Zahlor stumbed on the spot, he sensed something farmilir, No it cant be...the dark jedi wouldn't show himself now...that means there are two. He opened his com, "NEW PLAN, FIND THE SITH!" He bellowed. He bashed through a small door and gunned down everyone one the room, making his way towards the dark presence he sensed, Dark Jedi were extrememly powerful...if it singled out one of the Jedi he would surely win in combat...HE WOULD NOT LET THAT HAPPEN..AGAIN.
Kim was halfway through pulling out her saber when she saw what was on the ground. A gold lightsaber hilt with a name carved into it. "Brianna" she breathed as she read the words on the hilt. "YOU MONSTER!" she yelled at the man "YOU KILLED HER! YOU DESERVE TO DIE!"
The man unignited his lightsaber and showed her the hilt. "Atton" it read. "Father? why? why did you do this?" Kim never said this but her eyes asked the question. She quickly summoned her mother's golden saber and ignited it....
The blade was....
(your expecting me to say red, aren't you?)
A magnificent gold color erupted from one end of the saber.
Kim stared at it for a moment, then lunged at her father, yelling a battle cry.
"YOU WILL PAY FOR WHAT YOU DID TO HER!"
Engaged in her battle, Kim hardly noticed when Zahlor blast his way into the room.
Slowly, kim gained the upper hand until at last, her father lay on the ground. He was defeated, but not dead. Kim put her hand on his forehead and slowly, the grey color went away from his face.
(from now on, i'll play atton and kim, if it's alright with yall)
Zahlor burst into the room and ignited his sabre, the red blade flashed to life. [Durza you make yourself way to powerfull for an apprentice, there is no way in the galaxy you could have overcome a dark jedi...most full Jedi Knights cant hope to take on a Dark Jedi alone, yet you just killed a Dark Jedi like it was nothing...]
Originally posted by Liquid_Fire
Zahlor burst into the room and ignited his sabre, the red blade flashed to life. [Durza you make yourself way to powerfull for an apprentice, there is no way in the galaxy you could have overcome a dark jedi...]
"You killed Xan." Zahlor muttered at Kim's father. Strangely Zahlor's sabre was still activated even though Kims father was obviously defeated. Zahlor's eyes widened. [Just thought of a good twist, the plot is going to be the same, but more energetic.] He opened his comm, "SHADOW TROOPERS!" He bellowed. [Dont knwo what a shadow trooper is just ask in ur next post]
Originally posted by Liquid_Fire
Right, why didnt you say that in ur post 😛 and yes, its a red lightsaber. You are refering to things not said, and things metioned in a bio for another RPG lol
Originally posted by Liquid_Fire
"You killed Xan." Zahlor muttered at Kim's father. Strangely Zahlor's sabre was still activated even though Kims father was obviously defeated. Zahlor's eyes widened. [Just thought of a good twist, the plot is going to be the same, but more energetic.] He opened his comm, "SHADOW TROOPERS!" He bellowed. [Dont knwo what a shadow trooper is just ask in ur next post]
Name: Kimberly Rand
Alias: Kim
Species: Echani
Saber Colour: Silver / backup saber is cyan
*waiting on corillea for a contact*
Thats your bio, who the hell is Atton wtf is going on, and no, sorry but no more Dark Jedi, there are only 2 sith at a time, and maybe 1 or 2 Dark Jedi, and those slots are full for the plot, so your powerful Dark Jedi just became a Shadow Trooper instead, remember I said no Dark Jedi until later in the story?
(Dessan brought his saber wielding troops to the valley of the jedi and artifically enfused them with the force, thus making an unstoppable army, shadow troopers are part of this army, they have black storm trooper like armor, but more versatile, made of Cortosis a lightsaber resistant mineral, making them ten times as hard to kill)
Zahlor charged into the room ahead, and a Shadow Trooper faded into view, (They have a cloak in their armor, all you see is the shadows on their armor floating in the air, well no but thats how i describe it so you can picture it.) He blocked its Sabre, "THIS IS A TRAP! EVERYONE OUT NOW, MOVE! HAN PREP THE SHIP! HAN? HAN?!"
Originally posted by Liquid_Fire
Name: Kimberly Rand
Alias: Kim
Species: Echani
Saber Colour: Silver / backup saber is cyan
*waiting on corillea for a contact*Thats your bio, who the hell is Atton wtf is going on, and no, sorry but no more Dark Jedi, there are only 2 sith at a time, and maybe 1 or 2 Dark Jedi, and those slots are full for the plot, so your powerful Dark Jedi just became a Shadow Trooper instead, remember I said no Dark Jedi until later in the story?
(Dessan brought his saber wielding troops to the valley of the jedi and artifically enfused them with the force, thus making an unstoppable army, shadow troopers are part of this army, they have black storm trooper like armor, but more versatile, made of Cortosis a lightsaber resistant mineral, making them ten times as hard to kill)
Zahlor charged into the room ahead, and a Shadow Trooper faded into view, (They have a cloak in their armor, all you see is the shadows on their armor floating in the air, well no but thats how i describe it so you can picture it.) He blocked its Sabre, "THIS IS A TRAP! EVERYONE OUT NOW, MOVE! HAN PREP THE SHIP! HAN? HAN?!"
Originally posted by Liquid_Fire
[]Yes, excatly, the OTHER thread, this is not that thread...so no Dark Jedi unless you can give me a good reason besides Its Cool, because inthe Star Wars universe, only 2 Sith, and 2 Dark Jedi MAYBE at a time. You didnt read the intro and rules did you...[]
[No..their armor is not ultra tough, just resistant to lighsabers, so you gotta bash on it more than once it get though. Resistant to lightsabers, not resistant to everything including a 20cm Laz Cannon. HEhehe Laz Cannon]
Zahlor ducked under a swing and fliped over the Shadow Trooper who sent a wave of force at him causing him to land on his back hard. He rolled out of the way just as the sabre plunged into the floor where he'd just been. A second Shadow Trooper faded into view, than a third. "JAVOUR! TAKE THE THIRD, KIM SOME HELP!" Zahlor was frantically fightning off both Troopers now, one of them swung and he ducked, rose and kicked him in the chest sendinh the Trooper staggering back, he spun to face the second trooper while he had time and its sabre raked across his chest, cutting through his armor, blood started to pour down Zahlor's chest, the wound wasn't deep, but it was bloody.
Problem one, you can't just "close" a wound, Jedi have nowhere near some of the powers they can get in some of the games.
Zahlor roared and lifted the Trooper right of the ground and hurled him across the room, he spun to face the one he'd kicked in the chest, he swung but his lightsabre glanced off its shoulder, [You have it get a direct hit to get through the armour] he blocked the troopers swing and ducked, performing an upper cut taking off one of the toopers legs. It screamed and fell to the ground, Zahlor finished it off with a stab through its eye piece.
Pazaak is a card game, wtf does that have to do with killing a Shadow Trooper? And I thought Atton was Dark, you cant just place a hand on their forehead and POOF their light again...you really need to learn the difference between real RPGing and a game like KOTOR. It's s good game, but it is not a literall RPG, your posts are full of faults like that. Look im not trying to be insulting or anything, but your posts are about as unrealistic as I've ever seen. You can start supressing Pain AFTER the battle, you think the tooper will just let him do that?