Okay..I'm not really writing anything and I don't feel like joining this but I just need to say something. For one, you Rogue kid shut up. I'm sorry but you seem to have no idea what you are doing. I for one have written many fanfics and have read alot of them and this is probably one of the worst I've seen. I don't really think Harry is going to consider going back to the Dursleys even though it's for his safety because he is just too stupid. I know he is the main man in these books but he seems a little bit obsessed with himself to me. Two Death Eaters are not going to be walking around in plain site of the Muggle World espcially since the Muggle World should have been warned by now. *Although JK never really brings that up again* Although they may be able to intercept letters they would not be lurking under Harrys window as someone almost suggested. I hope you can take the critisim and if you can't well then I'm sorry.
i agree with detailed losses.
i don't think that death eaters would be walking around the dursley's place...that is where harry is to be safe (except in book 4 when the dementors came...but he wasn't in the house...but not the point.)
then only thing is that i guess that Harry would go to the dursley's for at least a bit...since it was Dumbledore's wish...but he wouldn't stick around, you know? he would just stay for a little and then go to the borrow untill he could get his appartion test...(if he would even bother with it..seeing as he wass able to get Dumbledore back to Hogsmeade)
well...that's what i think...
we aren't planning that part as yet...................
Originally posted by detailed losses
Okay..I'm not really writing anything and I don't feel like joining this but I just need to say something. For one, you Rogue kid shut up. I'm sorry but you seem to have no idea what you are doing. I for one have written many fanfics and have read alot of them and this is probably one of the worst I've seen. I don't really think Harry is going to consider going back to the Dursleys even though it's for his safety because he is just too stupid. I know he is the main man in these books but he seems a little bit obsessed with himself to me. Two Death Eaters are not going to be walking around in plain site of the Muggle World espcially since the Muggle World should have been warned by now. *Although JK never really brings that up again* Although they may be able to intercept letters they would not be lurking under Harrys window as someone almost suggested. I hope you can take the critisim and if you can't well then I'm sorry.
Originally posted by Ginny_09
i agree with detailed losses.i don't think that death eaters would be walking around the dursley's place...that is where harry is to be safe (except in book 4 when the dementors came...but he wasn't in the house...but not the point.)
then only thing is that i guess that Harry would go to the dursley's for at least a bit...since it was Dumbledore's wish...but he wouldn't stick around, you know? he would just stay for a little and then go to the borrow untill he could get his appartion test...(if he would even bother with it..seeing as he wass able to get Dumbledore back to Hogsmeade)
well...that's what i think...
Originally posted by Zonko_13
i'm thinking that Ginny09 meant that, well, noone made a big deal out of it. he just gets the letter and there's blood on it. then it jumps to something else. not quite making sense to me, then Hermione and Ron are there, and it is all just totally screwie.sorry, but i had to say that.
What they said^^^
Clear the Hermione Ron thing....here goes:
Harry stands up from where he is and begins to look around at his messy room. He'll need a couple of things with him when he leaves. He looks around his room trying to figure out what is it he is looking for. He collects his wand and wonders what will happen next. What will happen when he leaves with Ron and Hermione? The whole world seems to be collasping onto him and making him fall straight into a dark pit...alone. He ties the letter on his owl once again. The owl begin to fly until it was nothing but a white spot in the darkned sky. Rain begins to fall and click upon the window.
Originally posted by potter_luver48
hey guys! great job! I'm greatly impressed! i'll write some when I'm not Jet lagged.
Thanks Potter_luver ! Glad you're back . We could really use your help . Will Saratn or someone PM Potter_luver our plans ???? I've PMed too much these days ...........to everyone . Saratn , I still have to PM you what Ginny and I though up for the sixth book...............
Harry threw himself on his bed , thinking . He knew that Ron , Ginny and Hermione would not listen to him if he told them that they could not go with him . In truth , he wanted them to go . He knew he would not be able to find and destroy the horcruxes himself . However , He did not want to put them in danger . It was obvious that they would force him to take them along . He thought about Ginny , her temper would get the better of her if he told her he did not want her to go along . Hermione , she would talk logically and make enough sense to force her way in . ROn , he could never leave Ron out , in anything . Ron would not listen if Harry told him not to go along . Harry closed his eyes, tired , yet his brain was still wide awake .
Sorry , not much . more later .