Help Thread

If you need help with your writings, or you just need someone to read it then just ask me and i will get to it at once. just leave the name of the writing and where it is located. (if possible a link would help)

Ok, Saratn. I don't need your help writing this, but I want to know what you think. I aucutally respect you opinion.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2551947/1/

wtf are you talking about?

i don't actually mean help help...i mean like advice or corrections. and thanks Pie.

good job Pie. wasn't expecting star wars, but it was excellent. but the only advice i have for you is to make the chapters longer, (unless they do towards the later ones) and to add more detail (especially with the characters. well besides yoda). nothing else i could see wrong with.

Originally posted by Saratn
good job Pie. wasn't expecting star wars, but it was excellent. but the only advice i have for you is to make the chapters longer, (unless they do towards the later ones) and to add more detail (especially with the characters. well besides yoda). nothing else i could see wrong with.