my story

it tuck a long time for what professor McGonagall had just said to him to sink in. after a long time harry asked professor McGonagall something that was troubling him. why hasn't someone already been made the new secret keeper? professor McGonagall responded someone has we were just waiting for him to arrive. the person we have picked is you harry we have been waring for you to arrive hear so that we could tack you to headquarters to preform the charm we would have gotten you sooner but we thought it best to let you have a little wile to your self before we send you head first back into the battle. we decided it was best because of your uncanny ability of escaping you know who. but if you would rather not I'm shore that someone else would do the job. harry fort for a moment and the said what do i have to do. after professor McGonagall had told harry everything that he would have to do harry agreed to go with her to number twelve grmmauld place to invoke the charm

my advice...if you have microsoft word you should use that first to do your spell checking. the detail could use a little more work. and you should think about writing huge chunks at a time so you have more time to add what you need instead of posting every four minutes or so. but it does have potential after you get use to it. keep it up.

hiya every1 this is me real story that was made up ok

As the days drew closer to going back to hogwarts, harry was lying there on a hot summers day waiting ,for mail to come hedwig came flutturing in from outside carring , pile of letters one with a pink enverlope, harry jumped out of bed to get the pinked everloped letter it read,

to harry
i think your the sweetet boyu ive ever met , i wish one day me and you coold be something

love from your secret admire

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That evening harry was feeding hedwig when uncle veron shouted,
" HARRY GET DOWN HERE AND MAKE US OUR TEA "

harry came stamping down the stairs saying i cant wait till i got back to the burrow then hogwarts,why do i have to make them tea he thought because i make them breckfast, and get the post , but now i have to make them breckfast, get their post but now make them tea harry thought.

Are two people writing this or something ???

whoever is writting isn't making any sense...

What??????????????I'm CONFUSED with this story. What is going on in this story? 😕 🤨

um...yea....what in the world is going here. it seems that u just went all the way back to the beginning. My advise, take ur time, sit down, and wright the story thats alittle more put together. Maybe wright at least 3 page's full of ideas then type it on the computer and pm it to us. then that way u don't half to think of stuff that just pops in ur head when ur typing the story to us on the computer

ignore this thread.. come and join mine (harry potter and the fulfilled prophecy) this was my sister writing here