wow..... great work man i tip my hat of to you i always thought the other storys where aight or medicore but you where right now makes me thing it was writing my JK herself and you are also frequent with your posts and again great work i look forward to more ...... lol f JK man she isn't gonanbe writing the last book anytime soon ( she wants to focus on her daughter mackenzie) am not trying to dis her cuz she has to spend time with her kid but stil she can't just keep us waiting again i mean shes trying to build anticipation ( book 6 took a while) but people are gonna start getting mad
you are amazing
I find myself logging onto my computer just to see what oyur gonna write next. Your writing is almost up there with rowlings. The only thing i slightly disliked was harry breaking his first horicux. I doubt volemort would make her wand one... but still keep it up, im dying to find more.
As Hermione appeared at her Destination, She felt a slight stab of déjà vu. She couldn’t place the reason for the feeling. Her eyes closed, she breathed in the salty smell of the ocean. She opened her eyes. It was about noon, and the sun was high in the sky. This beach was strangely deserted, even the muggle tourist weren’t there.
She had no intention of going to a bar, as she had told Harry and Ron. The news of a Possible breakout at Azkaban woke a hidden anger hidden deep within this troubled girl. She hated these Death Eaters, so much that it often scared her. On the one hand, she herself had been attacked, and on the other, the ones she loved most had been the target of many attacks. Grimacing, she left the beach and headed for a near by winding trail. She followed this trail for a couple minutes, before she ran into a problem. She had been noticing it, but now it really shocked her. The sky was darkening, as if a veil had been placed between it and the earth. Fog had covered the darkened ground, although it was not much, it was thickening at an incredible rate.
Off in the distance, she heard an owl hooting. She quickened her pace, and thought of just apparating to the end of the Path, Wherever that was. The hooting became more pronounced, and It came Louder, More Often. Pulling her hood on, she started jogging. A swishing of cloth startled her, and she began flat out running. Again, the thought of Apparating crossed her mind, but her anger got the best of her, and she stopped on her heels, and turned around to face whatever it was that was following her.
With her wand out, she quickly fired off the first spell that came to her mind, at the first thing she saw move. “Sectumsempra!” She Cried, and her target fell to the ground with a dull thud, Blood gushing from it’s stomach.
It was no human that she had hurt, however, but a feathery bird, an Owl. Shocked at what she had just done, she quickly tried to heal the dying bird. Hermione’s Smarts failed, however, and The Poor Owl was soon dead. Sniffling, she pulled the letter from the dead creature. (It was shining crimson in some places) She had no idea who it could be, and when she saw the ‘letter’, she screamed silently. It was blank. Shivering slightly, feeling failed, she twisted her body, and apparated away.
She neither knew where she was or how she got there, but she certainly wasn’t back at the Burrow. Horrible chains littered the walls, each of them glittering. Black stones lined the small hallway, and bars of iron separated the small rooms from the passageway. She had seen this place only in her dreams, and a haunting voice confirmed her fears.
"Hello Hermione"
She turned, gulping, and saw a man she hated above all others at the moment.
I personally don't think this is as good a post as i've been doing, but I thought you all would murder me if I did'nt put something up soon. Think of it as the rough draft. Just ask, And I'll post a better, more polished, longer version.
its aight man i bit long with the details but still good lol i know who the character is already but besides that its decent work like you said if you didn't write something alot of people in here would have killed you lol (not including me) if it was up to me man i'd say take your timing seeing as you write better when you do cuz this was on the same level as the other stories lol which is kind of good cuz you were pressed for time imagine what you could of wrote it had time!
To Anyone Who Cares
I have lost almost all desire to write this story, and I don't like leaving Readers in the dark for a week at a time. Consider this my last post on this thread, Unless enough people post requesting that I finish it. This is not a Cry for Attention. I am only stating my intentions. I am actually contemplating a new story, From the point of a Made-Up Character at Hogwarts....