I need. Good luck with your quests. You'd best pray we not meet again. Though I daresay we will." Alexx turned and glided off on the path he had told Rae to take earlier. Perhaps Lucian would know where to find Raze......

Originally posted by SilentWolf
[] I think the plot so far is fine. Alexx looking for this Raze, and the others hunting down lycan. Its exciting. Really what we need to do is just stop the one sentance posts... Thats how we start filling up page after page. Try adding some details and cut down on the posts like "Stands there"[]

Raevynn had wandered for nearly an hour, snarling and growling as she went. A trail of flesh blood was left in her wake. The wolf was growign weaker by the second, but she needed to get away from those others. They would regain their energy and come after her soon enough. The shadowy figure came to a dead end in an alley, and collapsed onto her side where she bled furiously from everywound on her body. After a few hours she shifted back to her human form and lay in the fetal position, looking like nothing more than a frightened blood soaked girl.

<< Raze was the black guy from the subway in the movie. The one that yells "BLOODS!!!" So no one's confused on who Alexx is looking for. >>

((that big black guy with the deep ass voice?))

((does any one know where Bella is?))

((No idea... I thought she was with tad when vince shot him.))

~oh...i have no clue...where are you?~

((Nerathos))

((not who, where))

((oh... I was with Viv, vince rae and alex, I want to go and kill Marcus, so far the choiced are to go and kill Marcus or Lucien, I say Marcus.))

((o i c...)) Bella wonders if she should leave then she looks at Nerathos.

((Is blavk Goku on? I would rather wait for vince and viv))

"Yes?"

((alright we will wait and when ever im not on controll me however you want 😄 ))

((Heh, interesting 😉 ))