HERO HIGH! new SERIOUS version. other topic is for discussion

Started by MadMel638 pages

( 😱 )
"you wanna head back??" andrew asked after a loooong kiss.
"sure." jane said. "ill see you, alright?" she said to hanna. the two flew off.
(id help u mal, but my characters act on a more physical level, and cant enter the spirit world.)

lance was at school feeling useless and was just lying on the grass at the school

andrew and jane arrived back at the school. "hey look there's terry" andrew said, flying over to his uncle. "are you felling better?"
"oh yes, im fine right now. its just this broken leg is giving me some hassle." the old scientest said. he noticed jane. "hello jane, my girl, whats has been happening?"
"not much" jane said, "a few mutents here, sentinals there, the usual". terry started laughing, "haha, you've always made me laugh" he said. he looked around, noticing lance lying on the ground. "is that one of your friends?" he asked andrew.
"yeah.." andrew said, "excuse me a minute" he added, walking over. "hey lance, buddy, whats up??"

Originally posted by feline
~sorry i'm sleep.i'm gonna go to bed~"ok sam"
(Alright, goodnight.)

Sam sighed and looked over his shoulder again and saw Gregory running up on them. Sam pushed Janet out of the way as Gregory brought the hilt of his sword into Sam's shoulder blade. Sam groaned as he flew through the air and landed on his face. Gregory laughed and came up to finish Sam off. "Too easy!" Gregory shouted as his raised his giant sword over his head.

( 😱...oh no!!!!😂 )

Hanna was left with two unconscious people who she had never met before. "What now?" She asked herself as she looked at Sam's lifeless body. "Where did everyone go...? Why did they leave their friends here like this?" Hanna thought as she moved Sam's body back to the couch. Hanna gasped as she turned to see a large man in red samurai armor holding a long katana. "Who are you?" Hanna asked the man as he walked slowly into the room.

The man looked at Hanna coldly. "Move aside! Their fate is now in my hands." The man said. "I will not let my brother's plans fail." The man said as he prepared to slice Janet. Hanna didn't know what to do, she knew she wasn't strong enough to fight this man, let alone protect the two unconscious people who were about to be executed.

(umm....r u gonna handle this, or are you posting this much for effect??)

Originally posted by MadMel
(umm....r u gonna handle this, or are you posting this much for effect??)
(This whole thing is actually part of a bigger story I have been writing about the adventures of Sam, I have been writing about all of the characters I have made for KMC. I had made up all the characters that I have been bringing in a while ago. I'm sorry I have taken so much time, but I wanted some interaction with your characters because I would never think of using your characters in my stories without your permission... It is easier for me to see how my story would be different when I can actually see your characters in my story. This part of the story is almost over, but I thought it would be a little different. I thought at least one of the heroes would stay with Sam and Janet... Now it's up to Hanna, a normal girl, to save them from death.)

(uhoh...sorry bout that)

~oh jordan was with them~

(oh yeah)

Originally posted by feline
~oh jordan was with them~
(I thought they were alone, Jordan will have to act fast.)

Hanna charged at the man in red armor and pushed him, causing him to lose balance. Hanna wasn't very strong, but she knew she couldn't just let this man kill two people. "Stay out of this!" The man shouted as he turned and slapped Hanna. The man raised up his sword again, ready to bury the blade in Janet's heart.

(uh oh)

jordan appered next to mad and tossed him into a wall."leave my sister alone"

(who mad?? oh the red guy..)

~i meant the man~

(ah)
when it was obvious that lance wasnt gonna talk andrew went back to jane and terry. "you look tired" andrew said to his uncle.."i dont think you should be walking on that leg a lot. lets head inside ande grab a bite to eat."

Originally posted by feline
jordan appered next to mad and tossed him into a wall."leave my sister alone"
The man stood up and growled at Jordan. "You should not have interfered in the business of The Crushing Flame Samurai! Now you share their fate!" He said as his sword burned and he swung it at Jordan.

jordan raised his hand."enery dose not work with me."turning the sword on the man.black smoke and light rapping around the man

(*grabs popcorn and watches*)