I love this story so much! I know i haven't posted here before iv'e tried and my computer wouldn't let me but now it will and I'm so glad i get to comment. I know you said that there are probably better ppl who write better than you but your one of the best ppl who can write. I come to this story everyday to see if there is sumthing new. I love this story so much. I think it's relli kool how you can relate to ginny in this stroy the only thing that I have to say is that it is way too american until you get onto the train. Like the clothes and on Harry's b-day way too American but the rest is so good and i love it. I dont want to offend you or anything just giving advice and just to tell you im only 12 so im just obbserving you'll probably like why is sum 12 year old telling me what to do i dk if your younger than me im just giving advice and thank you for writing such a great story! 😄 😍 ✅
Originally posted by iluvhpsomuch1_7Thanks so much!
I love this story so much! I know i haven't posted here before iv'e tried and my computer wouldn't let me but now it will and I'm so glad i get to comment. I know you said that there are probably better ppl who write better than you but your one of the best ppl who can write. I come to this story everyday to see if there is sumthing new. I love this story so much. I think it's relli kool how you can relate to ginny in this stroy the only thing that I have to say is that it is way too american until you get onto the train. Like the clothes and on Harry's b-day way too American but the rest is so good and i love it. I dont want to offend you or anything just giving advice and just to tell you im only 12 so im just obbserving you'll probably like why is sum 12 year old telling me what to do i dk if your younger than me im just giving advice and thank you for writing such a great story! 😄 😍 ✅
And I appreciate constructive criticism, so no worries 😛
Originally posted by deathgod
hey i wasn't able to visit this site for so long because my computer brokehope to read more of this story
Originally posted by Smile&LOLYour wishes are my command:
plz post more
McGonagall cleared her throat.
"Please welcome our new first years." she said, gesturing to the door with opened as soon as she pointed to it. At the front, a small boy with messy ginger hair and glasses was arguing with a dark blonde headed boy.
"Look! Mini Harry and Ron in one!" Hannah giggled in your ear.
"I know," you whispered, and nudged your foot backwards to make sure Harry noticed.
"And a mini Malfoy," Kyle stated.
"Ah, good old Trouble is here and making itself at home." Carl grinned.
"Shut up, it's started!" you hissed.
"Abberly, Louise!" McGonagal called. A blonde girl stepped forward.
"GRYFINDOR!"
You clapped along with everyone else, but zoned out, occaisionally clapping for the new Gryfindors, until you heard the new headmistress call out the name "Chang, Lei."
"Cho's sister," you murmured.
A tiny Chinese girl sat nervously on the stool.
"HUFFLEPUFF!" the hat roared.
You saw Cho beaming at her little sister, and was probably clapping the hardest out of everyone.
One again, you started daydreaming about everything and anything.
After "Zatch, Jordan" had been sorted into Slytherin, Professor McGonagall stood up and cleared her throat once more.
"Another school year has started." she began when everyone was completely silent. "But some will not be re-joining us. Everyone knows that Professor Dumbledore is no longer with us. A Death Eater murdered him at the end of last year. Only one person in this room knows the full story of what happened that terrible night," her gaze flicked to the Slytherin table for a second, "and I want no rumors whatsoever starting up. Albus died in a brave battle to save this school. That is all you need to know. I understand a lot of you do not wish to be here right now, let alone the whole year, and you can go whenever you wish. But safety measures have to be taken. We will need two days notice before you are leaving, and you will be asked to display everything you have on you, and we will look through your cases. When - if - you wish to return, you will be searched. Also, we will have ministry workers guarding the grounds all hours of the day. Now, on a lighter note, if you wish to be Head Girl/Boy or Prefect, please apply to my office. I will be staying there, until further notice. Now, I will let you eat!"
Food popped onto the platters, and a tummy rumbled behind you when she said that. Ron, obviously. You would have to get some food for the two of them, but how you were going to do it without being noticed was anyone's guess.
Originally posted by iluvhpsomuch1_7Oops. Ah well, Cho can be...doing collage work there or something 😂
One thing with that is Cho is one year older Harry and this is their last year so technically she wouldn't be there. But it was kool that you brought her sister into it. I oved it so much. Good speech by Mcgonagoll.
Can't wait til you post more thanx!
Originally posted by Ginger16I'm dead 😄
Its been forever where are you diamonds?
not really 😕
I haven't had much time, coz the teachers seem to think half-term is a brilliant opportunity to pile on homework and I've got to do a science project and I have writers block so any help would be appreciated.